Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition>
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[QUOTE=fylth;22885415][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4623/baddreams.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
The hair whores too much attention. So much, you can't tell it's hair, or that there is a person in there.
Otherwise it's great.
[IMG]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/174/9/e/Stalker___Snork_by_SuperKusoKao.png[/IMG]
Did this a couple days ago.
I looove Snorks.
[QUOTE=dalach;22701710]Yes. If you haven't noticed, I adore her.[/QUOTE]
wow, last time i saw her, her face was just a few pixels wide.
she sure has changed....
but the series should've died a loooonngggg time ago IMO
Is that a dildo on his nose?
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/yush.png[/img]
How is it for my first try at this type of thing?
It's difference clouds with a change of hue.
Shit, I did a whole roundabout way of it
:saddowns:
Looks great.
Well, I'm picking up another project, I haven't been in the thread in ages. Just started a bit ago, used a pose from pose-maniacs <3 as a base and went from there. I'm going for a post apocalyptic ordeal.
[IMG]http://i48.tinypic.com/2v328ex.jpg[/IMG]
She's not wearing any pants as of yet :ohdear:
[QUOTE=Dalto11;22913566]Well, I'm picking up another project, I haven't been in the thread in ages. Just started a bit ago, used a pose from pose-maniacs <3 as a base and went from there. I'm going for a post apocalyptic ordeal.
She's not wearing any pants as of yet :ohdear:[/QUOTE]
She's also anorexic and has no cleavage whatsoever. I'm taking cleavage into account because with that open shirt you clearly wanted to show it.
[QUOTE=DarkSpirit05er;22921913]She's also anorexic and has no cleavage whatsoever. I'm taking cleavage into account because with that open shirt you clearly wanted to show it.[/QUOTE]
Actually, I just wanted her to have a coat over a thin, worn under-shirt. But I'll make her cleavage a bit more apparent. I mean, its a post apocalyptic world, of course she's going to be malnourished.
[url]http://www.esnips.com/doc/7496e248-b8b6-464d-8f36-04bd13c345e3/Nonequanimity[/url]
Some orchestral soundtrack stuff :P
[QUOTE=wjpl;22931571][img]http://imgur.com/w5fpD.jpg[/img]
yawn[/QUOTE]
Why did the tire randomly come off?
[QUOTE=onox37;22931758]Why did the tire randomly come off?[/QUOTE]
No idea.
[QUOTE=wjpl;22931881]No idea.[/QUOTE]
You need to pay attention to detail mah boy.
The door also wouldn't come off if the explosion wasn't inside the car.
OK, ima just poor indie film compositor :O
But for srsly, these are valuable remarks. Won't make this mistake next time.
[QUOTE=wjpl;22932119]OK, ima just poor indie film compositor :O
But for srsly, these are valuable remarks. Won't make this mistake next time.[/QUOTE]
Me too friend. Me too.
[QUOTE=Dalto11;22927888]Actually, I just wanted her to have a coat over a thin, worn under-shirt. But I'll make her cleavage a bit more apparent. I mean, its a post apocalyptic world, of course she's going to be malnourished.[/QUOTE]
Looks better with big breasts. :buddy:
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[QUOTE=No_0ne;22918380][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/551/25070331.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
Your proportions are improving-ish.
you need to learn how to express dynamics more belivably, like that casing flying out.
Also trigger safety, OH GOD THE PAIN!
Critiques on this WiP please?
[img]http://uppix.net/5/e/0/fae825a9610bc4ffc5f9fbcaabdba.jpg[/img]
I have only shown it to friends not especially learned in digital art, so I need some harsher criticism.
As you can probably guess, only stuff below the eyebrows is anyway near done.
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I'll make the picture smaller if required. I probably won't post the final version this big anyway, it just makes it easier to work with at a big size.
Pretty cool. Shading is prettyyy coool
Line art is jagged to hell and has some simple stupid ass mistakes or unknowledges here there. Eg where lower lip meets teeth.
Now that I think about it, lineart doesn't have depth, it kills all the depth that you manage to create with shading.
Neck rings are out of perspective, you didn't draw them out fully, you just guessed. And guesses are only good when you play "Is it a boy or a girl"
The corner of the mouth needs some detail, it looks undetailed compared to the lips. Add some folds or some shit. Lower jaw is fucked up, I suggest a remake. Draw out shapes this time, so you know how they should algin.
Something about the shading overall is annoying, besides the fact that you can't decide for your life which way light is coming from.
Maybe the fact that it looks something done in 90's renders of 3d, it's too smooth, looks like it's not done with a brush and it gives it a really outdated and un-fresh feeling. Might be just because it's a WIP.
That's all for now. I'm gnna go back nt me corner and cry.
Actually the neck ring IS in perspective.
neck rings I meant. The ones that are around the neck. and no, they're fucke up.
That earthworm Jim looks pretty awesome so far.
I imagine you'll fix up any problems when you have the entire thing done.
Been in the business lately of making signs for the Office Depot I work at. The corporate signage is terrible, so my manager lets me make things that look a little nicer.
That also means I get to use my own photos if I want. :haw:
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/OD_Sign.jpg[/IMG]
The photo I used:
[IMG]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2577/3918034961_a28d500408.jpg[/IMG]
Thanks for the detailed critique. This is only my 3rd ever digital art piece so I'm still on the sharp learning curve.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;22934181]besides the fact that you can't decide for your life which way light is coming from. [/QUOTE]
Deep blue light from the right, normal light from in-front and slightly left is what I imagine.
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