Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition>
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Still WIP:
[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/nb9qgg.jpg[/IMG]
"It's about time we kicked this revolution into overdrive".
[editline]22nd October 2010[/editline]
CC would be nice!
The skull looks weird, so is the alien's lower jaw.
[QUOTE=red_pharoah;25568719]The skull looks weird, so is the alien's lower jaw.[/QUOTE]
Yer, fixing up the jaw now. What's weird about the skull, it's how it should be isn't it?
The lines under its eyes aren't equally thick, which makes it look weird.
[QUOTE=red_pharoah;25568849]The lines under its eyes aren't equally thick, which makes it look weird.[/QUOTE]
True; thanks.
Kinda lost here.
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4608952/scoot.jpg[/img]
The arms are really screwey.
[img]http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2010/295/7/d/slender_by_joey_z-d31aves.jpg[/img]
Rejected by my AP art teacher..
Now I'm a few days behind.
Rejected in what sort of way? As a finished piece? Far from done. I would have rejected it as well.
[QUOTE=onox37;25578846]Rejected in what sort of way? As a finished piece? Far from done. I would have rejected it as well.[/QUOTE]
She stopped me from even finishing.
She said the concept was trite.
[editline]22nd October 2010[/editline]
More AP work
[img]http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/295/4/e/eyes_i_by_joey_z-d31awv7.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2010/295/3/2/eyes_ii_by_joey_z-d31awwl.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/295/0/2/eyes_iii_by_joey_z-d31awxk.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/295/4/3/eyes_iv_by_joey_z-d31awyu.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=xamllew;25580103]"[i]Yoo want roos staperer?![/i]" Haha, awesome work.[/QUOTE]
Agreed, you need to draw more objects with eyes.
I'll just hit you guys up with a massive WIP image I've spent uncounted hours on right now ok?
HNNNGGGGGGG:
[URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/4d0939imitators.png][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.4d0939imitators.png[/IMG][/URL]
(thumb'd click for full)
the leg is FUU-tastic
[QUOTE=JoeyZ;25578893]She stopped me from even finishing.
She said the concept was trite.
[/QUOTE]
tell her she's a trite cunt and to go fuck herself
[img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/7586/chuckx.png[/img]
Just dicking around with my brand-spanking-new bamboo tablet :buddy:
Jeffster FTW
[IMG]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/296/e/2/jim_reynor_by_greeneye_s-d31c4zz.png[/IMG]
I don't think I'll add any more.
What should I do next?
You seriously need some background on it. Not a bright background, but just some background that indicates a cave or something. Like the cave in the cinematic where the protoss guy and Kerrigan meets and fight a bit and there are Hydralisks coming from everywhere.
[hd]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rgatL2LQKLI[/hd]
You know, just some gentle hints of a cave wall and maybe some rock-spikes or something. it just looks too boring with a plain black background.
You should also make the Zerg fade more smoothly, right now it's more like it's coming out from some wormhole rather than the shadows, extend the gradient, and also apply it to the darker shades it has that are visible where everything else is faded to black.
[QUOTE=Greeneyes;25589425][img_thumb]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/296/e/2/jim_reynor_by_greeneye_s-d31c4zz.png[/img_thumb]
I don't think I'll add any more.
What should I do next?[/QUOTE]
Would be sweet if the monster was drooling a bit
Hey Hey! My entry for the last facepunch art competition just got Daily Deviation on Deviant Art!
Anywho, think I am going to add something to the background, like the cave. I'll have a mess about with it.
[QUOTE=Greeneyes;25601117]Hey Hey! My entry for the last facepunch art competition just got Daily Deviation on Deviant Art!
Anywho, think I am going to add something to the background, like the cave. I'll have a mess about with it.[/QUOTE]
Congrats, congrats. Seems a bit dumb that the guy that DD'ed it didn't give ANY words about it at all, no reason, just "Eh, fuck that, I'll just DD it".
