Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

damn fine on the statue but the glass seems a bit wonky. On the plus, I think you did a great job on the shading and especially the caustics of the water/glass.

That statue is awesome. It was partly due to the phone picture quality, but for a moment I thought it was a picture of an actual bust you had made out of clay or something. [editline]26th October 2010[/editline] Can anyone offer a critique on my WiP on the last page?

Looks alright so far, not much to go on. :/

Just like the last picture, this is also drawn at the early morning hours, god damn it, I didn't draw for months and it happens now and just like this, oh well. So, Batman. In video games realm. It's all disorted and fucked up but I like it, and the parts I'd change I already changed in my mind. [img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/298/7/6/humm___by_shether-d31iqy9.jpg[/img]

Another character n' shit. [img]http://i52.tinypic.com/33o6v7n.png[/img]

I wish I was able to create a stable character for my works :saddowns: [editline]26th October 2010[/editline] I made this when I was bored: [img_thumb]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7191/imag02721.jpg[/img_thumb] This one was a request (though it was indirect): [img_thumb]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/1368/imag02691.jpg[/img_thumb] And a random engineer testing page: [img_thumb]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/5319/imag0271q.jpg[/img_thumb] I was too lazy to re upload them.

[QUOTE=Witty Name;25643590]Beyond saying "NO PERSPECTIVE", I saw very little in the way of an explanation. I predict this will devolve into an endless insult-war. As such, I see minimal value in responding further.[/QUOTE] You have absolutely no skill, talent nor mindset to do anything creative ever during the next 7 years of your existance untill you're atleast 14. Even if you attempt something, people who waste their time reading it will laugh at you and your work. They'll laugh even more when they realise that you're just a whiny little cunt with excuses pulled out of your ass. You got absolutely nothing to contribute here and even if you manage to contribute something It'll bring you nothing but humiliation. Just please do something else.

I had inspiration to do a quick submarine concept after seeing Nikola Tesla's RC submarine from the early 1900's. [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/2940/sub1v.jpg[/img] [url]http://www.pbs.org/tesla/ll/ll_robots.html[/url] Not happy with the conning tower though.

I love that dieselpunk styliing it has.

Are there submarines that tall? I think I'm imagining it to be very thin, too.

[QUOTE=red_pharoah;25652464]Are there submarines that tall? I think I'm imagining it to be very thin, too.[/QUOTE] You'd be right. :)

Can we get a front, back and top view? I really like it from what I see. It's all like: FUCK YOU I'M A SUB.

Sure in few hours if I have time. Edit: Meanwhile, new tower, better or worse? [img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9651/sub2d.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=thespectator;25649418]Another character n' shit. [img_thumb]http://i52.tinypic.com/33o6v7n.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Fookin' prawns! :argh:

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Some lyrics I got bored and wrote? [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3TBcXxGRywk[/media] [quote]one phrase i've learnt through time, is never trust your retina your eyes can easily lie, fight, and don't turn to dementia because very quickly our lives can resort to hysteria a subject area, so fearful, our thoughts slim like anorexia see i'm not profound, no i'm quite the opposite a young kid, aiming for the stars, yet i stay rocketless so when i go mad, i'll embrace an oppifany so i can find a way to disperse this diverse energy what am i gaining, some respect and my dignity all of the affinity, (gone) this ability has taken my civility so slowly, my craft declines in it's quality and i retrotravel to the time, i spat about the imaginary... street policies i learnt from the music i admired my raps, a copycat, from the tracks that left me inspired so what am i to do, these artists left my passion fired so all of the flames that i gained can never be contained and this game the claimed my soul, could never EVER be retired[/quote]

[QUOTE=PLing;25655313]Sure in few hours if I have time. Edit: Meanwhile, new tower, better or worse? [img_thumb]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9651/sub2d.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] ONe thing I would suggest is to blend in that (what I'm assuming to be) rust rather than just have it suddenly stop at the (possibly) waterline since, even if it was still in a dock and never moved, the rust wouldn't be quite that even.

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/blu-rays/alien%20all%204.png[/img] buttes [editline]27th October 2010[/editline] without the weyland logos (DUE TO SEVERE BACKLASH) [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/blu-rays/all4sansyutani.png[/img_thumb]

Would like some feedback on this one if someone can provide it... [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/BunnyGirlHoodColored1.png[/img] Besides the obvious lack of shading and no nose/mouth, can someone provide some constructive criticism?

[QUOTE=Rusty100;25672559][img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/blu-rays/alien%20all%204.png[/img_thumb] buttes [editline]27th October 2010[/editline] without the weyland logos (DUE TO SEVERE BACKLASH) [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/blu-rays/all4sansyutani.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] They all look brilliant but 3 is bugging me for some reason, like the background is too empty.

[QUOTE=slayer20;25673796]Would like some feedback on this one if someone can provide it... [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/BunnyGirlHoodColored1.png[/img_thumb] Besides the obvious lack of shading and no nose/mouth, can someone provide some constructive criticism?[/QUOTE] Fine start, except for the lack of detail and such. Lacks a chin; the headshape is rather square, chest looks weird (as in that kind of hoodie wouldn't have that "shape", unless its a rather weird hoodie), shoulders are to rounded. For a sloppy flash movie its fine, but i doubt that its what was intended.

[QUOTE=Viper202;25678383]They all look brilliant but 3 is bugging me for some reason, like the background is too empty.[/QUOTE] 1's background is even more empty idk i think i liked 3 the most

On number 2, the 'shiny' hair looks weird. But I'm diggin 1 and 4.

The cover of 2 looks like it was made back when the movie came out... good job.

Loving 2 and 4.

Man, I hate colouring. But first, does this need anything else? (detail and edges will be defined this is just a rough line art). [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2dceigy.png[/IMG]

add some flowers/ grass to the foreground... it looks too bland.

I had already posted this in the Minecraft megathread. Pretty late actually. [img]http://th00.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2010/280/2/9/minecraft_by_xephio-d30a07x.jpg[/img] I really don't like the stone walls and floor, looks so unfinished.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;25672559][img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/blu-rays/alien%20all%204.png[/img_thumb] buttes [editline]27th October 2010[/editline] without the weyland logos (DUE TO SEVERE BACKLASH) [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/blu-rays/all4sansyutani.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] I REALLY don't like the plain coloured thick stripe with title on it. It just seems so out of place and unfitting. I'd recommend some very light gradient on the side cover, maybe pick a colour that is most represented in the cover image, and try to find some way to have the title clearly visible without a plain striped background to make it visible. Atta what I think. It kinda works on Aliens though, since it's blue and the bluray cover is blue and the cover image is blue.

They all look very bland and boring.