Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition>

[3v3ryb0dy]

[QUOTE=Sir Tristan;23774717]yeah

I know it is bad, I am horrible at drawing people

and shading

and everything else

:smith:

[editline]08:22AM[/editline]

it looked better while I was drawing it. Looking back on it, what the holy fuck was I thinking[/QUOTE]
I'll finish watching top gear and I'll be right on it.

[editline]11:30AM[/editline]

[QUOTE=Lemonator;23774758]

What do you guys think[/QUOTE]

Anything doesn't have shape, corners in pipes are horrible, you don't know what you do with the shading, water defies gravity and overall feels bland. Not to mention perspective.

[broo20]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23774793]I'll finish watching top gear and I'll be right on it.
[/QUOTE]

Top Gear isn't on tonight where I am.

:saddowns:

I've got a 30 second speed draw that I want to show, if the teacher of the class would give it to me.

She says she's going to use it as an example for other classes.

I'm going to try and do another one soon.

[3v3ryb0dy]

I have the series on DVD.
To apolagize for me being slow, I'm going to do the owerdrawing with [I]my gasmask on![/I]

[broo20]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23775167]I have the series on DVD.
To apologize for me being slow, I'm going to do the owerdrawing with [I]my gasmask on![/I][/QUOTE]

I've done drawing with a gasmask on before, I was drawing a Bloodsucker, and I wanted to get [I]"in"[/I].

Don't know what the fuck I was smoking.

[Sir Tristan]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23775167]I have the series on DVD.
To apolagize for me being slow, I'm going to do the owerdrawing with [I]my gasmask on![/I][/QUOTE]

You don't have to do it you know, I don't really mind.

My skill in art before overdrawing |-[highlight]l[/highlight]------------------------------------|

My skill in art ~after overdrawing |--[highlight]l[/highlight]-----------------------------------|

[3v3ryb0dy]

[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/puy0nvvt.png[/IMG]

Didn't come out too well cause I'm pretty shit in humans as well, plus I left the filter cap on so I had to do it in one breath.
If you learned to break shit down into shapes you could get another line in that skill thing.

Here's my overall skill in drawing.
your DA manga artist|--------[highlight]l[/highlight]-----------------------------|If all renessance classics had babies and they had babies and they had pie.

Basically neck was way too thick, head wasn't broken down into a sphere and a wedge, shoudlers too broad and too winde.
Look up human tutorials on Devart, cause judging what I came up to fix you will only fix you oh so much, cause what I did is completely wrong. Take it as if you were driwing down a motorway, and my overdrawing is a sign, that tells you there might be a sign placed here on next tuesday that tells you where' you're going.
Sorry I can't really concentrater right now for wahtever reason.

[Sir Tristan]

This should help me a lot, I only have 2 things to say

One is that you drew that from a slightly higher perspective than my original drawing

and the other is that in helmets like that there is air space at the top, it is not a 100% tight fit

but that is awesome, should I choose to redraw it this will help me a lot.

[editline]09:48AM[/editline]

Although I can't help but feel like that 12 year old kid that joins a garry's mod server and builds a car made out of a big red shipping container whilst all of the other players are buildings complex wired planes etc., I just hope that one day I can improve enough for my work to even be comparable to your guy's work

[3v3ryb0dy]

Atleast you're not doing manga.

[Sir Tristan]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23775597]Atleast you're not doing manga.[/QUOTE]

I wish :sigh:

ahahahahaha, no

[broo20]

My good-version of the drawing is going to be done soon, depending on how self-conscious I feel tomorrow, I might post it.

Might.

[editline]08:37PM[/editline]

Probably not.

[DJB]

Did these a while back then they sat in my file for a month.

[img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/DSC03314.JPG[/img_thumb]
[img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/DSC03316.JPG[/img_thumb]

[3v3ryb0dy]

Angel:
back looks like it's thawed out of a rock, spine looks like i'ts drawn onto her with charcoal, hair is pretty fucking lazily made, actually. Pose feels stiff and unbalanced cause there aint no knees seen anywhere and I bet you don't know how she is posed, cause you didn't think it through. Wings are made of jello, covered with serpent scales cause feathers sure don't look like that. Fingers are sausages.

Death or whoever that tool thinks he is:
Pose is too stiff, folds make no sene, hands are those of an infant, hands are different lenghts and one of them is too long. I don't know what the hell you tried to achive with that ground merge thing but you didn't mainly cause you retought that idea after every 2 lines. Those coat rips don't look like ones and they defy gravity.

Overall: Your shading consists of colouring shit grey and calling it a day.
Use more values other than grey and lineart. Look up tutorials on anatomy and use reference images since your own head can't carry out the task.