Also this makes me shriek in horror: [quote]~StormArtz 29 minutes ago
-makes desktop background-[/quote]
The image has a resolution of 664x468 for christ's sake.
[QUOTE=dgg;25602497]Congrats, congrats. Seems a bit dumb that the guy that DD'ed it didn't give ANY words about it at all, no reason, just "Eh, fuck that, I'll just DD it".
Also this makes me shriek in horror:
The image has a resolution of 664x468 for christ's sake.[/QUOTE]
He has a very small screen. Very.
Thanks, I was kind of surprised with it the DD!
[QUOTE=Rusty100;25581996]tell her she's a trite cunt and to go fuck herself[/QUOTE]
Oh god, If only.
[QUOTE=Greeneyes;25602646]He has a very small screen. Very.
Thanks, I was kind of surprised with it the DD![/QUOTE]
Extremely small. Well looking at his gallery it's all explained. Crappy and sloppy anime drawings.
So this is your reference, eh? (based on a post by a guy there)
[url]http://daniellieske.deviantart.com/art/Welcome-to-the-Wormworld-144296126?q=favby%3AKeenie-Weenie%2F7636418&qo=76[/url]
[url]http://greeneye-s.deviantart.com/#/d30sfdx[/url]
[IMG_THUMB]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/7808/robertcornelious.jpg[/IMG_THUMB]
I like drawing sometimes, but i don't think i am anywhere near as good as most people in here. I just do it because i enjoy it, i don't plan on trying to make a profession out of it :P
[QUOTE=Dylan_94;25605495][IMG_THUMB]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/7808/robertcornelious.jpg[/IMG_THUMB]
I like drawing sometimes, but i don't think i am anywhere near as good as most people in here. I just do it because i enjoy it, i don't plan on trying to make a profession out of it :P[/QUOTE]
Whilst it honestly looks pretty shitty you've got a lot of things down "right" actually. Like giving him a forehead, put some space between the eyes and nose tip and whatnot. But it's still really off in every way.
Your main problem is that you drew his face skewed down to the right, as if you just held the pencil and drew a line using natural hand movement back and forth, which will bend it and skew it.
You also need to be WAY more generous with rounder shapes. Space between lips and nose is also way too big. But mostly, just look up stuff on how the face is setup (like the inner edge of the eyes are supposed to create a line down to the edge of the side nose in terms of placements) and just keep drawing and drawing.
[QUOTE=dgg;25605596]Whilst it honestly looks pretty shitty you've got a lot of things down "right" actually. Like giving him a forehead, put some space between the eyes and nose tip and whatnot. But it's still really off in every way.
Your main problem is that you drew his face skewed down to the right, as if you just held the pencil and drew a line using natural hand movement back and forth, which will bend it and skew it.
You also need to be WAY more generous with rounder shapes. Space between lips and nose is also way too big. But mostly, just look up stuff on how the face is setup (like the inner edge of the eyes are supposed to create a line down to the edge of the side nose in terms of placements) and just keep drawing and drawing.[/QUOTE]
Can you CC some of my work?
[QUOTE=JoeyZ;25605683]Can you CC some of my work?[/QUOTE]
I could try, tomorrow (well strictly today as it's 04:42). But you're good as is, I thought I looked at some photo traces or filter rapes at first on your lovely eyeball drawings.
Not that there isn't a lot that can be improved (since there always are, no matter who you are), but it's mostly just practice stuff.
I'll try to CC you and Funnycat (I "promised" him to CC him today on the Scout... but eh... I just CC what I feel like).
[QUOTE=Codesta;25544973]Doesn't need a thread because it's just some anime looking fan art:
Touko from Pokemon Black & White
[img_thumb]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/292/4/9/mai_touko_from_black_and_white_by_maishida-d312qfn.png[/img_thumb]
But what I do want is some cc.[/QUOTE]
Legs are too short.
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