Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition>
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[QUOTE=Dclone2;23568817]
I want a sword.[/QUOTE]
Ok. But don't make a thread about you making the sword.
I love that picture Dclone. His eyebrows seem a bit too long and his fingers look a bit like small sausages on the hand he is gripping the sword with but I still love the style of it it's awesome. :buddy:
[QUOTE=Emz;23571185]I love that picture Dclone. His eyebrows seem a bit too long and his fingers look a bit like small sausages on the hand he is gripping the sword with but I still love the style of it it's awesome. :buddy:[/QUOTE]
Well that's just my strange anatomy. I traced it so it should be pretty accurate. My fingers are quite sausage-y when gripping things.
Anywho, thanks! :buddy:
Ah I didn't realise it was a trace of yourself. You have a cool jacket. :h:
[QUOTE=Dclone2;23569399]Chainsaws take too long to go through bone.[/QUOTE]
thats because you have no muscle to swing hard with
But he'd rather have a sword which you swing with strong muscles. :psyduck:
I think the way your neck is angled should make the muscle in your neck more pronounced.
[img]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs058.snc4/35241_10150214696845372_583035371_13872856_2784767_n.jpg[/img]
My first attempt at graffiti. It's the blog I write for's logo.
It looks like shite. I plan on buying more spray paint on sunday and then going back to the same place to do some more.
tripped out [U]red[/U] guy.
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/redmon.jpg[/IMG]
I want to know if this is any good.
[QUOTE]He’d worn this coat often. It fit too well. Maybe it made him feel like Bogart. He couldn’t tell anymore. The meaning, like the fresh scent, had long ago worn off. It always reminded him of simpler times. He had been on the force for just about thirty years now. It wasn’t about the pride anymore, or the thrill. He didn’t know what else to do. He was natural police. He caught the ones that slipped through the net. It was in his blood. His father, and his father before him, were police; some of the best around. Together, they had solved more cases than most departments. Tonight, in the pouring rain, the lightning lit up the sky like a warzone. Flashes of God touched the ground, attracted by lightning rods and metal distractions on the rooftops above. The body was still warm, smoking like a gun too often used. It was another note from the killer, his third love letter to the city. Hell bent on exposing the teeming underbelly of the city, or some nonsense to the effect. Modern killers were psychopaths, idealistic and religiously motivated. In the old days, before DNA testing, before lab kits, the killers did it for self-defense, for jealousy, or for murderous rage. There were no guilty sins or motivations. Crimes were of passion, and they rarely swayed. He felt like walking away. Dropping his gun and his badge in the dirty gutters and walking until he stopped. Rain touched his brow, dripping twisted roadways down his face. A flash of thunder lit up the air, buzzing with potential energy. He couldn’t tell the streets from the alleys anymore. After fifty four long years, everything began to run together. The city was a canvas, once wet with paint, now dried and crusted. The summer would begin soon. The heat, oppressive like a blanket, would come down again. The heat drove men mad. Even with the heat, the coat stayed. It was more a part of him than he was a part of the city. It made him bulletproof, without fear or regret to slow him down. Not that it mattered. All that he could see was the pension, the long period, waiting to fade out. He had burned brightly for a time, a collapsed star burning towards a supernova. Without a bang, however, he left with a whimper. One last cigarette, burning in the ashtray, was his only remain. His coat, as it often had before, left no comforting words to follow.[/QUOTE]
Thanks.
[QUOTE=Illian;23584536]I want to know if this is any good.
Thanks.[/QUOTE]
The vast majority of your sentences are way too short. Short sentences are fine when used in moderation to emphasise a point and whatnot, but when used one after the other as in your piece of writing, they tend to disrupt the flow and make it hard to read. There are also some points where you go on a bit of a comma spree. The cause of this is trying to write your piece of work down as you would say it aloud. You can't really do that without tarnishing the readability of the end product I'm afraid. Punctuation should be used in moderation.
Also there are some typos such as "he was natural police". Not sure if that one is intentional but it doesn't quite read right.
