Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition>
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[QUOTE=cyanidem;23426973]
I drew an arab for some reason.[/QUOTE]
So many things wrong with it yet it looks so compelling.
[IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/20s9ca9.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i28.tinypic.com/5ezeo6.png[/IMG]
I'm expecting some MAJOR, MAJOR, crit on this one. Kill me with criticism please
A little quickie from today.
[IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/314xs7d.png[/IMG]
[QUOTE=chamon;23429266][url]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/348262[/url][/QUOTE]
When did you get this good?! :D
lovin' that picture man.
[QUOTE=MetalToast;23433778]lovin' that picture man.[/QUOTE]
Большое спасибо :smile:
[QUOTE=Roundhouse;23433693]A little quickie from today.
[img_thumb]http://i25.tinypic.com/314xs7d.png[/img_thumb]
When did you get this good?! :D[/QUOTE]
This is stunning, how long did it take?
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[QUOTE=MetalToast;23429485][IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/20s9ca9.png[/IMG][/QUOTE]
This made me smile. :downs:
[editline]2:35[/editline]
[QUOTE=chamon;23429266][url]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/348262[/url][/QUOTE]
This song is also very lovely- so relaxing!
[QUOTE=chamon;23429266][url]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/348262[/url][/QUOTE]
bass has some annoying noise in it
[IMG]http://i541.photobucket.com/albums/gg385/LastEcko/l_ba5fec19d1fc4a2392b75d5de28e9279.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://i541.photobucket.com/albums/gg385/LastEcko/copy1.png[/IMG]
I don't know (not me)
[QUOTE=MetalToast;23432816][IMG]http://i28.tinypic.com/5ezeo6.png[/IMG]
I'm expecting some MAJOR, MAJOR, crit on this one. Kill me with criticism please[/QUOTE]
It looks like you used that flooding tutorial almost to the tee.
[QUOTE=jenny7332;23435318]This is stunning, how long did it take?[/QUOTE]
~15 min more or less. I'm glad you like it. :D
[QUOTE=cyanidem;23426973][img]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/9761/arabuu.jpg[/img]
I drew an arab for some reason.[/QUOTE]
you know, not all arabs look like that. I hate how foreigners get the wrong idea about the middle east through movies and such...
but it still looks good.
[QUOTE=red_pharoah;23443917]you know, not all arabs look like that. I hate how foreigners get the wrong idea about the middle east through movies and such...
but it still looks good.[/QUOTE]
At which point did he say they where all alike? He just drew eh movie stereotype.
[QUOTE=JaspertheDoxie;23399525]Who says I want realism?[/QUOTE]
Your dignity.
[editline]05:26PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=cyanidem;23426973][img]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/9761/arabuu.jpg[/img]
I drew an arab for some reason.[/QUOTE]
Eyes are blue, facial proportions are all wrong, nose is a turnip, lazy ass filterrape for turban.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23445314]
Eyes are blue, facial proportions are all wrong, nose is a turnip, lazy ass filterrape for turban.[/QUOTE]
You sound very angry.
Yes, the arab was literally just a quick sketch, the turban looks 'artificial' because I added for lulz after I realised that he looked like a stereotypical arab. Its just a photo of a turban with cutout applied.
[editline]03:43PM[/editline]
It was actually just sposed to be an old man when I started sketching it, but I've never studied the face properly.
I quite like how you did the turban even if it was quickly through filters. In this case, to me, it matches the style and is acceptable to use. Seems like you were a bit lazy with the ears though or they are too high up. :v:
[IMG]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs162.snc1/6048_1031778334212_1818021811_65682_4245555_n.jpg[/IMG]
Nothing bigger, made totally from scratch.
A filtercheap is never acceptable. What would've been a valuable lesson in cloth is now a proof of lazyness.
[QUOTE=onox37;23439157]It looks like you used that flooding tutorial almost to the tee.[/QUOTE]
Well I went to that tutorial and took the water textures from it, didn't look at the tutorial at all though.
