Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

[QUOTE=WastedJamacan;26106295][media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1470986/Photos/mydrawing.jpg[/media] Scanner is not the best, but I would like a critiquing. Media'd for size.[/QUOTE] Any C&C on mine?

here i am happy with this [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/fc%20posterV2.png[/img_thumb]

[QUOTE=St33m;26102220]when im sleepless at night i draft out thousands of units to serve different roles in a fictional army. i call this one a "heavy support duckling" [editline]16th November 2010[/editline] also thanks[/QUOTE] Hey! I do the exact same thing! [editline]17th November 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=WastedJamacan;26111908]Any C&C on mine?[/QUOTE] Bad material definition, non-throught shading, quite off with anatomy, the cloth is not doing anything clothlike. If it's sposed to be hair, then it's worse. It's on squared paper. It's overall just so incredebly "meh" I'll do you redline once I get home.

In my class, websites are done first in art package and then dreamweaver. Good way to start atm. Posting this hear aswell since none if it is code yet. [media]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4129/5183742742_458279c688_b.jpg I like this version better [url]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4144/5183774212_7ecb97c292_b.jpg[/url][/media]

[QUOTE=Rusty100;26110219][img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/fc%20poster.png[/img_thumb] what else should i add or change [editline]17th November 2010[/editline] i tried the names on the fingers but it did not look very good[/QUOTE] fiiiiisttt [editline]17th November 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=MisterM;26112351]In my class, websites are done first in art package and then dreamweaver. Good way to start atm. Posting this hear aswell since none if it is code yet. [media]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4129/5183742742_458279c688_b.jpg I like this version better [url]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4144/5183774212_7ecb97c292_b.jpg[/url][/media][/QUOTE] There's a crapload of gradients. Sure, it looks really shiny but I'm not sure it's a good thing if overused. Also, I'd make the navbar font smaller.

[IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/1zb76s5.jpg[/IMG] Character again again, same story. Now with a little more laziness.

[QUOTE=PLing;26112780]fiiiiisttt [/QUOTE] he doesn't make a fist in the movie and a fist would be like empowerment, it wouldn't show the pain [editline]17th November 2010[/editline] this is my final iteration [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/fc%20posterv3.png[/img]

I painted a Planet in photoshop :3 [URL=http://img545.imageshack.us/i/planetart.jpg/][IMG]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/5885/planetart.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

I started doodling, this came out. The other hand looks ffffffffff [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/713/skifimieesss.png[/img] as does the whole pic to be honest

COME ON NOMAD, go GO GO

Maximum artistic. [editline]17th November 2010[/editline] awww ninja'd on the crysis pun. anywho...... [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2hhn95k.png[/IMG]

tHEY WON'T KNOW WHAT HIT 'EM HEH HE- CAN IT PSYCHO

[QUOTE=Greeneyes;26116203]Maximum artistic. [editline]17th November 2010[/editline] awww ninja'd on the crysis pun. anywho...... [img_thumb]http://i51.tinypic.com/2hhn95k.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Neither. Proceed working until you develop atleast something athestically pleasing not something that's a generic flash game horribad colourshaded doodle.

agree with pespi

[QUOTE=Greeneyes;26116203]Maximum artistic. [editline]17th November 2010[/editline] awww ninja'd on the crysis pun. anywho...... [img_thumb]http://i51.tinypic.com/2hhn95k.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] You need to watch WAY less anime before you start on anything creative yourself. As anime more often than not is the exact opposite of original and worthwhile.

anime drawing should be banned unless you're already proficient with regular drawing and anatomy [editline]18th November 2010[/editline] hey guys do u like my anime dra [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/anime%20wwWw.png[/img] WOOPS LOl i stabbed my hand with my giant sword!!!

see, take rusty as your artist and you're off.

A speedpaint(ish) I did to illustrate me short story. It has 'some' mistakes, but atleast I learned how to do rain and accidently velvet. Not satisfied with the colour scheme either. [IMg_thumb]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/321/d/9/story_of_daedalus_by_infernomonster-d331jaj.png[/IMg_thumb]

[img]http://gyazo.com/000f33c07ee7bafb2fbfdf553e93fc47.png[/img]

Filter rape :geno:

[QUOTE=QuickSnapz;26122117][img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/000f33c07ee7bafb2fbfdf553e93fc47.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] It's amazing piece of art. hard to believe you drew all that. I'm truly impressed, have artistic.

[QUOTE=QuickSnapz;26122117][img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/000f33c07ee7bafb2fbfdf553e93fc47.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] utterly astounding effort! really, we should dedicate an entire subforum for your endevours! HELL WE SHOULD DEDICATE THE SITE!

[IMG]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/5198/wipd.png[/IMG] WIP from tonight

Update (I work so painfully slowly): [img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/3306/practicewip.jpg[/img] [b]Reference:[/b] [url]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs604.snc4/58433_10150262814720321_658415320_14462199_5769096_n.jpg[/url] I'm having incredible difficulty positioning the eyes. I can paint them to a standard I am very happy with but the actual positioning of them is horrible. This isn't helped by the fact that the eyes in the reference picture are actually "derp" as it is. Could some artistic and wonderfully helpful soul take a look at my .psd and sketch on some lines of where they think the iris and pupils and lids should be positioned? I would be eternally grateful because I've already wasted hours trying to get it right and am getting very frustrated. [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/practice.psd[/url]

[QUOTE=Pespi;26120881]A speedpaint(ish) I did to illustrate me short story. It has 'some' mistakes, but atleast I learned how to do rain and accidently velvet. Not satisfied with the colour scheme either. [IMg_thumb]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/321/d/9/story_of_daedalus_by_infernomonster-d331jaj.png[/IMg_thumb][/QUOTE] You're getting better. [editline]17th November 2010[/editline] Composition-wise

[QUOTE=Pespi;26116809]Neither. Proceed working until you develop atleast something athestically pleasing not something that's a generic flash game horribad colourshaded doodle.[/QUOTE] How is the game generic? I'm the only person in the world to know how my game plays and I'm quite sure there isn't much like it. [QUOTE=St33m;26117471]You need to watch WAY less anime before you start on anything creative yourself. As anime more often than not is the exact opposite of original and worthwhile.[/QUOTE] I don't watch anime, and they weren't meant to be anime. But hey anything with black lines and cellshaded is called anime these days. I could spend ages using the brush tool making something awesome but I would have to do that for every frame of animation, something simple and cell shaded, is much easier to work with. I'm more of a landscape artist can i have some pointers to what isn't generic?

[QUOTE=QuickSnapz;26122117][img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/000f33c07ee7bafb2fbfdf553e93fc47.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] i cant see any trace of you doing Live Tracing. Amazing work!

[QUOTE=Lazore;26125245]i cant see any trace of you doing Live Tracing. Amazing work![/QUOTE] I'd surprised if you did when it's the Photoshop cutout filter.

[QUOTE=dgg;26125861]I'd surprised if you did when it's the Photoshop cutout filter.[/QUOTE] [url]http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/sarcasm[/url]

I'm sure he gets it.