Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

[QUOTE=onox37;23452152]I'm with you on this one. I think you guys need to cool it. If you don't like the C&C then don't post your work. I'll be officially adding that to the OP. You guys need to learn how to take it. If the advice is given, chances are, they are probably right, especially when coming from 3v3ryb0dy. Thanks and bai.[/QUOTE] Might I direct you to... [url=http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=751702][img]http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/jfranco817/k00lwhipguide.jpg?t=1244489468[/img][/url] fuck, I just realized he used the same font I did for my livestream and Steam avatar shit. Ninja'd by a whole year :argh: [editline]09:16PM[/editline] also I have to say I love 3v's criticism. He's always got the harshest yet unbiased view on something, always contrasted with my "on the bright-side" criticism. Good cop bad cop :buddy:

Why was I directed to that? I was telling them to take it.

I figured it would be useful to put in the op, didn't mean it was for YOU to read. :buddy: also I'm retardedly proud of the above ban.

[QUOTE=daijitsu;23459255]also I'm retardedly proud of the above ban.[/QUOTE] Maybe because the ban was retarded

[QUOTE=daijitsu;23459255]I figured it would be useful for the op, didn't mean it was for YOU to read. :buddy: also I'm retardedly proud of the above ban.[/QUOTE] I was totally thinking of getting on steam just to tell you how much ownage it was

[QUOTE=onox37;23452152]I'm with you on this one. I think you guys need to cool it. If you don't like the C&C then don't post your work. I'll be officially adding that to the OP. You guys need to learn how to take it. If the advice is given, chances are, they are probably right, especially when coming from 3v3ryb0dy. Thanks and bai.[/QUOTE] [QUOTE=MetalToast]he gives the best crit i've seen. i want him to crit my stuff :( [/quote] D'aww, thanks guys :love:

[QUOTE=Emz;23458838]It feels all over the place and doesn't really make much sense. It is like you had too many ideas and tried to shove all of them into a small piece. The last bit was very... Odd. A drummer boy playing a sad tune at noon? Can drums even be sad? The "at noon" but was just thrown in there to rhyme with tune and it sticks out like a sore thumb - it felt contrived.[/QUOTE] I appreciate the criticism. This is my first legit rhyming poem. It took me 5-10 min.

The ABAB rhyme scheme just does not work.

[QUOTE=daijitsu;23459255]also I'm retardedly proud of the above ban.[/QUOTE] I liked his rhyme :saddowns:

[QUOTE=Playaz;23463863]I appreciate the criticism. This is my first legit rhyming poem. It took me 5-10 min.[/QUOTE] Well I'm glad you can take criticism some people can't take it at all. [QUOTE=daijitsu;23459255]I'm retardedly proud of the above ban.[/QUOTE] I thought it was pretty darn artistic. +1 pallet. :buddy:

[QUOTE=Emz;23445780]I quite like how you did the turban even if it was quickly through filters. In this case, to me, it matches the style and is acceptable to use. Seems like you were a bit lazy with the ears though or they are too high up. :v:[/QUOTE] Oh god I forgot ears. I really gotta learn some anatomy. [QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23447590]A filtercheap is never acceptable. What would've been a valuable lesson in cloth is now a proof of lazyness.[/QUOTE] No I dont want to learn how to draw cloth lol. Not yet anyway. I just wanted to cover up ... well.. this : [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4268/arab2.jpg[/img] Worked a bit on a proper nose shape though, I'll have to practise more on the basics.

[QUOTE=onox37;23464696]The ABAB rhyme scheme just does not work.[/QUOTE] Yeah, I like ABBA better.

The line on the left side of the nose seems to curvy or dark or something. It makes it look a bit like he got punched in the face at some point in his life and it is broken or bumpy. The robotic brain thing is pretty cool though.

[QUOTE=cyanidem;23468689]Oh god I forgot ears. I really gotta learn some anatomy. No I dont want to learn how to draw cloth lol. Not yet anyway. I just wanted to cover up ... well.. this : Worked a bit on a proper nose shape though, I'll have to practise more on the basics.[/QUOTE] It's good that you try to learn the basics of human anatomy. So the question of why you are drawing old cyborg arabs, beats me. Anyway. I suggest you try drawing/painting from life or just photos. Studie the diffrence between young and old, male and female, worn and smooth (etc) faces. Studie the skintones and how the colors transition from light to shadow. The best advise I was ever givin was: "If you do something, you get better at it." It might sound simple, but it's the truth. (If you draw staight lines, you get better at drawing staight lines etc etc.) A few tips: Noses don't look like that. Old people tend to look tired. (weak muscles) When you know how light and shadow works, you can get sloppy with the details. You don't have to draw every single detail. Focus on the big forms at first. (zoom out/stand back.)