[QUOTE=cyanidem;23445542]You sound very angry.
Yes, the arab was literally just a quick sketch, the turban looks 'artificial' because I added for lulz after I realised that he looked like a stereotypical arab. Its just a photo of a turban with cutout applied.
[editline]03:43PM[/editline]
It was actually just sposed to be an old man when I started sketching it, but I've never studied the face properly.[/QUOTE]
Always fix your stuff. If the nose looks broken, fix it. If the the perspective is wrong, fix it etc etc.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23447590]A filtercheap is never acceptable. What would've been a valuable lesson in cloth is now a proof of lazyness.[/QUOTE]
I'm with you on this one. I think you guys need to cool it. If you don't like the C&C then don't post your work. I'll be officially adding that to the OP. You guys need to learn how to take it. If the advice is given, chances are, they are probably right, especially when coming from 3v3ryb0dy. Thanks and bai.
[QUOTE=onox37;23452152]I'm with you on this one. I think you guys need to cool it. If you don't like the C&C then don't post your work. I'll be officially adding that to the OP. You guys need to learn how to take it. If the advice is given, chances are, they are probably right, especially when coming from 3v3ryb0dy. Thanks and bai.[/QUOTE]
he gives the best crit i've seen. i want him to crit my stuff :(
How original of me to make another image of her.
[IMG]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/199/f/9/f9072f312cf1aadb123b271dabc4a6b0.png[/IMG]
Also this:
[IMG]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/188/b/c/bc6e0528a565a8c189cec97fd963fa74.png[/IMG]
[QUOTE=Skyward;23454095][IMG_thumb]http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm225/SkywardDescent/SICKNASTEH.png[/IMG_thumb][/QUOTE]
Reminds me of Ed.
[IMG]http://i28.tinypic.com/1zxmetw.png[/IMG]
A friend asked me to paint something "brütal".
Ever felt like you world was fucked up
Wanting to throw it away in a cup
Smash it to pieces
And forgot about the creases
Wanting to forgot it all
And get another drink call
Drown yourself in booze
And just let it ooze
Till your death comes
and the drummer boy play the drums
Playing a sad tune
At noon
[img]http://th06.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/199/1/0/Specter_by_Joey_Z.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Playaz;23454476]Ever felt like you world was fucked up
Wanting to throw it away in a cup
Smash it to pieces
And forgot about the creases
Wanting to forgot it all
And get another drink call
Drown yourself in booze
And just let it ooze
Till your death comes
and the drummer boy play the drums
Playing a sad tune
At noon[/QUOTE]
Feels too forced.
[QUOTE=Roundhouse;23454286]
A friend asked me to paint something "brütal".[/QUOTE]
Holy shit, brütal it is.
I love it, dude.
[QUOTE=Playaz;23454476]Ever felt like you world was fucked up
Wanting to throw it away in a cup
Smash it to pieces
And forgot about the creases
Wanting to forgot it all
And get another drink call
Drown yourself in booze
And just let it ooze
Till your death comes
and the drummer boy play the drums
Playing a sad tune
At noon[/QUOTE]
i like to fart
it is art
i pushed a cart
to the start
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[QUOTE=Playaz;23454476]Ever felt like you world was fucked up
Wanting to throw it away in a cup
Smash it to pieces
And forgot about the creases
Wanting to forgot it all
And get another drink call
Drown yourself in booze
And just let it ooze
Till your death comes
and the drummer boy play the drums
Playing a sad tune
At noon[/QUOTE]
It feels all over the place and doesn't really make much sense. It is like you had too many ideas and tried to shove all of them into a small piece.
The last bit was very... Odd. A drummer boy playing a sad tune at noon? Can drums even be sad? The "at noon" but was just thrown in there to rhyme with tune and it sticks out like a sore thumb - it felt contrived.
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