Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24941942]I always draw during parties. I could make a pun about how all of you are a party and I won't arrive cause you all suck.[/QUOTE] Drawing at a party gets you laid.

[QUOTE=JoeyZ;24942001]Drawing at a party gets you laid.[/QUOTE] "That shifty guy in the corner drawing mutilated corpses is sooo hot I wanna suck his dick!"

I found a separate, epty cabin. It was empty until all the chicks started puring in to give me titwanks :smugdog:

[QUOTE=Thaard;24942113]"That shifty guy in the corner drawing mutilated corpses is sooo hot I wanna suck his dick!"[/QUOTE] That's the idea!

:razz:

[IMG]http://imgur.com/evEDE.png[/IMG] Wallpaper sizes available on my deviant art. [url]http://redban.deviantart.com/[/url]

[QUOTE=JoeyZ;24942553]That's the idea![/QUOTE] no, actually I just often get massively bored at a party and I find some desolate area and doodle for a while. I do it very, very often. Fishticks can confirm it, but he's a massive douche, spending most of the parties going outside for walks.

:roflolmao:

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24942411]I found a separate, [b]empty[/b] cabin. It was empty until all the chicks started [b]pouring[/b] in to give me titwanks :smugdog:[/QUOTE] fixed [editline]11:02PM[/editline] also I made a Grim reaper engineer (I got inspired by a post in the last Tf2 comics thread... (sorry for low res, and the legs are screwed up, I know) [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1317/photo0055s.jpg[/img] [editline]11:05PM[/editline] If you can't see anything tell me

[img]http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/661/lampengut.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24942867]spending most of the parties going outside for walks.[/QUOTE] The bastard. :arghfist::mad:

[url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2897141/abraham2.mp3[/url] Ahhhhh, I rarely do relaxing acoustic stuff, but I might start doing more like this. Came out a lot better than I thought.

Some guys [img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/338/yeeyeeeeeeeeyeeyee.png[/img] Captain Throbcock, Lieutenant ThickCunt, and general VeinyChode and their assistants. And a portrait of a friend [img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/6685/billbn.png[/img]

[QUOTE=xamllew;24947926]Some guys [img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/338/yeeyeeeeeeeeyeeyee.png[/img] Captain Throbcock, Lieutenant ThickCunt, and general VeinyChode and their assistants.[/QUOTE] [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YJWI9wq97Bs[/media]

How 'original'. Also sure is sametime and samething post.[U] [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QBvrPSJhCGQ[/media] [/U]

I am aware. [img]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/38af8cthatisroyco.png[/img] I'm quite a fan.

What's he from anyway?

He originated from that animation, the animator is an absolute genius.

I need some critique :frown:

[img]http://www.filedump.net/dumped/landscape1285049900.PNG[/img] [img]http://www.filedump.net/dumped/1285006652steampunklandscapecolour1285049900.png[/img] Comments anyone?

looks good, but the transition from forest to ice seems... unnatural. a snowy mountain has much less tree intensity that that, next time try making less trees that are farther apart.

