Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

[img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/6524/jensendetails.png[/img] Adam Jensen bitches.

'who the fuck is Adam Jensen and why are we degraded to this "bitches" when he's around? [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2pq5h6r.png[/IMG] I have no fucking idea where I wanted to go with that so can anyone redline me some nice pose or something? I'll try and troubleshoot the other mistakes myself tomorrow morning but the pose is main concern. [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=Talkbox;26530288][img_thumb]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs594.ash2/154666_1504360732569_1340767517_31170638_2357386_n.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Yeah, nice angle man. [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=Talkbox;26530288][img_thumb]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs594.ash2/154666_1504360732569_1340767517_31170638_2357386_n.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Yeah, nice angle man.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26532339]'who the fuck is Adam Jensen and why are we degraded to this "bitches" when he's around? [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] [img_thumb]http://i53.tinypic.com/2pq5h6r.png[/img_thumb] I have no fucking idea where I wanted to go with that so can anyone redline me some nice pose or something? I'll try and troubleshoot the other mistakes myself tomorrow morning but the pose is main concern. [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] Yeah, nice angle man. [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] Yeah, nice angle man.[/QUOTE] lol nice angle,, whatever its only a doodle PS some paintings [IMG]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs958.snc4/75112_1488678740529_1340767517_31139952_2347213_n.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs1161.snc4/150371_1466398663541_1340767517_31103654_2030465_n.jpg[/IMG] SELF PORTRAIT [IMG]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs765.snc4/66564_1438874375451_1340767517_31057139_1758238_n.jpg[/IMG]

your anatomy ruins your work completely.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26533875]your anatomy takes a dump at your works your values are nice.[/QUOTE] lol what? i didnt quite understand that [QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26533875]your anatomy ruins your work completely.[/QUOTE] lollllllll how exactly?

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26533875]your anatomy ruins your work completely.[/QUOTE] I disagree completely. It's very stylized and the color swatch is fantastic.

[QUOTE=Talkbox;26533919]lol what? i didnt quite understand that lollllllll how exactly?[/QUOTE] Lolll i dunno

[QUOTE=JoeyZ;26534459]Lolll i dunno[/QUOTE] HI :))))) i think hes talking about the peace and love doodle i did with the brown felt tip the reason the anatomys fucked is because its very stylized, which is effective imo.

[QUOTE=Talkbox;26534697]HI :))))) i think hes talking about the peace and love doodle i did with the brown felt tip the reason the anatomys fucked is because its very stylized, which is effective imo.[/QUOTE] he gets grumpy sumtimes lol xDDDD

[QUOTE=JoeyZ;26534808]he gets grumpy sumtimes lol xDDDD[/QUOTE] lol i thought he was autistic for a second

[QUOTE=Talkbox;26533919]lol what? i didnt quite understand that lollllllll how exactly?[/QUOTE] Your faces are pretty ugly/resemble chimps more than people. Work on that. Fiddling with actually photoshopping something: [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/766302/New%20Folder/pleasestandby.png[/img] [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=z0nk3d;26531712][img_thumb]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/6524/jensendetails.png[/img_thumb] Adam Jensen bitches.[/QUOTE] He looks black

[IMG]http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w41/FlippR/yep.png[/IMG]

aight guys. [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7346219/Cartoon%20style/hoodie.jpg[/img] Got a load of stuff in this style. Reckon it's worth posting a thread of 7 or 8 of this sort of thing or should I just post the rest here?

Made this in a physics engine. I often made patterns and such like this, but don't tend to share them. [url]http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8360/lightsf.png[/url]

Looks like random lines to me.

[QUOTE=AbysalRush;26539130]Looks like random lines to me.[/QUOTE] It's white light, refracted into rainbows, then split into separate directions.

