Get lyrics from a songs that is very unpopular, change a few of the words, sing it too her.
Write a crappy poem and sing it.
Theres so many ways of doing this... Just think of what you want to say in your songs, write that down, slowly turn it into a poem, then turn the poem into a song.
Sing it butt-naked in a cowboy hat, with only the guitar to cover your junk.
Easier BJ access, cover the scene with the hat for some privacy.
New Lyrics
[quote]
Well I could sit here and play songs for you all day
But they don't really say what I need to say
Everytime my mind is free and I am without you
The darnedest thing happens and I can't stop thinkin' about you
When we hang out we always seem to have a lot of fun
Sometimes we do impressions of Ramos saying "Reggaeton"
I love it when you take a ride wit me like Nelly
I don't think twice before I say I dig you Kelly
Kelly come a little closer here
you gotta hear me out now, loud and clear
I don't know how to tell you any other way
and I hope you know I don't have venture far to say-
I think you're the one,
That I need by my side
The one that I need to feel like I'm alive
The only one that can make things feel just right
Would you please be mine, if only for one night
So many times these words have gone unspoken
My memories and fond feelings cannot be broken
I have fun talking about Chad behind his back
I love the joke about Tik Tok's bottle of Jack
I know any song I write can't do you justice
But I hope you know I tried when I sat down and wrote this
You wanted to know what I really needed to say
Take it how it is and tell me do you- feel this way
What do you say,
can we go out sometime?
What do you think,
do you think I'm a worthy parcel of your life?
How do you feel,
does your heart beat fast like mine- when you're around
How does this sound-
I want you, You're beautiful
I need you, my passion's indisputable
I love the way the wind blows through your long, dark hair
I love the way the sunset's reflected in your deep brown stare
I love the golden tint of your complexion
I love the memories we've made for later recollection
I'm aware of obstacles that underly
But I do not believe the end is nigh
If you're thinking to yourself "what's with this guy?"
Well here it is, the bottom line
I want you in my life.[/quote]
It makes sense if you don't know what some of the lyrics mean. Some of it is referring to inside jokes about people we know, and different events and situations. I think it flows well with what I'm playing on guitar. Also, This is about the first half of the song.
[QUOTE=mrmusterd;19270044]New Lyrics
It makes sense if you don't know what some of the lyrics mean. Some of it is referring to inside jokes about people we know, and different events and situations. I think it flows well with what I'm playing on guitar. Also, This is about the first half of the song.[/QUOTE]
I personally like it, what's the chord progression?
[QUOTE=Shibbey;19273219]I personally like it, what's the chord progression?[/QUOTE]
D6 Bm G (Barre at 3 on 6-E) A (Barre at 5 on 6-E)
Those lyrics are really stupid, I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to say it's gay to. Think of some original lyrics, I've heard those lyrics on the radio to many times to count. Get your own mind out of the musical gutter, and do something innovative.
Who are you talking to and which lyrics? There's multiple lyrics, and one other guy posted some other ones.
[QUOTE=mrmusterd;19292254]Who are you talking to and which lyrics? There's multiple lyrics, and one other guy posted some other ones.[/QUOTE]
Your lyrics.
Add a fuckton of breakdowns, for those of you who don't know what a breakdown is, use this
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qf3vqm9EovM[/media]
[QUOTE=En-Guage V2;19296322]Add a fuckton of breakdowns, for those of you who don't know what a breakdown is, use this
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qf3vqm9EovM[/media][/QUOTE]
You fucking call that a breakdown? What kind of stupid fucking scene kid shit is that, learn from the fucking pros before posting that pussy bullshit again.
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IpUHfjXb-6Q#t=3m4s]Here's a breakdown...[/url]
Suck my dick, not one of them and I don't think it's the most brutal breakdown ever, it's my favourite
Ugh deathcore, no thankyou
Sorry if I like my music somewhat comprehensible
[QUOTE=En-Guage V2;19296485]Suck my dick, not one of them and I don't think it's the most brutal breakdown ever, it's my favourite
Ugh deathcore, no thankyou
Sorry if I like my music somewhat comprehensible[/QUOTE]
Haha jesus christ, I really hope you're trolling, chances you are. However, I have doubts since you think you found like the best fucking shit ever in the metal genres by introducing facepunch to breakdowns :v:
wth LOL
[QUOTE=Racid;19296509]Haha jesus christ, I really hope you're trolling, chances you are. However, I have doubts since you think you found like the best fucking shit ever in the metal genres by introducing facepunch to breakdowns :v:[/QUOTE]
If you think that I reckon I'm the only person on this forum who listens to music with breakdowns, or thinks that I am the first person to introduce others to it, you're obviously stupid.
Just remember not everyone listens to music with breakdowns
[editline]08:25PM[/editline]
I never said it was better than other kinds of metal, jesus
[QUOTE=En-Guage V2;19296581]If you think that I reckon I'm the only person on this forum who listens to music with breakdowns, or thinks that I am the first person to introduce others to it, you're obviously stupid.