[QUOTE=cyanidem;23468689] No I dont want to learn how to draw cloth lol. Not yet anyway. [/QUOTE] An open mind is like a forteress with its gates left open and unguarded.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23474851]An open mind is like a forteress with its gates left open and unguarded.[/QUOTE] Either I'm missing the point of that statement, or that's just the stupidest thing I've heard.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23474851]An open mind is like a forteress with its gates left open and unguarded.[/QUOTE] So basically it gets raped by opposing troops for being naive.

Simple. But tell me what you think. [img_thumb]http://i477.photobucket.com/albums/rr140/Nikster92/goul.jpg[/img_thumb] [img_thumb]http://i477.photobucket.com/albums/rr140/Nikster92/girl.jpg[/img_thumb]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23474851]An open mind is like a forteress with its gates left open and unguarded.[/QUOTE] I say you should rephrase that to a [i]closed[/i] mind.

Where do you guys get your inspiration from?

[QUOTE=Heroms;23485332]Where do you guys get your inspiration from?[/QUOTE] listen to music that, when you listen to it, makes you feel like [i]moving[/i]. also I seem to have art streaks when I drink vodka, instead of getting drunk. v:v:v

[QUOTE=daijitsu;23485382]also I seem to have art streaks when I drink vodka, instead of getting drunk. v:v:v[/QUOTE] Daijitu is secretly a robot from futurama.

Seeing your avatar makes me want a tall avatar too. It doesn't even need to be animated. I'll be a mod one day. ONE DAY! :mad:

[B][U]WARNING: HUGE ASS IMAGE[/U][/B] [img_thumb]http://www.filesmelt.com/dl/Serj.PNG[/img_thumb]

You should probably put that in thumb tags. Like so: [code] [img_thumb] IMAGE URL GOES HERE [/img_thumb) [/code] Replace the last part with a bracket.

[IMG]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/1636/levinae86.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/5096/cefiro.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/8062/r32.jpg[/IMG] Just a few sketches with marker pen added.

Got bored at three A.M. wrote craptastic....poetry? I dunno... Through the black hills of the night Through the dark forest of the dusk Through the glowing seas of the evening Through the bright road of the afternoon Through the celestial plans the sun brings in the morning All complete the cycle of life Allowing one to see the truth For if one can learn to see past the barriers of time Through the barriers of hope and promises They can start to see the truth Behind all of reality's lies For what is time but a simple lie? For time passes by, and yet it doesn't Time is merely an illusion Things grow Things die Time does not pass however For time is but an illusion Giving way to the truth behind it all The truth that is How can one define time the same way as another? ----------------------------------------------------------------- Life begins on a small planet Tiny microbes spread across in the vast primordial soup all grow together They grow and grow until the first creature walks onto land It softly pads forwards and cry's out to it's friends it's safe topside Thousands emerge from their primitive home Society develops, villages begin All creatures get along All is perfect Society continues, cities develop One day one group tires of the other It harms the other creature unwarranted War ensures Blood is shed everywhere, the creatures forgetting their peaceful and cooperative past All is lost in one mistake of their being. The world hushes, not a single creature lives. An eternity passes The sun reaches a supernova and explodes. Some time after a new star is formed. Life begins on a small planet.... -------------------------------------- How can one prove they are self-aware? You claim you have memories You claim you know what you're doing That you have control over your body But how can I believe you? For I am self-aware only to myself Only I know I'm self aware Only I know I have memories Only I know what I am doing Am I self-aware? Or am I merely a play toy for your world? ---------------------------------------------------- Death brings sorrow Death brings pain Death brings the end to era's All is not lost however Death in it's self is a truly joyful thing Bodies return the Earth Mingling with the soil Slowly turning back into the very essence he was made from. He has been reborn, giving back to the Earth what he took from it Meanwhile his soul leaves the body Traveling an endless journey through the cosmos Gainingan infinite amount of knowledge His journey never ends however For one can never know everything His death brought many sweet sorrow But it brought him great joy For to be sailing throughout the universe for eternity Is better then any heavenly respite. (It's nowhere near as good as the others. I couldn't think of anything to go along with it.) --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Enjoy.

[QUOTE=Xgen;23489599][IMG_thumb]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/1636/levinae86.jpg[/IMG_thumb] [IMG_thumb]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/5096/cefiro.jpg[/IMG_thumb] [IMG_thumb]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/8062/r32.jpg[/IMG_thumb] Just a few sketches with marker pen added.[/QUOTE] Nice, needs more shine n shit.

[QUOTE=Heroms;23485332]Where do you guys get your inspiration from?[/QUOTE] Bein blue.

decided to start a quick character study. Got bored half way through, can you tell? [img]http://ploader.net/files/3272a0daf860c08a5e775cfb342c44f0.jpg[/img] dai and TH89 team up to fight trolls too retarded to take on one's own! page king yay this deserves extra art [editline]1:11[/editline] TH89's evil twin [img]http://ploader.net/files/3a8ef7e27d75f362327a3fb923d3b452.png[/img]