[Moreto]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23775597]Atleast you're not doing manga.[/QUOTE]
The one how to draw series I have actually promotes good anatomy. V:v:V

[Astanovka]

[QUOTE=ashxu;23773859]Nope, no zoom. Well, on the DS version anyway. There's an iPhone version, not sure if that has zoom. Probably not.
[/QUOTE]
There is zoom on both the Ipod and the DS versions. On the Ipod it's a lot more fluent because you can zoom in with your fingertips, but on the DS there is a set 2x and 4x zoom.
You cannot change the canvas size on either versions, though.

[Lemonator]

[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/theaveragecounterstrikeplayer.png[/img]

How can I improve?

[kocy]

[QUOTE=Lemonator;23788938][img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/theaveragecounterstrikeplayer.png[/img]

How can I improve?[/QUOTE]

with a monitor standing on the table

[Lemonator]

[QUOTE=kocy;23789269]with a monitor standing on the table[/QUOTE]

I need to add that in later, I would just like to know what to fix before I continue.

[eemmzz]

The eyes start at different heights and the mouth seems slightly too far over for the perspective. His left arm (our right) looks really odd.

[Lemonator]

[img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/theaveragecounterstrikeplayer2.png[/img_thumb]

[ThaiGrocer]

I wanted to make a Minecraft-based comic strip, but I don't know how to draw (more of an ctrl+z kind of guy). Sorry if this hurts your eyes. I got a huge cramp by the third frame from trying to get the lines done correctly with a ruler. Feel free to take this and make it happen.
[IMG]http://i28.tinypic.com/308k3ys.jpg[/IMG]
So the idea is that the character just arrived home from a satisfying day of work only to find complete and utter destruction. Those damn creepers. Damn them all to hell!

[marticus]

[img]http://a.imageshack.us/img8/253/ligh3t.jpg[/img]
Just a crop of something I'm playing around with.

[Daolpu]

Felt artsy tonight, and my hand shat this out. Definitely gonna finish this one, here's where I'm at now as well as the starting sketch.

[IMG]http://imgur.com/9jG5A.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://imgur.com/9PFh1.jpg[/IMG]

[theLazyLion]

Compositionaly the left side is too heavy..

[Daolpu]

[QUOTE=theLazyLion;23796844]Compositionaly the left side is too heavy..[/QUOTE]

Noticed that myself. If someone said something strait away I was going to do something about it. So, I guess that's that.

I was thinking about giving the trees the axe (haw haw :v:) and flipping the bridge to the right side. Replacing the trees with a little more detailed pathway and some bushes, then concentrating on expanding the water.

Kinda like this but with less bad:

[IMG]http://imgur.com/xntvN.jpg[/IMG]

[editline]yeah[/editline]

I actually kind of like how the path twists and turns more times for no reason now.

[DOG-GY]

I like the new one

[No_0ne]

The mountains in the background don't mesh very well with the foreground.

[Grink Of Meat]

an unfinished champion of nurgle

[img]http://www.filedump.net/dumped/nurglething1280852840.PNG[/img]

because we all love them adorable creatures

[cep]

second try.
That was a bit harder. Tried to add not to much blur.
Not much satisfied with the result. any suggestions?
it looks to unnatural from body to the head.
[img]http://www.abload.de/img/testubgxd.png[/img]

[chamon]

Bored late at night, haven't had Photoshop open for a long time, this comes out:
[img]http://imgkk.com/i/oklc.png[/img]

[3v3ryb0dy]

Did some sculpting.
Here's my battlestation:
[IMG]http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/OgAAAJaWgweVL6nSR5ZDCRqe2O617bxLi3qwS38E46lX0c84Q4H2Ax4U6zkvox5sNLSAiDD9cnEM1I42_-Ha8-auWikAm1T1UNgwqVFz-B7k0K1KkGOwsnC5vHSa.jpg[/IMG]
and the thing I was working on:
[IMG]http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/OgAAAKoTpp6RdY8amFlRM1NMPL-tauxYzFEKrbDNOLtbUY0EAn2vij9w_cYkNkj7RvMBTj9q_hvUWOEVaMK5L87Di4AAm1T1ULhe6VCh-yyQ2Ho8L04NEAKjQDdQ.jpg[/IMG]
And after baking, it's stupid hot so I have to resist toutching it.:
[IMG]http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/OgAAAMkytk683SiMfV2Nz6uBVZq0ZtqmsFlyyhzivQS4xdThBz9HzG1xXNREpreopwL0eOAsw8hyu77LeppgxzCMcoEAm1T1UCm0j8bC8IrTF0FlGFyiCUOr5okt.jpg[/IMG]

As of now it is cooling and I'll go over it with a fine sandpaper and acrylics, then give it a shiny finish.

[editline]10:23AM[/editline]

It's a cane handle, first try at sculpting and pretty shitty, too. It'll break very soon anyway so it's more of an experiment. On my second try I'll work harder!