Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

collar bone!

What's wrong with it?

Nothing, besides it just isn't there aparrotly.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23024713][IMG]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/182/4/2/Nerfmaverick_WIP3_by_Infernomonster.jpg[/IMG] I am about 70% done. Another 20% will consist of the other side of the gun and adding a ring and 10% will be the final coat.[/QUOTE] pff, and here you told me you weren't very good with this stuff.

My first time doing anything like that :c

[QUOTE=Maya2008;23040245]finished this one:[/QUOTE] Shoulda probably said this earlier but the hanging arm is too long. You should have put some foreshortening on the upper arm, since I don't think anyone would hold the gun with completely stiff arm.

zup [img]http://www.filedump.net/dumped/troglodyte1278088551.png[/img]

tell me if i need to fix anything [IMG]http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/4600/rachelprogress6.jpg[/IMG]

Her nose and chin look a bit too big making her jaw area look a tad masculine. The eyes seem a bit flat. I love the quality of the shading though it is nice.

The eyes are flat compared to the rest of the shading and the lips need a better highlight.

[IMG]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8573/rachelprogress7.jpg[/IMG] better?

Possibly not creative but I need some input. I made some ambient noise for a [I]possible[/I] mod me and some buds might make later on. It's not perfect and I plan to make it much longer and possibly loop. Sounds are used from source because that is the engine we will use if this mod materializes. The mood is supposed to be one of isolation, desperation, and survival. Crits appreciated. [URL="http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6092109/ambience.wav"]Click here[/URL]

Try this topic my good sir: [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=955481[/url] Will listen later, someone is watching TV in here and too lazy to get my headset.

It's not really music though. :raise:

Well, I expected it to be more than just a loop of the same wind noises the source engine uses now that I listened to it as I couldn't a minute ago. When you went into describing mood I was expecting a bit more depth to the ambient track.

Which is what I'm trying to achieve, I'm no pro at sounds and I would like Facepunch's suggestions :buddy:

I just think the music thread will have people experienced more in the subject of making sounds though I am sure they'd look here too. I don't really do music so can't really help myself much. Good luck finishing your track though. :buddy:

Thanks man! Hopefully I can get some good emotion in it.

[img]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/7e9200first.png[/img] My very first drawing using a graphic tablet-That ended up to be George Bush. BONUS: I unintentionally made it in avatar format, in case anyone wants this profanity as their picture.. (80 x 80 px)

[QUOTE=Fenriswolf;23059610]Possibly not creative but I need some input. I made some ambient noise for a [I]possible[/I] mod me and some buds might make later on. It's not perfect and I plan to make it much longer and possibly loop. Sounds are used from source because that is the engine we will use if this mod materializes. The mood is supposed to be one of isolation, desperation, and survival. Crits appreciated. [URL="http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6092109/ambience.wav"]Click here[/URL][/QUOTE] Too much shit going on at the same time, you should make it more random and with longer gaps, possibly have variations on the wind too.

Here is a newer version that I think is better. [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6092109/ambience.wav[/url] Your right about too much going on at once and I'll try and fix that when I have more time.

[IMG]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4080/4755245803_88c2c846bd_z.jpg[/IMG] done i guess

I know. It's awful, I don't know what I'm doing wrong T_T also, please please look at it up close, you can't see anything when it's small... [img_thumb]http://imgur.com/b5Bcr.jpg[/img_thumb] also Adio, I admire you :saddowns:

[IMG]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/159/f/9/Uploading____by_Silverpaperplate.jpg[/IMG] Blah my new sketchbook has awful paper. EDIT: I don't remember if I already posted so bear with me.

[IMG]http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac272/fnj-01/scan0001-5.jpg[/IMG] I don't have a style :saddowns:

Getting a style takes years. Your sketches are pretty good though, I like your grasp on facial expressions.

aparrotly he has a style.

Dude, it's "apparently", you keep reminding me of parrots.

I'm making an 8-bit cover of a song, so far I've made about 30 seconds. It's a cover of Knee Deep by Job for a Cowboy, a death metal band. Here's the original: [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xVzyT-gWQjc[/media] If anyone wants me to, I could post a sample of what I have so far, if anyone could tell me a site I can upload it to. There are probably a lot I could do better, and it would be nice if anyone could tell me what to improve, and how. :v: What I have so far I'm happy with, but the opinion of other people is important to progress. I'm considering adding vocals too, if it turns out good enough.

[QUOTE=DarkSpirit05er;23076744]Dude, it's "apparently", you keep reminding me of parrots.[/QUOTE] [IMG]http://lh3.ggpht.com/_HSt0xpuYbOo/TC-pYud5fbI/AAAAAAAADSw/6gA_9RlW8kU/s640/parrot.png[/IMG]