[QUOTE=Ninjas Kill;26539862]It's white light, refracted into rainbows, then split into separate directions.[/QUOTE] no its just lines

this is refraction: [img]http://mirror-uk-rb1.gallery.hd.org/_exhibits/natural-science/prism-and-refraction-of-light-into-rainbow-AJHD.jpg[/img] [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] you get a continuous spectrum of light, not discrete lines... [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] you get a continuous spectrum of light, not discrete lines...

whooooa, dark side of the moon

[QUOTE=onox37;26534295]I disagree completely. It's very stylized and the color swatch is fantastic.[/QUOTE] colours are nice but stylised? PFft Fuck no, it's just a failed attempt, he can't do facial proportions to save his life. He doesn't even know about how head is shaped. I hate that "it's stylised excuse" drop the lols, man the fuck up and learn some anatomy. [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=FlippR;26536007][img_thumb]http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w41/FlippR/yep.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] cute and all but use a larger brush. The fangs look all murky and horribad. Also think about the objevts shape a bit more, like the lip shadow on the fang. Nose area looks horrid [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=Talkbox;26534955]lol i thought he was autistic for a second[/QUOTE] Yes, you can play me without an amplifier

current work in progress, i know the hair is horrible, i'm terrible at hair, but what else needs improvement? [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/WIP6.png[/img]

[QUOTE=worm;26541847]current work in progress, i know the hair is horrible, i'm terrible at hair, but what else needs improvement? [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/WIP6.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] The art style is actually quite impressive. Need some work on the overall facial structure though. - [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Bea_Drawing_14.JPG[/img] Been doing improvements; values will be added later

[QUOTE=worm;26541847]current work in progress, i know the hair is horrible, i'm terrible at hair, but what else needs improvement? [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/WIP6.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Face starts to early, eyes are somewhat in the middle of head. Nose is crooked and so is mouth. IT looks like a male Boxxy that has gotten a facelift with a brick. I'd say the jacket needs more values it's tood ark to make anything out. you use a reference aren't you?

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26542149]Face starts to early, eyes are somewhat in the middle of head. Nose is crooked and so is mouth. I'd say the jacket needs more values it's tood ark to make anything out. you use a reference aren't you?[/QUOTE] i have a couple of magazines in front of me, but most of it is just a bit of a doodle, so to speak.

[QUOTE=powerchu;26541933]The art style is actually quite impressive. Need some work on the overall facial structure though. - [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Bea_Drawing_14.JPG[/img_thumb] WHOLE RIGHT HAND IS BABY!' Nose seems a bit crooked and shoudn't the cheeks go a bit more inward if the mouth is open wide enough for a medium sized rooster? Been doing improvements; values will be added later[/QUOTE] [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=worm;26542161]i have a couple of magazines in front of me, but most of it is just a bit of a doodle, so to speak.[/QUOTE] I can say that I quite am fond of the palette, but something is fishy there. [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=powerchu;26541933]The art style is actually quite impressive. Need some work on the overall facial structure though. - [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Bea_Drawing_14.JPG[/img_thumb] Been doing improvements; values will be added later[/QUOTE] Don't focus too much on lineart- you're painting not drawing.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26542168]I can say that I quite am fond of the palette, but something is fishy there.[/QUOTE] what's fishy about it?

I have no idea, but there's an hunch. I won't look into it because my dog is in a good mood today. [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] ITT BESTEST TURORIAL EVER XD XXD XD [url]http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=elbow+tutorial#/d1cv41h[/url] I DONT NKOW WHAT ITT EMANS BUT THIS IS BEST TUTORIAL GOOD [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] ITT BESTEST TURORIAL EVER XD XXD XD [url]http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=elbow+tutorial#/d1cv41h[/url] I DONT NKOW WHAT ITT EMANS BUT THIS IS BEST TUTORIAL GOOD

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;26542333]I have no idea, but there's an hunch. I won't look into it because my dog is in a good mood today. [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] ITT BESTEST TURORIAL EVER XD XXD XD [url]http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=elbow+tutorial#/d1cv41h[/url] I DONT NKOW WHAT ITT EMANS BUT THIS IS BEST TUTORIAL GOOD [editline]7th December 2010[/editline] ITT BESTEST TURORIAL EVER XD XXD XD [url]http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=elbow+tutorial#/d1cv41h[/url] I DONT NKOW WHAT ITT EMANS BUT THIS IS BEST TUTORIAL GOOD[/QUOTE] oh god.

I need suggestions on how to make this picture seem more negative. [img]http://i639.photobucket.com/albums/uu119/ryanwarguy/Vanitas.png[/img] I thought of shrouding the edges with dark clouds and tried it, didn't feel right, any suggestions?

[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/xgbipi.png[/IMG] I do'nt think it can get any more negative than that