Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

[QUOTE=Detlef;27316698]Holy shit this is what I needed. You are right in almost every aspect, though there are some things in the story that doesn't make sense now, but will later (flashbacks and such) And yeah I haven't been giving it as much thought as I probably should. Planning takes time and I hate not getting pages done so I guess I sort of rush it. Afraid that the readers will lose interest probably. And about the characters, yes yes I am horrible at drawing them unique. I know that and I'm really struggling with it, and as for outfits, yes they will change, just give it some time. Actually to be honest I haven't given the comic very much planning at all. I came up with a basic plot this summer and just went along with it with little to no planning. I should't have done that but I didn't think so many people would actually read it. But overall the comic needs time. It's only been 41 pages. I am abit overwhelmed, I never get that long and detailed critique. But thanks I know I needed it. But uhm, what do you mean that if you clothed the characters in the above comic alike you would not be able to tell them apart? You don't know what the gasmask guy actually looks like.[/QUOTE] He means in terms of proportions etc. They're the same size and shape and neither have defining physical features such as scars or say, a missing arm.

[QUOTE=dookster;27316885]He means in terms of proportions etc. They're the same size and shape and neither have defining physical features such as scars or say, a missing arm.[/QUOTE] They are not the same size

[QUOTE=exhale77;27315147]I give up on this, it's good enough. Some Combine propaganda. [img_thumb]http://i.cubeupload.com/G65zsv.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] I like how the filters on the helmets subliminally double as a chain (often the type found on bikes and necklaces). Whether you intended that or not, sends a really cool message.

First time drawing a dog, the head looks a little big in the lips, and small above the ear, but what else? [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/rsz_3dsc_2316.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=Detlef;27315062]No I mean like generally, I post loads of stuff in this thread but it never gets any c&c. I want it and I think I deserve it.[/QUOTE] Sure, I can give you some once I wake up.

[QUOTE=Detlef;27314905]why, oh why do I never get critique. Am I not pretty enough is that it?[/QUOTE] here's some critiqué: what's up with your Zs? why do you have lines through them? sketch or not? it's not right.

[QUOTE=kevlar jens;27324329]here's some critiqué: what's up with your Zs? why do you have lines through them? sketch or not? it's not right.[/QUOTE] There goes me ever buying dr. pepper for you again.

just kidding i love your Zs they are the best i'm just envious

It's kind of funny that you mention crosses through Z's. The Zodiac killer did that.

[IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/ohpjjp.png[/IMG] Now to figure out what to do with her next. Also no references used what so ever, this is from head.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27324912][img_thumb]http://i56.tinypic.com/ohpjjp.png[/img_thumb] Now to figure out what to do with her next. Also no references used what so ever, this is from head.[/QUOTE] Her waist is too short, the belly button is too far down, rib cage too wide

I had no fucking idea waist had lenght. Fixing it.

I´m not gonna waist my time explaining it.

[IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/6z3b6g.png[/IMG] Fuck it, it looks like Eddie Izzard. Fuck your shit, people never get famous for getting shit half-way done. Look at OJ simpson, he woudn't be that famous if he only killed half a wife, now would he? [IMG]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/010/d/a/arrr_by_infernomonster-d36umc2.png[/IMG]

Detlef, try changing the 'camera' angle of some of the scenes. So that it's not always looking straight at them.

tiny head and weird face

idunno never seen a wemmen

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27326294]idunno never seen a wemmen[/QUOTE] [url=http://www.google.com/images?client=safari&rls=en&q=woman&oe=UTF-8&um=1&ie=UTF-8&source=og&sa=N&hl=en&tab=wi&biw=1440&bih=717]Here you go.[/url]

[QUOTE=kevlar jens;27326310][url=http://www.google.com/images?client=safari&rls=en&q=woman&oe=UTF-8&um=1&ie=UTF-8&source=og&sa=N&hl=en&tab=wi&biw=1440&bih=717]Here you go.[/url][/QUOTE] your search lead me to this. [img]http://www.beforeyoutakethatpill.com/2008/11/woman-beard.jpg[/img] [editline]10th January 2011[/editline] thank you. :downs:

Man of questionable sex: Now a newly minted ex. Passport did not lie

fixing page 116 (compwhizii is a bad coder)

Made another sweet bro and hella jeff tribute. So yeah, it's one big load of shit :downs: [media]http://www.deviantart.com/download/189132370/csomaa___page_two_2_by_sadobeam-d34lrgy.png[/media]

True art. I should just stop drawing, I will never be that good.

Amazing.

I liked the part after this scene: [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2a6jz1f.png[/IMG]

[IMG]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/010/a/7/arrr_by_infernomonster-d36umc2.png[/IMG] Fixed it a boot

Also isn't it time for another Creationism Corner Competition?

ooh exiting

[QUOTE=Detlef;27328767]ooh exiting[/QUOTE] from where

WIP scene from game. Hopefully will be fully animated (with people and stuff) and have a soundscape when done. [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2qbvjas.jpg[/IMG]