Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V5 <Dongery Penis Edition> - General

[QUOTE=LinuxMint;25907110]Stop bitching about everything I make. Seriously, if you are going to rage, don't make a whole post about it. I didn't want to use the line tool in MSPaint because it has horrible atlasing. You are horrid.[/QUOTE] your stuff is so bad people think it's a joke does that say enough

[QUOTE=Rusty100;25908052]your stuff is so bad people think it's a joke does that say enough[/QUOTE] It's not a joke?

[QUOTE=Rusty100;25908052]your stuff is so bad people think it's a joke does that say enough[/QUOTE] Hey, you, yes you. Stop. Stop trying to make me leave.

[img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/310/f/8/truth_by_virulentx-d32btka.png[/img]

isnt that kind of really obvious [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=LinuxMint;25908243]Hey, you, yes you. Stop. Stop trying to make me leave.[/QUOTE] i'm not 'trying to make you leave' i'm just giving you the honest truth [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=LinuxMint;25908243]Hey, you, yes you. Stop. Stop trying to make me leave.[/QUOTE] i'm not 'trying to make you leave' i'm just giving you the honest truth

[QUOTE=No_0ne;25907698][img_thumb]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/9977/mechv.jpg[/img_thumb] annihilate at will[/QUOTE] The machine lacks true shading and is devoid of any core shadows and highlights. It only has cast shadows. It is however drawn with a cartoon style in mind so I will give you the benefit of the doubt. The lines are very sketchy. Fix them up, scan it, and vector it and it will look super sweet. [QUOTE=F1101011;25907757][img_thumb]http://th02.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/308/c/7/colossus_by_f1101011-d31koed.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] His left arm is bending in an 'arm-breaking' sort of way. It's kind of like rubber. The foreshortening looks good but the atmospheric perspective doesn't work because everything is so thick. The lines are thick as hell so the outline isn't appropriate. Also it's a doodle so you're forgiven.

[QUOTE=BlueFlash;25906500]A little thing I made completely in Flash in an hour. [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/8nL8n.png[/img_thumb] I made it to test making faux lighting/bloom in Flash and to see how beveling would work for light on farther away objects.[/QUOTE] So onox can critique it.

The blur in the background is a good idea but the sun would be even blurrier to compensate for the distance. Not super blurry but you know. The profiles of the humans are basic enough to know what they are but so much that you can notice problems in the silhouettes. Examples: Under the brown guys butt and their feet. The lighting is wrong. If they are sitting in a profile view and the sun was completely behind them, they would be a silhouette because the sun is just coming up. Also, you wouldn't see that glow on their body, it would be a rim light. [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] Currently awaiting a retort.

[QUOTE=LinuxMint;25907725]Nonono, [B]he's[/B] the troll. [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] And for everything that isn't my content you'll be like "WOW DATS GREAT LOL", because it's not LinuX.[/QUOTE] He's not a troll, he's telling his opinion. Which in my view is also true. And normally people don't post updates of their work after they fix one line. It gets annoying even with good art.

[QUOTE=F1101011;25907757][img_thumb]http://th02.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/308/c/7/colossus_by_f1101011-d31koed.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Its bloomy. In a good way and in a bad way. The shading is really inconsistant. the broken left arm's index dinger has the shading the whole image should have. Everything is just lacking values and you have problems decpicing shit in deep space, for example it's right leg. Proportion is off on that horse. Looks like it's standing on a vertical hill. Overall thanks to shading you fucked up some depth perception, like hand on that rock and such. Lots of mistakes everywhere but the overall image is nice. Nothing too major to have you focus on. [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=No_0ne;25907698][img_thumb]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/9977/mechv.jpg[/img_thumb] annihilate at will[/QUOTE] You're at your mechanical stuff again. You have improved but that drill looks incredebly shit and un-drilly. It's absulutely useless. The shoulder plate on left arm is paper-thin. You need to drop the pen and do some pencil shading to practise getting different values. At first don't use crosshatching nor hatching and do some light studies and follow a few tutorials. [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=LinuxMint;25898623]WIP v2 [img_thumb]http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/9159/40049237.png[/img_thumb] Smooooooooooother [editline]6th November 2010[/editline] The sheep looks like Jango Fett I know [editline]6th November 2010[/editline] The sheep looks like Jango Fett I know[/QUOTE]what the fuck am I looking at? What it sposed to be?

