[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19296885]And what are you "best" at then?[/QUOTE]
Composing music, and playing music.
That's what I've been practicing for the past 17 years.
[QUOTE=Racid;19296899]Composing music, and playing music.
That's what I've been practicing for the past 17 years.[/QUOTE]
What was the instrument you picked up at the age of 1?
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19296921]What was the instrument you picked up at the age of 1?[/QUOTE]
The triangle and the flute.
[QUOTE=Racid;19296932]The triangle and the flute.[/QUOTE]
The triangle makes sense, but you must be off your rocker if you expect anyone on these forums to believe that you learned to play flute when you were a year old.
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19296979]The triangle makes sense, but you must be off your rocker if you expect anyone on these forums to believe that you learned to play flute when you were a year old.[/QUOTE]
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCBg7CC7Er8[/media]
[QUOTE=Racid;19297014][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCBg7CC7Er8[/media][/QUOTE]
Wow, I'm sorry but that was the most pathetic response to someone calling you out on something as rare as a one year old playing flute. That isn't even you that's a baby girl (unless you're a female), and she never plays a flute in the video, she's blowing into a recorder.
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19297127]Wow, I'm sorry but that was the most pathetic response to someone calling you out on something as rare as a one year old playing flute. That isn't even you that's a baby girl (unless you're a female), and she never plays a flute in the video, she's blowing into a recorder.[/QUOTE]
No, I was just showing you a video of a baby playing a flute.
My flute was passed down from my dad who was a boy scout.
Again, that baby is not playing a flute it's playing a recorder.
It's not an issue if your flute was passed down from your father to you, you specifically said you learned to play flute at the age of one and failed to prove it.
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19297194]Again, that baby is not playing a flute it's playing a recorder.
It's not an issue if your flute was passed down from your father to you, you specifically said you learned to play flute at the age of one and failed to prove it.[/QUOTE]
I didn't say I learned how to play a flute, I said I could play it.
I don't believe you and nobody else on these forums will either.
[QUOTE=Pr0vologne;19297255]I don't believe you and nobody else on these forums will either.[/QUOTE]
Yes the jig is up, I could not play an instrument as technical and as frustrating as a 3 holed flute when I was one years old.
You never said it had 3 holes, you just said it was a flute.
This is a flute.
[img]http://www.ssdiggers.org/mseare/Junior%20High%20Page/Instrument%20Demos%20Pics/ww/flute.jpg[/img]
I should have mentioned it was a bamboo flute.
[img]http://somatheeram.in/UserFiles/flute.jpg[/img]
Yeah, that would've helped your side of the argument.
[QUOTE=Racid;19281379]Those lyrics are really stupid, I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to say it's gay to. Think of some original lyrics, I've heard those lyrics on the radio to many times to count. Get your own mind out of the musical gutter, and do something innovative.[/QUOTE]
He's writing a song for a girl he likes, not diving into the depths of musical innovation.
Anyway, this thread has gone a bit off topic. Personally I like your lyrics, they aren't the best but they convey the message and that's what you want to do, right?
Hahahaha oh god this is getting funny
Racid you've truly lost this argument now I still think you're an idoit for trying to get me to respect your band when it's clearly not going to happen, I've never liked metalcore in the first place so I guess that puts me out of it.
So why are you putting down the guy who started this thread in the first place, he's not trying to prove anything and who are you to tell him he's shit?
The whole triangle and flute bullshit made me lol, that could be anyone, forgive me if I have trouble being convinced that the child is indeed you.
If you're trolling (which you obviously are) you have indeed succeeded, just don't make bullshit stories up. You aren't any better than us and I doubt that anyone else cares whether my band is better than yours.
Frankly I don't give a shit
Good day
I'm sorry, this man is writing an acoustic song for a girl he likes, and you're talking about [I]metalcore?[/I] That is hilariously dumb. :frog:
[QUOTE=Racid;19297513]I should have mentioned it was a bamboo flute.
[img]http://somatheeram.in/UserFiles/flute.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
But... There's 5 holes?
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[QUOTE=killerteacup;19297530]He's writing a song for a girl he likes, not diving into the depths of musical innovation.
Anyway, this thread has gone a bit off topic. Personally I like your lyrics, they aren't the best but they convey the message and that's what you want to do, right?[/QUOTE]
Yeah. I looked them over and I'm toying with some new ones. I've still got a week or two to mess around with them. I actually changed the song entirely.
