Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

I did a quick mashup to show how I think you can do with the text, full size : [IMG]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/8924/edps2.png[/IMG] The text above can probably do with a slight resizing, atleast width-wise. Edit : Made the text about halfway taller, looks better.

not a bad idea, i get what you meant now [editline]09:32PM[/editline] i think this is better you had some nice ideas bro ty [IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Covers/the%20evil%20dead%20alternate.png[/IMG]

I would like some advice about western style character design. I'm currently working on an expansive exploration/adventure game in flash CS4. In past projects I was the landscape artist but in this project I'm doing all the art... I'm fine with anatomy, It's just the over all style and feel of western comic style I'm new with. In fact I hate character design. :v: Anyone got any pointers or tips?

[url]http://www.characterdesigns.com/[/url] Should give you help. Browse through characters

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24878777][url]http://www.characterdesigns.com/[/url] Should give you help. Browse through characters[/QUOTE] Nice, Thanks brah.

[IMG]http://imgur.com/LgmUr.png[/IMG]

Meh, here's the last request and I'll start the request thread sometime soon. [IMG]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/260/d/9/pacman_request_by_infernomonster-d2ywdg8.jpg[/IMG] And as a bonus: this weeks doodles I've done in one lesson: [IMG]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/260/8/0/assorted_doodles_by_infernomonster-d2ywdpo.png[/IMG]

Your muscles are drawn well as usual but you lines are still my #1 gripe, everything has a sort of fuzziness to it because your lines are somewhat chicken-scratched, are you using as mechanical pencil? There isn't much contrast on the first character.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;24877017]not a bad idea, i get what you meant now [editline]09:32PM[/editline] i think this is better you had some nice ideas bro ty [IMG_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/Covers/the%20evil%20dead%20alternate.png[/IMG_thumb][/QUOTE] This looks awesome, her face is not as eye catching now that it's not as bright :) No problem.

[QUOTE=kevlar jens;24879127][img_thumb]http://imgur.com/LgmUr.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Thanks for the new gabe avatar :allears:

Some sketches for characters for my adventure game. They took a couple of minutes so that's why they're a bit pants and virtually zero facial detail. [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/23t4h85.jpg[/IMG] CC and other ideas for characters

Oh god, your proportions are just funny, look up proportion tutorials, dude!

Hmmm.. the man at bottom left is truly out of proportion, and the girls arms are a bit long but for like 3 minutes each... [editline]08:48PM[/editline] actually I think the girls fine, the shoulders of her coat make her arms look too long and the legs look long only because she's on tip toes. Bottom left man is truly horrible tho :v:

naah, the girl legs are positioned awkwardly(i.e. the left leg is way too long); and the upper most guy standing there is also a little off-beat, something with the hips maybe? His upper body and lower body seem to be displaced a little..

[QUOTE=fishsticks;24884082]naah, the girl legs are positioned awkwardly and the upper most guy standing there is also a little off-beat, something with the hips maybe? He's upper body and lower body seem to be displaced a little..[/QUOTE] She's resting against a wall, I guess that isn't so clear, But i'll sort out the guys hips when doing the line art. Thanks!

Since the thread I made isn't getting any lurv, let me just C/P my post here: [QUOTE=Sir Whoopsalot;24879323]So yeah, about a day ago, I posted the first chapter of a short story I was working on, back then named 'Destiny Unknown'. God knows why I picked such a shitty title, so I changed it to suit the contents of the story a bit better. Well, after a few hours of writing, re-writing and checking, it's finished. Unfortunately, it's too big to post here (besides, it would be a massive MASSIVE wall of text anyway) as the .doc file is about 13 pages, so here's a link to download the .doc file I wrote it in. [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Test_of_Power.doc[/url] Should you want to discuss the story for some strange reason, please use spoiler tags where applicable. [/QUOTE] Yes, it takes some time to read it. The document spans 13 pages, but I guess the actual story is about 8-9.

[QUOTE=fishsticks;24884082](i.e. the left leg is way too long)[/QUOTE] Tut tut remember about perspective the left foot is behind the right by about a step The feet also have varying stretch out-ness.

[QUOTE=Greeneyes;24884168]She's resting against a wall, I guess that isn't so clear, But i'll sort out the guys hips when doing the line art. Thanks![/QUOTE] No that isn't clear at all, because her balance doesn't suggest a slightest indication of this, to tell you the truth, her balance is strange and the distance between feet seems a bit too little. [QUOTE=Greeneyes;24884529]Tut tut remember about perspective the left foot is behind the right by about a step The feet also have varying stretch out-ness.[/QUOTE] Oh, my bad.

[QUOTE=fishsticks;24884841]No that isn't clear at all, because her balance doesn't suggest a slightest indication of this.[/QUOTE] Have to agree with this man, she looks more like she's casually walking about.

Yer guess so. Anyhow the line art is almost done and some tweeks to make it look more proportioned.

[QUOTE=Sir Whoopsalot;24884888]Have to agree with this man, she looks more like she's casually walking about.[/QUOTE] And her spear goes into the wall.

[QUOTE=dgg;24884970]And her spear goes into the wall.[/QUOTE] She's leaning against a corner!

[QUOTE=Sir Whoopsalot;24884981]She's leaning against a corner![/QUOTE] This :). [editline]10:27PM[/editline] Making more sense now? [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/bdqe6c.png[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/andreewww/asstank.jpg[/IMG]

It's coming along nicely [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2li7p1w.png[/IMG]

Holy crap that's awesome. What program/techniques did you use to make it [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/member.php?u=153437"]Andreewww[/URL]?

[QUOTE=Occlusion;24886531]Holy crap that's awesome. What program/techniques did you use to make it [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/member.php?u=153437"]Andreewww[/URL]?[/QUOTE] I used Photoshop. There aren't really any techniques, I just picked up a brush and started drawing

[QUOTE=xamllew;24879856]Your muscles are drawn well as usual but you lines are still my #1 gripe, everything has a sort of fuzziness to it because your lines are somewhat chicken-scratched, are you using as mechanical pencil? There isn't much contrast on the first character.[/QUOTE] Meh I just learned to draw muscles proper. Lines are sketch because it's basically a sketch, usually I do lineart after that stage and I do use mechanical pencils, that one was 0.3mm HB and usually I use a 0.5mm B pencil.

Hey guys, my very first piece. I followed a tutorial. [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2zp85eb.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/261/d/0/scout__again__by_rongxin-d2yyag1.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/14c4djp.png[/IMG]

THIS LOOKS BAD AND I FEEL BAD. [img]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs612.snc4/59261_10150255863820372_583035371_15006384_4123541_n.jpg[/img] I love the idea though. A guy's strapped to a table-type thing and there's a worm or whatever thing that went through his back and burst through his chest. Plus the worm thing has a very happy, calm look on its face. Also, my blue marker died and I have to wait until I get the set of 25 I ordered to come in the mail.