Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

far too simple and the face doesn't have any form, the peak grows out of it's chin. Needs more shading and atleast some kind of background. Look up fold tutorials and some human anatomy cause you should draw humans under clothes. that right hand

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24859194]far too simple and the face doesn't have any form, the peak grows out of it's chin. Needs more shading and atleast some kind of background. Look up fold tutorials and some human anatomy cause you should draw humans under clothes. that right hand[/QUOTE] Thanks for the constructive criticism, I'll work on those.

i got my posters framed haven't hung them up yet, but this is the wall they will be hung on [IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/photos/framed01.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/photos/framed02.jpg[/IMG]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24858801]text is "and I have finger puppets for my only weapon". [IMG]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/259/9/0/fight_your_bears_by_infernomonster-d2ytx60.jpg[/IMG] Didn't have any reference for bear, but it was so awesome that I had a huge grin on me face while doing it, it scared off the little shits that sometimes come and stare at me.[/QUOTE] His left chainsaw look really flat and there doesn't appear to be any sort of form for the long pole that connects the chainsaw with his upper torso. The muscles look weird and not aligned with his body, the face looks pretty neat although there is no real depth to it. The body itself is out of proportions, his left leg is shorter than the right one without bending enough to compensate for the length, and there doesn't appear to be any real source of light. I'm not sure about the hand doll or his ass if they are supposed to be part of the drawing or if they are sketches you made before and just crammed the bear with chainsaws in between the space. Nonetheless, it's awesome, a bear with chainsaws as hands are awesome.

[img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/259/7/d/mats_by_shether-d2yu2a9.jpg[/img] Math's doodling. And a genious..guy, his name could be Hercule, maybe.. [img]http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/259/0/9/genious__by_shether-d2yu2l3.jpg[/img]

Looks like a chick

all the great men do: Einstein, Archilleus, Faust and that dude from the office with all the hair. [editline]09:03PM[/editline] [QUOTE=St33m;24837933][img]http://www.filedump.net/dumped/colouring1284540264.png[/img] did i ruin it?[/QUOTE] you ruined it the instant you tought smudge was a good idea.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24862953]you ruined it the instant you tought smudge was a good idea.[/QUOTE] there is no smudge on it

So I was on a trip to Syria for the last week, figured I was gonna get bored and grabbed my pencil, I didn't draw much though, the scenes were too fascinating... but I randomly made a cartoony soviet tank (for some reason): [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/8987/photo0051h.jpg[/img] also I made this yesterday on the plane trip back (?): [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/905/photo0052j.jpg[/img] [editline]10:30PM[/editline] dammit low res

Like the tank, but your world looks horrible in the second.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;24859307]i got my posters framed haven't hung them up yet, but this is the wall they will be hung on [IMG_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/photos/framed01.jpg[/IMG_thumb] [IMG_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Posters/photos/framed02.jpg[/IMG_thumb][/QUOTE] Wow, that's too awesome. Also, It looks like you and I Epiphone buddies.

[QUOTE=technologic;24864882]Like the tank, but your world looks horrible in the second.[/QUOTE] yeah I failed at making tiny cities amidst forests from a bird's eye (AKA Syria )

[img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/8443/yaaya.png[/img]

Some charcoal practice for a lifedrawing class tomorrow, I don't know about Facepunch's policy for nudity so I'll just link it. [url]http://ahb.me/s6k[/url] Heh, her boobs are repelling eachother.

The pikachu got me.

[QUOTE=jenny7332;24868667]Some charcoal practice for a lifedrawing class tomorrow, I don't know about Facepunch's policy for nudity so I'll just link it. [url]http://ahb.me/s6k[/url] Heh, her boobs are repelling eachother.[/QUOTE] I hate when mine do that [editline]07:15PM[/editline] wait I thought that said balls for some reason what the fuck

[QUOTE=St33m;24863929]there is no smudge on it[/QUOTE] on the uncoloured version? [editline]06:53AM[/editline] [QUOTE=red_pharoah;24856679]3v3ry.. can you draw a concept of Red from the penumbra series that actually fits his voice?[/QUOTE] I'll finish playing Penumbra overture this weekend then I'll do it. I can see where I'll head with this. Maybe now when I play it with me brand new AKG K530(:smugdog:) it'll be actually somewhat scary. [editline]06:56AM[/editline] Anyway, should I continue clogging up this thread with my request bullshit, get a separate thread for it or just stop?