Otherwise, it's nice.
Anyone got a good link to some [B]graphics tablet brush presets[/B] for photoshop?
[QUOTE=St33m;23572323]thats because you have no muscle to swing hard with[/QUOTE]
do you have a clue what you are talking about
no you don't before you say you do
[QUOTE=cyanidem;23589509]Anyone got a good link to some [B]graphics tablet brush presets[/B] for photoshop?[/QUOTE]
There are no "graphics tablet" brushes. Most of them already use pen pressure (which means 100% when using mouse).
Also, [url]http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=82641[/url]
And my favourite brush set: [url]http://mv.cgcommunity.com/echange/matbrushes07.zip[/url]
[QUOTE=Lord Pirate;23587520]The vast majority of your sentences are way too short. Short sentences are fine when used in moderation to emphasise a point and whatnot, but when used one after the other as in your piece of writing, they tend to disrupt the flow and make it hard to read. There are also some points where you go on a bit of a comma spree. The cause of this is trying to write your piece of work down as you would say it aloud. You can't really do that without tarnishing the readability of the end product I'm afraid. Punctuation should be used in moderation.
Also there are some typos such as "he was natural police". Not sure if that one is intentional but it doesn't quite read right.
Otherwise, it's nice.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for the advice. The natural police thing came from watching too many episodes of The Wire. It's just how they talk :sax:
[QUOTE=JaspertheDoxie;23559101][img_thumb]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/201/0/7/Lucy_Elfen_Lied__Side_View__by_AspiringAnime.jpg[/img_thumb]
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head is way too narrow
[QUOTE=cyanidem;23589509]Anyone got a good link to some [B]graphics tablet brush presets[/B] for photoshop?[/QUOTE]
I'll save out the brush I set up to look and work more like a pencil. See the first post of the last page for some little examples.
Honestly though, I bet there's a ton if you go to deviant art and search "photoshop brushes", though I bet most are just big stamps.
with fear of suffering from rectal banhammer, is daijitsu a furry?
No.
kay.
[QUOTE=St33m;23601831]with fear of suffering from rectal banhammer, is daijitsu a furry?[/QUOTE]
obviously
I made a rhyme about my work. It's negative towards the use of acrylic driveway sealing instead of oil.
Yo, seal that driveway!
It's just the right way
So then you won't pay
For superficial display
And darkening gray
Making pebbles stay
Erode still it may
Weakened oils say
How unsafe your car lay
Over your driveway
Before it gives way
And new asphalt you'll pay
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Get a proper scope,
of the potent dope.
Cleans your brain like soap
Rationality cannot cope
When reality I grope
I fuck up your brain
Assure ensuing pain
While morality I've slain
And insanity I sustain
Disorder that I train
Collaboration I abstain
Designated for destruction
I give out instruction
For the annihilation
Of social construction
Human communication
And economic expansion
I was bored and needed to make an iPod background, so I made this. You've heard of The Son of Man, I give you The Father of Apple.
[img]http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/3826/thesonofapple.jpg[/img]
Your drawing is WAY too blurry for an appropriate ipod background. Usually ipod backgrounds are crisp and high resolution.
[QUOTE=Dclone2;23628719][img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/206/f/c/Loft_Sketch_by_Dclone2.png[/img]
Dream loft[/QUOTE]
I love 2-point perspective, especially when it's done as well as you did it.
Walking to your office will be one heck of a trip. And I just personally dislike the layout.
[QUOTE=Heroms;23630524]Walking to your office will be one heck of a trip. And I just personally dislike the layout.[/QUOTE]
I like being able to run inside a house.
I like open spaces generally.
There seems to be a HUGE amount of space under the office, I think the way you handled the perspective makes it look deeper than it actually would be though.
Also, sketched this up. It feels kinda generic right now. I always start out with something interesting then end up with something run of the mill. Well, regardless, any major gripes so far with regards to the actual construction of the image?
[IMG]http://cubeupload.com/files/25f121fsldr1.jpg[/IMG]
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