Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition>
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[QUOTE=Mr. Scorpio;22629416]I never got into acryllics. I like working fast, and it takes too long to switch paints.
I also don't like cleaning my brush. Egh.
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I just noticed, Maya, why does the vest on that character have nipple lines?
[b]I'm pretty sure weaving doesn't work that way.[/b][/QUOTE]
But in anime it does! :v: Though now that I look at it, it doesn't look like anime at all.
An old character I did for a friend.
[IMG_THUMB]http://filebox.me/files/wdj55q51m_Adrian_Freeman.jpg[/IMG_THUMB]
a guy in my night course made this for all of you
[img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9999/fruitoh.jpg[/img]
Wow... I call it: "Brushrape"
[QUOTE=Maya2008;22626864]updated:
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The way she's holding the hand on her waist seems a bit off.
[url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2897141/Fresh.mp3[/url]
Some dub chill with guitars me and a friend are working on!
[QUOTE=Mr. Scorpio;22627838]Oh, so she's a sassy black woman.
"OH NO YOU DI-INT GIRL FRIEND"
I'm sorry, but that is the most generic pose ever.[/QUOTE]
hmmm
hand on the waist the is the sign of women with bad temper in case if you don't know.
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[QUOTE=PLing;22630917]The way she's holding the hand on her waist seems a bit off.[/QUOTE]
I'll change that.
[editline]09:58AM[/editline]
[QUOTE=Mr. Scorpio;22629416]I just noticed, Maya, why does the vest on that character have nipple lines?
I'm pretty sure weaving doesn't work that way.[/QUOTE]
I can chage the style of sewing but some are like this:
[img]http://www.nkdclothing.co.uk/images/Female-Suit_large1.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Maya2008;22632138]hmmm
hand on the waist the is the sign of women with bad temper in case if you don't know.
[editline]09:54AM[/editline]
I'll change that.
[editline]09:58AM[/editline]
I can chage the style of sewing but some are like this:
[img]http://www.nkdclothing.co.uk/images/Female-Suit_large1.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
[img]http://cdn.uproxx.com/feature/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/angry+face1.jpg[/img]
And this is an angry face. That does not mean that every angry person will have an angry face. All you've done is make her look generic.
What, is she going to spend every single second of every day hunched over with her hand on her hip? You've been watching too much anime. That's not how actual angry people work or look.
And as you will note, the sewing does not stop at her nipples. Because that would make absolutely no sense and would just look like some strange excuse for you to make something look titillating.
Perhaps, I should have given a more in depth description of the goal.
As I said, The purpose of uniform is to remove uniqueness.
Same with the rules hair length.
The look of student is meant to be generic.
Too much anime is what renders each student to look unique.
That uniform is for the intro of the game, which is the free demo section we will release first.
You are not supposed to know who are the important characters yet.
(reason why setting in school is chosen)
The main character (not designed yet) is in a world in which he cares for no one. He is a cynic, to be exact.
The two characters above are just his classmates.
They will nto be main characters until after the intro.
In other words, they are not supposed to catch any attention yet in this form.
They just sit at the corners, when the player see them on a daily basis.
They become main characters two years after, while they appearances will change as well in the CG.
I will then apply character traits similar to what you've been saying on those designs.
On the other hand.
The example you game before,
Bald can mean:
old age, anger, simple minded, or obedience.
There are more than one meaning for everything.
and she is not actually an angry person to be exact, she just shows her emotion and talks straight. Hence, she gets pissed off easily.
Anyhoo, the two characters above are not that important yet.
They just need to look different from NPc, that's all that is needed for this design.
[QUOTE=Maya2008;22637321]Perhaps, I should have given a more in depth description of the goal.
As I said, The purpose of uniform is to remove uniqueness.
Same with the rules hair length.
The look of student is meant to be generic.
Too much anime is what renders each student to look unique.
That uniform is for the intro of the game, which is the free demo section we will release first.
You are not supposed to know who are the important characters yet.
(reason why setting in school is chosen)
The main character (not designed yet) is in a world in which he cares for no one. He is a cynic, to be exact.
The two characters above are just his classmates.
They will nto be main characters until after the intro.
In other words, they are not supposed to catch any attention yet in this form.
