Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition>
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You guys seem to be taking the crit a bit harsh on JaspertheDoxie, I mean crit is necessary but you can't become a good artist overnight or as a result of reading a half page post about everything you did wrong. This forum is filled with everyone from 11 year olds to guys in their mid to late 20's, so the skill level is going to be all across the board.
People who get good at drawing get it through pure practice and so everyone has to start somewhere. It was obvious that he knew where he is skill wise and has an appreciation for good artists so I think he's on the right path (besides the Anime bit in my opinion, but drawing anything is better than nothing.)
Rated artistic because you know what, he's doing more than me right now and at least he's working at something rather than sitting on his ass, no matter his skill level. (For some reason it isn't registering my rating, odd)
Drawing isn't the only means of showing off your artistic ability.
[QUOTE=Ajacks;24099527]You guys seem to be taking the crit a bit harsh on JaspertheDoxie, I mean crit is necessary but you can't become a good artist overnight or as a result of reading a half page post about everything you did wrong. This forum is filled with everyone from 11 year olds to guys in their mid to late 20's, so the skill level is going to be all across the board.
People who get good at drawing get it through pure practice and so everyone has to start somewhere. It was obvious that he knew where he is skill wise and has an appreciation for good artists so I think he's on the right path (besides the Anime bit in my opinion, but drawing anything is better than nothing.)
Rated artistic because you know what, he's doing more than me right now and at least he's working at something rather than sitting on his ass, no matter his skill level. (For some reason it isn't registering my rating, odd)[/QUOTE]
Nobody tells him to become good in a flash nor do we expect him to.
This guy posts a shitty anime drawing that he spent 3 hours on and rambles on about how we all are going to hate it just because it is anime. He's simply just showing of a crude drawing and say some nice stuff (first part of his post) to everyone else in hope to be treated kindly back, when I say how bad it is and tell him how he should improve whilst also attacking his "hate because anime" part of the post he goes defensive and when Moreto points out the flaws to make him understand what is wrong he defends some of it with what he based it of, trying to avoid any reason for it to be simply him drawing badly.
Had he read what we said rather than reacted on it being a wall of text and just focusing on the negative words rather than what the negative words actually told him then he would very well have known that we told him exactly what he should do in order to draw well, both realistically styled and manga styled.
Needs to be rated the same rating more than once to show up.
[QUOTE=JaspertheDoxie;24096197]
Just something to say to all you awesome artists! W00T, I just made this out of boredom, took me 3 hours. :effort:
I have a feeling you're all going to dumb me to death, all because y'all hate anime for no reason.[/QUOTE]
You should feel oblieged that someone even took the time to comment that.
Hey guyse good morning all. What's up?
[QUOTE=JaspertheDoxie;24097857]I can take critisism just fine, its you assholes who make it sound really rude, and basically saying: You Suck.[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=JaspertheDoxie;24097894]Your just trying to tell me to stop drawing, I can handle negative critisism just fine if it isn't worded like that.[/QUOTE]
OH GOD
DEVIANTART
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:munch:
Mixture of a variety of a bunch of stuff.
Some for indy game developer who unfortunately closed up recently.
Some for personal entertainment.
[URL=http://img695.imageshack.us/i/crimsonfate2010banner.jpg/][IMG]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4351/crimsonfate2010banner.th.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[URL=http://img828.imageshack.us/i/smeetinbackground.png/][IMG]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/9307/smeetinbackground.th.png[/IMG][/URL]
[URL=http://img838.imageshack.us/i/picturel.png/][IMG]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/7817/picturel.th.png[/IMG][/URL]
[URL=http://img256.imageshack.us/i/punchopolislogo.png/][IMG]http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/7347/punchopolislogo.th.png[/IMG][/URL]
[URL=http://img825.imageshack.us/i/spectrumgxpreopsadv.png/][IMG]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/47/spectrumgxpreopsadv.th.png[/IMG][/URL]
[URL=http://img802.imageshack.us/i/storyconcept.png/][IMG]http://img802.imageshack.us/img802/8533/storyconcept.th.png[/IMG][/URL]
[URL=http://img827.imageshack.us/i/unlimited.png/][IMG]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/5273/unlimited.th.png[/IMG][/URL]
(NOTE: I did not paint the background of the Smeetin wallpaper, it was done by my favourite concept artist, Andree Wallin.)
