Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

[QUOTE=slinkman;26399337][IMG_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/hyk.png[/IMG_thumb][/QUOTE] Are you fucking serious?

[img]http://gyazo.com/0d072058f9ae2d7e80a4e3da0d1f39bf.png[/img] This is as far as I could get on my own, but now I'm kind of lost as to what I should do next, I was thinking about coloring it or something, but I wouldn't know where to start and there's a lot things wrong with it, but I just can't put my finger on them. If possible I would enjoy some CC because this is my first real attempt at "anatomy" rather than something that's a cartoony noodle arm guy, and I'd love to get better at this.

I know it's a hard spot for me always, as I always get stuck there. choose out a good pallette and on a new layer with the mdoe set to blend colour it. I haven't ever actually done that. Anatomy wise it's far from correct. It looks like a stylisation, and it does it well. You just look at it and accept it, cause it works its way out well. posemaniacs.com 30 second pose thing, try and draw out the entire body to practise anatomy. Id' also appreciate if you people post some profile images of gurls and guys. I discoverd I can't draw profile. [IMG_thumb]http://i54.tinypic.com/a2rm9c.png[/IMG_thumb] here's one of two linearts I'm currently working on Redline on the outter area of the upper face so it looks pretty, I wnat to know what areas I do to deep and what I do to high [B]EDIT:[/B] [IMG_thumb]http://i56.tinypic.com/2m2b7mo.png[/IMG_thumb] How's this one? [B]EDIT:[/B] [IMG_THUMB]http://i53.tinypic.com/verqc7.png[/IMG_THUMB] this?

[QUOTE=Mr. Scorpio;26394019]You do realize that sometimes people just aren't looking for flaws and mayhaps they just think your stuff looks good? They don't have to be either stupid or lying.[/QUOTE] Yupp, but since I'm on such a (incredibly) low skill level I know there are tons of stuff that needs improvement in anything I do, thus I know there is tons of stuff they could pick out, so if they don't pick out even the major flaws I can't take them seriously. I simply just can't take praise very seriously, deep down I like it and crave for it like any other person, but consciously I don't like it at all.

exacly what dgg said above.

[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/shittycharcoal.png[/img] I never finished this because I felt that after I had done the two-tone I had fucked up the proportions too much to really care about the end result. [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/teethsmall.png[/img] Trying my hand at minimalist posters. Give me some tips! [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/thelifeaquaticsmall.png[/img]

I won't say anything about the nature morte, cause you don't give shits about it. The minimalist posters however. They are both bad. They feel boring, bland and just like they look like: some few random stuff threw on them with little planning and dirt overlay done over them. The text on first one looks terribad thanks to the colour conflict and font, plus those teeth cut out too suddenly on left row. I think you were trying to simulate lips, but if you didn't do that on the bottom row why do it on the top row? The background red is too bright. The second one is better colour wise but the beard looks horrible, it's too jaggedy, should look more like hair. Plus the detail level of beard and hat don't match. Composition wise it is quite irritating for whatever reason. I can't give you any tips how to improve other than keep experimenting. [editline]30th November 2010[/editline] Also a sheet of paper I keep under me [del]laptop[/del] GAMING RIG for doodling and aquiring various stains [IMG]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/334/0/c/doodlol_sheet_by_infernomonster-d33x0w6.png[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4644/38208745.png[/IMG] I tried :v:

[QUOTE=onox37;26401129][img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/shittycharcoal.png[/img_thumb] I never finished this because I felt that after I had done the two-tone I had fucked up the proportions too much to really care about the end result. [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/teethsmall.png[/img_thumb] Trying my hand at minimalist posters. Give me some tips! [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/thelifeaquaticsmall.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] good concepts, terrible fonts/titles and arrangement

[QUOTE=Bacteria;26401903][img_thumb]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4644/38208745.png[/img_thumb] I tried :v:[/QUOTE] Stop trying yo do those digital drawings with whatever you do they are literally the worst things that are possible to do with a computer. Draw traditionally, there you won't have to use a mouse and you can actually learn something.

[QUOTE=broo20;26399861]Are you fucking serious?[/QUOTE] No. That's why I drew it.

[QUOTE=Bacteria;26401903][img_thumb]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4644/38208745.png[/img_thumb] I tried :v:[/QUOTE] Yeah, uh, didn't they suggest that... [QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26405204]Stop trying yo do those digital drawings with whatever you do they are literally the worst things that are possible to do with a computer. Draw traditionally, there you won't have to use a mouse and you can actually learn something.[/QUOTE] Yeah I'm pretty sure this isn't the first time people have said this. Bacteria, if you're going to post here why don't you listen to advice? Don't just discard it and draw something that has had literally no improvement whatsoever. Listen to what people are saying here, if you want to actually improve, rather than just artisticly stagnate. You could genuinely become good at this digital stuff if you first learn the basics and how to draw traditionally properly first!

finished it. It's kind of half-assed, but I got bored [img]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/334/a/d/soldier_and_pyro_by_luna133-d33xv8b.png[/img]

Great work. I like how half of the stuff that gets put in this thread is better than most of the stuff that gets its own threads.

:iia:

[QUOTE=Bacteria;26401903][img_thumb]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4644/38208745.png[/img_thumb] I tried :v:[/QUOTE] When I first started learning how to draw I went out and bought a tablet. Luckily after about four months I came to my senses and started working exclusively in traditional mediums, my art drastically improved. Traditional mediums are far simpler to use, allowing you to focus more on creating than just using the tool. What I would do is go out to walmart, buy a sketchbook, some pencils, and start working on life drawing. As with anything in art, digital painting takes a strong foundation in traditional mediums and methods. You can't walk before you crawl. [QUOTE=Detlef;26410070]finished it. It's kind of half-assed, but I got bored [img_thumb]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/334/a/d/soldier_and_pyro_by_luna133-d33xv8b.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] My only criticism would be the soldier's rocket launcher, it seems a little stubby. Otherwise it's wonderful, the soldier's pose and expression are spot on. And the use of colors is just excellent!