Make a separate thread if you're enjoying it.

Seperate thread.

ok i know i've made a billion evil dead covers but i still can't decide on one to actually use, keep that in mind thoughts on this one [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Covers/evildeadalternate.png[/img]

Don't like the font, at all. Also, will you be doing a back?

it doesn't matter if you personally don't like that font because it's an official evil dead poster font and fans of the film will like it and i like it [img_thumb]http://www.oldskull.net/wp-content/uploads/evil_dead_1_poster_02.jpg[/img_thumb] and yes, will be doing a back

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[QUOTE=Rusty100;24876129]it doesn't matter if you personally don't like that font because it's an official evil dead poster font and fans of the film will like it and i like it [img_thumb]http://www.oldskull.net/wp-content/uploads/evil_dead_1_poster_02.jpg[/img_thumb] and yes, will be doing a back[/QUOTE] Sorry I gave my thought on it, when you asked for it.

no no i mean i can't and won't change the typeface because it's the official logo you can cc the cover but the film logo isn't going to change

Ah kk, my bad. The cover itself looks fine.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;24876071]ok i know i've made a billion evil dead covers but i still can't decide on one to actually use, keep that in mind thoughts on this one [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Covers/evildeadalternate.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] I think the face distracts way too much, maybe make it blend in more with the background instead of having it draw your attention? The text above needs to be larger, it looks like you crammed it in and compressed it, it should be bigger. The front looks awesome, I was wondering if you could try something though: Could you maybe colour her in some different colour? I think a dark green could work and it won't stand out too much from the original red, and could maybe make it look even better. Atleast the parts where her skin is. Actually, maybe you could try that with the face on the background too. Make the background in dark green. :)

[QUOTE=Gregah;24876847]I think the face distracts way too much, maybe make it blend in more with the background instead of having it draw your attention? The text above needs to be larger, it looks like you crammed it in and compressed it, it should be bigger. The front looks awesome, I was wondering if you could try something though: Could you maybe colour her in some different colour? I think a dark green could work and it won't stand out too much from the original red, and could maybe make it look even better. Atleast the parts where her skin is. Actually, maybe you could try that with the face on the background too. Make the background in dark green. :)[/QUOTE] already tried most of this, not much of it actually works. and i'm purposely avoiding green. i don't like green, especially not for an evil dead cover - also mainly because the official cover has green text, and i hate it. and when you say the face distracts... distracts from what? It's on the back of the case, you only see the face. the credit text is only there because i thought it needed some form of credits [editline]09:06PM[/editline] it would look a lot more normal when divided naturally by the case, like so [IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/edps.jpg[/IMG] and the text will obviously look fine at 100% [IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/edpstext.png[/IMG]

[QUOTE=Rusty100;24876901]already tried most of this, not much of it actually works. and i'm purposely avoiding green. i don't like green, especially not for an evil dead cover - also mainly because the official cover has green text, and i hate it. and when you say the face distracts... distracts from what? It's on the back of the case, you only see the face. the credit text is only there because i thought it needed some form of credits [editline]09:06PM[/editline] it would look a lot more normal when divided naturally by the case, like so [IMG_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/edps.jpg[/IMG_thumb][/QUOTE] Alright, yeah it already looks awesome so maybe doesn't need any changes. I didn't say you should remove the credits, I say that you should make it bigger, because it looks compressed and it looks pretty bad. The proportions is what I mean with the distraction, it looks extremely huge and would probably look a lot better if it were it's normal size. :)

Those posters you printed, how much did it cost you?