[QUOTE=Shibbey;19297803]I'm sorry, this man is writing an acoustic song for a girl he likes, and you're talking about [I]metalcore?[/I] That is hilariously dumb. :frog:[/QUOTE]
yeah like when you play the song don't forget to use lots of double bass, guitar solos, and growls. surely all this heaviness will show her your passionate love for her.
[QUOTE=pie_is_good;19300463]yeah like when you play the song don't forget to use lots of double bass, guitar solos, and growls. surely all this heaviness will show her your passionate love for her.[/QUOTE]
Yes sir Racid
[QUOTE=mrmusterd;19300488]Yes sir Racid[/QUOTE]
I'm not him. I was being sarcastic.
[QUOTE=pie_is_good;19300863]I'm not him. I was being sarcastic.[/QUOTE]
Me too.
Creepy.
Wow.
This is probably one of the worst derails I've ever seen.
[img]http://www.kaitaia.com/funny/pictures/ThreadHijack/thread_direction.gif[/img]
That being said, I personally think the last lyrics you posted, OP, are pretty good. Maybe you can get a rough recording and post it so we can hear it, and maybe help you out a bit? :buddy:
[QUOTE=Gmod4ever;19302882]Wow.
This is probably one of the worst derails I've ever seen.
[img]http://www.kaitaia.com/funny/pictures/ThreadHijack/thread_direction.gif[/img]
That being said, I personally think the last lyrics you posted, OP, are pretty good. Maybe you can get a rough recording and post it so we can hear it, and maybe help you out a bit? :buddy:[/QUOTE]
Thanks so much bro. And yes, massive derail here, somehow death metal of some degree came into the picture? Anyways, I'm working on some new lyrics, but I'll post what I have right now. Give me like 20 minutes to record it.
[QUOTE=mrmusterd;19306160]Thanks so much bro. And yes, massive derail here, somehow death metal of some degree came into the picture? Anyways, I'm working on some new lyrics, but I'll post what I have right now. Give me like 20 minutes to record it.[/QUOTE]
Sure thing. I'm not doing much right now, though I am considering working on some lyrics on my own, and/or continuing working on my composition for another song I'm working on (first time composing, so, yeah, :v:)
Can't wait to hear it. :buddy:
Well I'm leaving, but here's the new lyrics I've been working on, I can't really record it. I'm gonna be out of town tomorrow, maybe Friday?
[quote=New Lyrics]
Well I could sit here and play songs for you all night
I could suppress how I feel, that ain't the deal this time
So I made a little rhyme, to show you I'm for real
To show you my true colors, express my how you change my life
(Said really fast, no stops)
I would give up the grass, and the trees,
and the sky, and the seas,
and the sands, and the breeze,
and the birds, and the bees,
and the houses scattered wide, and the plans I'd put aside,
and the people passing by, and the buildings scraping skies,
and the mountains' purple pride, mother nature's gleaming guise,
distant lands that reside, across this world far and wide,
and we're standing here together, we could help eachother thrive,
you're the reason I survive, your love is water to my life.
You help my heart beat when it's weak,
and these words that I speak, they aren't deceit, they're no lie, no fallacy, no disguise
so don't cry, when the visions that I see, and the wisdom that I seek,
and the calm serenity, the that your love brings to me,
can only help me see that you're the one for me.
(Regular w/ pauses)
Oh girl can't you see, you've been running through my dreams
You're like an angel, missing wings
I hope it's not hard to see
I'd love to show you somehow, what you mean to me
Together we would laugh and we'd cry,
and we'd live and we'd die,
we would cheer and we'd sigh
and we'd love just right,
leave footprints in the sand,
walk through the fields, holding hands,
I wanna be your man, and I
I don't need no plan, cause
the things that we'd do,
all the things we would see,
all the places we'd discover
and the people in between
These memories'd become nothing if you weren't there
They'd be meant to be shared
Withsome who and cares
for another like I do, same way I feel for you
[/quote]
Again, not finished and needs revision. Kind of reminds me of a hip hop song in a way. It's played on an acoustic though, for every line there's a chord pattern played, that's why it's divided how it is.
Sing ring of fire by johnny cash.
There's some good parts here, however, some parts aren't as good.
I liked the fact that your first set of lyrics contained a lot of things that would only make sense to her, because its more personal that way.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YNn361umypM[/media]
Though it isn't exactly what you're looking for, the lyrics should be able to provide you with plenty of Inspiration.
The Temptations fucking rock!
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