[QUOTE=red_pharoah;24943380]fixed [editline]11:02PM[/editline] also I made a Grim reaper engineer (I got inspired by a post in the last Tf2 comics thread... (sorry for low res, and the legs are screwed up, I know) [/img] [editline]11:05PM[/editline] If you can't see anything tell me[/QUOTE] can't see anything. Take photos in better natural light and use massive amounts of post-processing to make them look good. But if I could see it I'd say it's done on paper, the lines are way too sketchy, the skull on that turret is neanterthals' and pose feels ankward cause the proportions are awfully off - legs way too short, right hand starts like inches away from the neck, exteding in enough lenghts to cover paris-moscow and... yes. Lines are sketchy and you pressed wayy too hard on that HB,instead should've used a softer pencil or just not have gone and done that dark values. It's not like you needed them, I mean that's the only guy who has anything shaded on him. Buy few more pencils and do some drawings from life, something boring like a cup or some shit, maybe it'll help you with material definition. Look up proportion and basic anatomy tutorials on deviantoort or something. [editline]09:31AM[/editline] st33m I kind of hate that sudgy-gradiented shading or whtaever that you have always going on, also you failed hilariously at air perspective, looks like the last mountain is suddenly in shade. it should go that the second hill is in bit lighter tonal values, less contrast and the outpost looks lsightly gray, and second one goes even more brighter and softer in colours etc, instead you make everything just more undetailed and make the outpoust darker and then realise you forgot air, and pull the brightness/gamma/whatever slider down. The reason why the forest-to snow transition sucks is because forest is a texture on yours not a 3-dimensional entry, it doesn't change the ridgeline at all. Plus the snow on trees suck, snow does'nt fall as lines. Just look up references and some scenery drawing tutorial, lots of useful info there. And don't try to save time by doing foreground stupid lazy.

okay then, but next time you give feedback to anyone plase refrain from using words as "suck". some people might not take it well. Actually you need to change your overall tone when giving feedback. Are you trying to help or are you bashing?

sorry but the 28 carrots later post was the best

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24955176]can't see anything. Take photos in better natural light and use massive amounts of post-processing to make them look good. But if I could see it I'd say it's done on paper, the lines are way too sketchy, the skull on that turret is neanterthals' and pose feels ankward cause the proportions are awfully off - legs way too short, right hand starts like inches away from the neck, exteding in enough lenghts to cover paris-moscow and... yes. Lines are sketchy and you pressed wayy too hard on that HB,instead should've used a softer pencil or just not have gone and done that dark values. It's not like you needed them, I mean that's the only guy who has anything shaded on him. Buy few more pencils and do some drawings from life, something boring like a cup or some shit, maybe it'll help you with material definition. Look up proportion and basic anatomy tutorials on deviantoort or something. [/quote] Explanation: 1. I did make it on paper, it looked much better. 2. I took the picture with my phone, due to the lack of any proper photo processing devices. 3. I never looked at any anatomy tutorials ( I think I will, some day) 4. I have a phobia of any type of pencil that continuously needs sharpening (They always seem to break) 5. I realized the legs were short, but by the time I did I have already made the turret in front of them, so I didn't want to redo all that again. anyway thanks, I'll try to practice on some shit. [editline]12:30PM[/editline] I forgot to say I have a terribly shakey left hand (of which I draw with)

I use mechanical pencils as well, I only shade with classical ones. and my drawing hand is shakey as well. Its all in the technique. look at tutorials someday, follow them. Learn heaps you will [editline]12:57PM[/editline] [QUOTE=St33m;24955597]okay then, but next time you give feedback to anyone plase refrain from using words as "suck". some people might not take it well. Actually you need to change your overall tone when giving feedback. Are you trying to help or are you bashing?[/QUOTE] I'm just giving my opinion and what I think might help. Some call it constructive critisism. and I know some people don't take it well, I enjoy their every tear of rage from those sissy cretines.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24956514]I'm just giving my opinion and what I think might help. Some call it constructive critisism. and I know some people don't take it well, I enjoy their every tear of rage from those sissy cretines.[/QUOTE] stop going on automatic self defence mode, and READ what im telling you. You made good points, and i can see i need to improove, but work on the tone you state it with, if not for us, then for yourself. I know im not a superior artist in any way, but neither are you.

There is a big difference between giving criticism and just being an arrogant douche.

[QUOTE=St33m;24957107]stop going on automatic self defence mode, and READ what im telling you. You made good points, and i can see i need to improove, but work on the tone you state it with, if not for us, then for yourself. I know im not a superior artist in any way, but neither are you.[/QUOTE] I'm not going to change my tone, why must I waste time thinking how to say it aronund corners that it sucks when I can just say "It shit, look up how it's done"

i give up. have fun not making friends ever