Just remember not everyone listens to music with breakdowns
[editline]08:25PM[/editline]
I never said it was better than other kinds of metal, jesus[/QUOTE]
Are you getting mad?
And couldn't you have used a better example?
What would you call that band you listen to, they're not metalcore.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wfKVI5Cv3BI[/media]
This is metalcore, and if you say Integrity sucks, remember, your shitty bands wouldn't be here without Integrity.
[QUOTE=Racid;19281379]Those lyrics are really stupid, I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to say it's gay to. Think of some original lyrics, I've heard those lyrics on the radio to many times to count. Get your own mind out of the musical gutter, and do something innovative.[/QUOTE]
I can understand that you're voicing you're opinion of disliking his lyrics, but you seriously don't have to be a dick about it. Smashing heartfelt lyrics between two lovers is an epic party foul, you should be ashamed of yourself for even doing such a thing. It's not like he's trying to market the song in any way.
Cursing in every post doesn't help your image either.
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19296667]I can understand that you're voicing you're opinion of disliking his lyrics, but you seriously don't have to be a dick about it. Smashing heartfelt lyrics between two lovers is an epic party foul, you should be ashamed of yourself for even doing such a thing. It's not like he's trying to market the song in any way.[/QUOTE]
Haha, heavy criticism only makes his works better.
Innovation sometimes is from the spark of anger.
[QUOTE=Racid;19296631]Are you getting mad?
And couldn't you have used a better example?
What would you call that band you listen to, they're not metalcore.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wfKVI5Cv3BI[/media]
This is metalcore, and if you say Integrity sucks, remember, your shitty bands wouldn't be here without Integrity.[/QUOTE]
It's a hardcore band, not metalcore
Integrity makes me wish I was born with a hearing impediment
[QUOTE=Racid;19296687]Haha, heavy criticism only makes his works better.
Innovation sometimes is from the spark of anger.[/QUOTE]
Heavy criticism can crush a songwriter's motivation and destroy the future of a musician, especially when you call their heartfelt lyrics stupid.
[QUOTE=En-Guage V2;19296692]It's a hardcore band, not metalcore
Integrity makes me wish I was born with a hearing impediment[/QUOTE]
Integrity has made a huge impact on the (real) metalcore scene, you obviously don't know this because you're the what... 5th generation of metalcore?
[editline]10:05AM[/editline]
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19296720]Heavy criticism can crush a songwriter's motivation and destroy the future of a musician.[/QUOTE]
Then he isn't worth being a musician in the first place, motivation is probably the second factor in succeeding as a musician, without motivation, you've just got worthless talent.
[QUOTE=En-Guage V2;19296692]It's a hardcore band, not metalcore
Integrity makes me wish I was born with a hearing impediment[/QUOTE]
didn't you like just call suffocation deathcore?
[QUOTE=Reaver1991;19296733]didn't you like just call suffocation deathcore?[/QUOTE]
You're thinking of the other guy.
[QUOTE=Racid;19296721]Then he isn't worth being a musician in the first place, motivation is probably the second factor in succeeding as a musician, without motivation, you've just got worthless talent.[/QUOTE]
Yeah but it's people like you who crush motivation in the first place.
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19296745]Yeah but it's people like you who crush motivation in the first place.[/QUOTE]
Well if I crushed his motivation, I'm happy about it.
He'd probably end up embarrassing himself in the first place.
[QUOTE=Racid;19296756]Well if I crushed his motivation, I'm happy about it.
He'd probably end up embarrassing himself in the first place.[/QUOTE]
With that rude of an attitude you'll never be able to work with a group of musicians.
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19296780]With that rude of an attitude you'll never be able to work with a group of musicians.[/QUOTE]
I don't work with a group of people, I make music with a group of friends.
Anyway, this reminds me of one of those episodes of UFC.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LZ76VkRe-gA[/media]
So you like picking on people who show their sensitive side, and tease them for something that means a lot to them. Again, rudeness.
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19296844]So you like picking on people who show their sensitive side, and tease them for something that means a lot to them. Again, rudeness.[/QUOTE]
Like I said, sometimes it makes them better.
Anyway, it's the matter of being the best, and being a criticizer, you gotta keep working up skill. Of course I'm going to criticize people for playing avenged sevenfold while I'm playing Ynwgie Malmsteen, that's just me, I like being one of the best, and for this, I'll be a criticizer. Most of the best are.
[QUOTE=Racid;19296866]Like I said, sometimes it makes them better.
Anyway, it's the matter of being the best, and being a criticizer, you gotta keep working up skill. Of course I'm going to criticize people for playing avenged sevenfold while I'm playing Ynwgie Malmsteen, that's just me, I like being one of the best, and for this, I'll be a criticizer. Most of the best are.[/QUOTE]
And what are you "best" at then?
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