(Also, the camera poster was a school assignment, the camera is a vector mock-up.)
Just sent off a pm onox.
I got it, thanks mate.
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/For_Olivia1.png[/IMG]
Something I made for my girlfriend, I hope she likes it.
Also if you didn't see the thread I made ( I should have just posted it here in the first place, but I'm new to the art section)
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Album_cover_eye2.png[/IMG]
I would really like some critique on the first one. Some tips for shading perhaps?
Edit: new version of the first pic uploaded
I can't find the pen for my old graphics tablet, life sucks :(
[QUOTE=Super_Poo;24103805]I can't find the pen for my old graphics tablet, life sucks :([/QUOTE]
I know how you feel
I'm going to have to buy a new one. grrragh
[img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/4726/1003d.png[/img]
Almighty banhammer, altered it to work with the below card.
[img]http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/935/1028.png[/img]
Part of an Exodia-type set, made by Blaze with a few alterations by me.
[img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/6392/1065.png[/img][img]http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/205/1066n.png[/img]
Reworked the terminology so equip cards are now called 'rating' cards, the words ban, permaban and unban meaning discard to the refuge camp, DDT'd zone and, well, resurrecting. Gotten through and removed the TF2-themed cards from the Orion deck to fit in some re-balanced cards by other Facepunchers, edited and refined everything that would need to be and so-forth.
Also, I've made the cards in the 2.5x3.5 format so if people so desire they could go online to somewhere like [url=http://www.artscow.com/photo-gifts/Card/Multi-purpose-Cards-Rectangle-394]Artscow[/url] and get them printed off in style. All that's left on my end is to up the resolution of the cards to the best printable level and anyone could enjoy.
wheres my trading card???
Started a DS boxart:
[img]http://anyhub.net/file/hellokittyrampagetitlesmall.png[/img]
Is the blood spatter overdone?
blood?
[QUOTE=Inacio;24107780]Gorgeous.[/QUOTE]
Thankyou :tiphat:
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24107925]blood?[/QUOTE]
Uhh, well I used blood spatter brushes for the black grime around "RAMPAGE!". Guess it isn't if you can't notice it :v:
Love it, but the bullet holes look kinda like flowers. They need to seem more metallic.
[QUOTE=Greeneyes;24108383]Love it, but the bullet holes look kinda like flowers. They need to seem more metallic.[/QUOTE]
Oh dear: I meant for them to look like paper, I'll have a go at defining them more.
I really liked drawing that tree last night, so I thought I'd draw another one, with a bit less complicated lighting.
How'd I do on the shading for this one?
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Curly_tree_thing.png[/IMG]
bark-like.
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Power_of_love.png[/IMG]
Just a little something I whipped up in about 30 minutes.
Man, I'm really starting to get into art recently, I like it :smile:
There's just too much to pick on and I'm out of wine. Sorry.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24112127]There's just too much to pick on and I'm out of wine. Sorry.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, I know it's not too great, not a whole lot of effort was put into it, but I still thought I'd post it.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24112127]There's just too much to pick on and I'm out of wine. Sorry.[/QUOTE]
Where is your spunk today?
[QUOTE=Bradmastah;24111962][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Power_of_love.png[/IMG]
Just a little something I whipped up in about 30 minutes.
Man, I'm really starting to get into art recently, I like it :smile:[/QUOTE]
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[QUOTE=fishsticks;24113370][URL="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_xniiG_x8zqw/S6YgmG9xmYI/AAAAAAAABGU/lhlc7wHMCO8/s1600-h/P3200049.JPG"][IMG][/URL][/QUOTE]
I actually got the quote from a different picture than that.
Actually now that I look for it, there's a whole bunch of pictures with that quote.
[QUOTE=JoeyZ;24112818]Where is your spunk today?[/QUOTE]
I'm in a bad mood today.
[QUOTE=Bradmastah;24113597]I actually got the quote from a different picture than that.
Actually now that I look for it, there's a whole bunch of pictures with that quote.[/QUOTE]
i like the picture.
it would be the greatest thing ever if it was really detailed though.
great concept.
[QUOTE=Rediscover;24118212]i like the picture.
it would be the greatest thing ever if it was really detailed though.
great concept.[/QUOTE]
Thanks, I might do it with more detail later tonight/tomorrow
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[url]http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1282003019[/url]
Just had an idea for an intro for my games/videos, and I whipped it up, tell me how you guys like it.
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