Traditional isn't exacly simpler, cause they lack ctrlz and layers and lots of fancy tools that make digital artist life seem like cheating.

You can't imagine how many times I automatically reached for ctrlz while drawing with pencils

[QUOTE=Detlef;26410070]finished it. It's kind of half-assed, but I got bored [img_thumb]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/334/a/d/soldier_and_pyro_by_luna133-d33xv8b.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Great atmosphere in the lightning, but the atmosphere as a whole is kinda broken, I think the main reason for that is that there is a hell lot of snow, but they are completely untouched by it in every way, and are completely dry. It crashes in a bad way. I also don't understand why blue gas is coming out of the pyro's flamethrower. Other than that, just keep drawing, the bazooka is tucked in to fit into the image, making it look like someone forcefully compressed it like a tin can. The soldier pose is pretty stiff, especially the arm, it lacks joints and flexibility. The grenades are too big and round and is for whatever reason not touched by the lightning from the ground and the left side, only affected by the light from the right side. The top part of the pyro's suite is also pretty blocky and thus very undetailed in the lineart, if you know what I mean. But eh, it's all pretty much stuff that just improves by drawing and drawing and drawing. Overall a really nice piece.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26410388]Traditional isn't exacly simpler, cause they lack ctrlz and layers and lots of fancy tools that make digital artist life seem like cheating.[/QUOTE] Digital art is easier because of those things, but having those extra things also make it more complicated.

It's somewhat coming along. [IMG]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/334/6/4/headphones_girl_wip_by_infernomonster-d33y807.png[/IMG] I have to figure out the lighting in the eyes and BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD I think it's my first time mutilating a girl. I feel horrible and dirty thanks to that :ohdear:

Particle system I coded. [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1531165/Particle.exe[/url] Had some fun coding a particle system. Implemented some cool forces. As I'm using some fake 2D AA, don't throw too many rockets at ones! Use 'a,s,d,f,g,h,j,k,l,;' to shoot rockets and watch them explode! DISCLAIMER: The executable does not contain any malicious program or installation. Should you encounter any difficulty with your computer after running this executable, however, I will hold no responsibility. You are using the provided program at your own risk.

[img]http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/9356/drawingsmall.jpg[/img] giant derp eyes

mouth makes it go herp a derp. The right eye is a bit crooked, I'll do a redline tomorrow since I'll be doing paintings anyway all day. No to pay tribute to Leslie Nielsen by watching AIRPLANE!

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26412487]It's somewhat coming along. [img_thumb]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/334/6/4/headphones_girl_wip_by_infernomonster-d33y807.png[/img_thumb] I have to figure out the lighting in the eyes and BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD I think it's my first time mutilating a girl. I feel horrible and dirty thanks to that :ohdear:[/QUOTE] You'll get used to it. You'd better anyway, because it looks freakin' cool. Besides, you can draw mutilated men right? Don't be sexist! :v: Looking forward to your final version of that picture, I bet it's gonna be fuckin' badass.

-Snip-. mixed something up.

While normally, I don't post my drawings, I want to know where I can improve. I'm pretty sure that most people in this thread would consider it terrible, but I want to know where I can improve, and where I could start if I wanted to color this digitally. [media]http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/2960/warmp.png[/media] Also, I'm aware that the legs are terrible.

decided to finished this 'painting' of mine while working on a coding homework [URL=http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9451/64058245.png][IMG]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6461/88530302.th.png[/IMG][/URL]

[QUOTE=Bacteria;26401903][img_thumb]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4644/38208745.png[/img_thumb] I tried :v:[/QUOTE] No, you didn't, if you're set on doing digipainting, look up some tuts, or at least don't post your art here.

[QUOTE=broo20;26422610]No, you didn't, if you're set on doing digipainting, look up some tuts, or at least don't post your art here.[/QUOTE] What the shit you on about dawg. By all means he must post his stuff here if he is to improve, how else are we going to guide him and monitor his process. I'd say he has some untapped potential. [editline]1st December 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=Communist Cake;26419855]While normally, I don't post my drawings, I want to know where I can improve. I'm pretty sure that most people in this thread would consider it terrible, but I want to know where I can improve, and where I could start if I wanted to color this digitally. [media]http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/2960/warmp.png[/media] Also, I'm aware that the legs are terrible.[/QUOTE] Proportions, anatomy, perspective everything is wrong, and your overall technique is skippng quite a few steps, as expected from your level But you allready know that so I'm telling you to focus more on drawing people without suits for a while, but you should get some practise on easier stuff before. [url]www.drawspace.com[/url] and when you are going to draw your next human, consult and study some proportion sheets. [editline]1st December 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=Communist Cake;26419855]While normally, I don't post my drawings, I want to know where I can improve. I'm pretty sure that most people in this thread would consider it terrible, but I want to know where I can improve, and where I could start if I wanted to color this digitally. [media]http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/2960/warmp.png[/media] Also, I'm aware that the legs are terrible.[/QUOTE] Proportions, anatomy, perspective everything is wrong, and your overall technique is skippng quite a few steps, as expected from your level But you allready know that so I'm telling you to focus more on drawing people without suits for a while, but you should get some practise on easier stuff before. [url]www.drawspace.com[/url] and when you are going to draw your next human, consult and study some proportion sheets.