They just sit at the corners, when the player see them on a daily basis.
They become main characters two years after, while they appearances will change as well in the CG.
I will then apply character traits similar to what you've been saying on those designs.
On the other hand.
The example you game before,
Bald can mean:
old age, anger, simple minded, or obedience.
There are more than one meaning for everything.
and she is not actually an angry person to be exact, she just shows her emotion and talks straight. Hence, she gets pissed off easily.
Anyhoo, the two characters above are not that important yet.
They just need to look different from NPc, that's all that is needed for this design.[/QUOTE]
Alright. That makes sense.
You know, except for the nipple seams that serve no function.
[QUOTE=Mr. Scorpio;22646013]Alright. That makes sense.
You know, except for the nipple seams that serve no function.[/QUOTE]
I fixed that part. ^^
[img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/166/d/4/Lynn_Cushla_by_fadingz.png[/img]
I'm going to dig into main character design soon.
Need to foil him out from the crowd.
[QUOTE=Maya2008;22647207]I fixed that part. ^^
[img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/166/d/4/Lynn_Cushla_by_fadingz.png[/img]
I'm going to dig into main character design soon.
Need to foil him out from the crowd.[/QUOTE]
Hey, what country do you live in?
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-j8cNXj9qNw[/media]
Untitled metal jam, tell me what ya think
[quote=mr. Scorpio;22650451]hey, what country do you live in?[/quote]
usa :]
[QUOTE=cyanidem;22631362][url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2897141/Fresh.mp3[/url]
Some dub chill with guitars me and a friend are working on![/QUOTE]
Very nice, I love it.
[QUOTE=Maya2008;22647207]I fixed that part. ^^
[img_thumb]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/166/d/4/Lynn_Cushla_by_fadingz.png[/img_thumb]
I'm going to dig into main character design soon.
Need to foil him out from the crowd.[/QUOTE]
Something about the feet is putting me off.
I don't know why.
Oh and can anyone give me some tips on drawing leaves from a distance?
And please some criticism on a piece of work I just started. Have drawn in over a year save for some little cartoon doodles.
[img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/P1010630.JPG[/img_thumb]
Sorry about the photo, my scanner has disappeared around somewhere. And is it possible to get critiqued on some graphic design work here as well?
I would make a music making thread but honestly not enough Facepunchers make music to merit a thread.
[QUOTE=Salsa_Ninja;22653278]Something about the feet is putting me off.
I don't know why.[/QUOTE]
Maybe because she still has no toes and the shoes are like 2 inches shorter than they should be?
[QUOTE=PLing;22656858]Maybe because she still has no toes and the shoes are like 2 inches shorter than they should be?[/QUOTE]
Now that you point it out, it's painfully obvious. :v:
[QUOTE=PLing;22656858]Maybe because she still has no toes and the shoes are like 2 inches shorter than they should be?[/QUOTE]
I'll fix that xD
[img]http://blodey.com/t_c.png[/img]
does this look ok, it is just a wrapper for my ui :-/
red bg to show highlights and shadows
[QUOTE=LODY;22659269][img]http://blodey.com/t_c.png[/img]
does this look ok, it is just a wrapper for my ui :-/
red bg to show highlights and shadows[/QUOTE]
The edges need to be beveled more.
[QUOTE=onox37;22653768]I would make a music making thread but honestly not enough Facepunchers make music to merit a thread.[/QUOTE]
Do it. I would post in it. I posted some music I made earlier on this page.
[QUOTE=jesseluver93;22664808]Do it. I would post in it. I posted some music I made earlier on this page.[/QUOTE]
Same, I just made a song inspired by Nik Bärtsch: [url=http://www.upload.moogen.org/uploads/whitespace/Experiment 1.mp3]Click.[/url]
fixed her shoes
[img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/167/b/7/Lynn_Cushla_by_fadingz.png[/img]
[QUOTE=Maya2008;22669691]fixed her shoes[/QUOTE]
Personally, I don't see a difference, but that's only my opinion, don't let that stop you. The rest of the character looks good though.
Alright I'll make a thread for you music guys a little bit later.
[img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/161/7/1/15_by_f_nj.jpg[/img]
I got hacked
Haima Regia sounds like some sort of rectal disease.
Does it actually mean anything?
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