[QUOTE=LinuxMint;25907110]Stop bitching about everything I make. Seriously, if you are going to rage, don't make a whole post about it. I didn't want to use the line tool in MSPaint because it has horrible atlasing. You are horrid.[/QUOTE] Wait what? You were drawing seriously? I was pretty sure you made some funny minecraft faces, not actually trying to draw them. You do know that minecraft is made up of squares? Perfect blocky squares. Hold in SHIFT when drawing then you get a straight line, even with the pen tool. Also any tool in MSpaint has horrible antialiasing, that's because MSpaint doesn't SUPPORT antialiasing, only the Windows 7 version does, and it looks like shit.

am I the only one who likes antialiased mspaint?

i like aliased paint but only for its comedic value

[QUOTE=Pespi;25913467]am I the only one who likes antialiased mspaint?[/QUOTE] I think so. I don't really see the point in it, there are tons of drawing programs out there, and MSpaint is MSpaint, why should it become like them when the charm has always been that it is simple and aliased? Creates for good restrictions for those who love a challenge, makes it ideal for pixel art if you are bad at constraining yourself from all the "kewl effects" and is as Rusty said, excellent for comedic value.

[QUOTE=BlueFlash;25906500]A little thing I made completely in Flash in an hour. [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/8nL8n.png[/img_thumb] I made it to test making faux lighting/bloom in Flash and to see how beveling would work for light on farther away objects.[/QUOTE] Try not giving the sun a black outline, then give it a radial colour gradient, blur if needed. Then on a layer above everything else add a large radial gradient that fades to 0% alpha from a yellow/white colour. Centre this above the sun, resize so that it looks right. This I find gives a better bloom effect and gives a feeling of brightness. For example: [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/25iz0c3.jpg[/IMG] See how the gradients all add together giving a 'too bright to look at' bloom. Just remember in flash the built in functions are not always the best, but messing around with what you can produce with them is the best way to learn. [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] Also shadows are key for the effect of bloom/lighting. Add them to the pole and people and it'll look much better. Good work so far! [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] Double toast :/ [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] Also! Does anyone want me to write a Flash tutorial? You know about the basics and some of the secrets of the trade? Because I'm kinda interested in doing one. [editline]7th November 2010[/editline] FFS double toast again D:

[QUOTE=dgg;25913382]Wait what? You were drawing seriously?[/quote] No shit.

[QUOTE=MisterTickles;25908775][img_thumb]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/310/f/8/truth_by_virulentx-d32btka.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] that's just like a wallpaper i was making :(

[QUOTE=LinuX;25916433]No shit.[/QUOTE] Oh you sad little man.

[QUOTE=LinuX;25916433]No shit.[/QUOTE] I feel bad for you now. [sp]wait... actually no[/sp]

[QUOTE=Pespi;25911270]You're at your mechanical stuff again. You have improved but that drill looks incredebly shit and un-drilly. It's absulutely useless. The shoulder plate on left arm is paper-thin. You need to drop the pen and do some pencil shading to practise getting different values. At first don't use crosshatching nor hatching and do some light studies and follow a few tutorials.[/QUOTE] That's actually a year old, I've done more pencil stuff since then. I'll scan them when I get the chance.

[QUOTE=MetalToast;25916489]that's just like a wallpaper i was making :([/QUOTE] Well, now you can use mine.

[QUOTE=No_0ne;25917476]That's actually a year old, I've done more pencil stuff since then. I'll scan them when I get the chance.[/QUOTE] Oh please do, cause if your progress has been as rapid as xmellews, shit's 'coo!

[QUOTE=LinuX;25916433]No shit.[/QUOTE] You better check your posts at the door before you talk to dgg like that.

[QUOTE=LinuX;25916433]No shit.[/QUOTE] That's amazing. Really, that is extremely amazing.

I wish I could draw well... These are all so awesome (except for Linux's I don't like his). Heh

A little doodle-ish thing. [IMG]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs581.ash2/150349_496470062782_659662782_7189525_2893608_n.jpg[/IMG] Homeless man Jesus.

[QUOTE=Kurtzund;25929937]A little doodle-ish thing. [img_thumb]http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs581.ash2/150349_496470062782_659662782_7189525_2893608_n.jpg[/img_thumb] Homless man Jesus.[/QUOTE] [img]http://www.theoccidentalobserver.net/authors/MorganFreeman.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/9970/selfportraito.png[/img] Work in progress self portrait. Didn't have much time to get this done so I traced the line art, posting it here cause it's a trace :< . Shading is done off reference though.

looks like it's gonna turn out really nice when it's detailed. i like the colours you picked.

[QUOTE=theLazyLion;25933151] Work in progress self portrait. Didn't have much time to get this done so I traced the line art, posting it here cause it's a trace :< . Shading is done off reference though.[/QUOTE] I quite like it as it is right now actually. I'll have to see the finished product to fully make up my mind, but I love your progress so far. I love this thread.