[QUOTE=The Advisor;30570552]Question, do you think removing the lines would do the drawing justice wewt?[/QUOTE]
I think that it relies too much on its lineart for that
[QUOTE=DanRatherman;30561235][img]http://i.cubeupload.com/VN3vlF.png[/img]
Old pic I never really finished.[/QUOTE]
Sorry for being dumb, but what is that pile supposed to be?
Mortar shell, as far as I can tell.
[QUOTE=wewt!;30570793]I think that it relies too much on its lineart for that[/QUOTE]
[img]http://imageflock.com/img/1308524270.png[/img]
Well I think i'm going to practice no lines by drawing fruit, it's a wholesome and [del]fun[/del] way to practice.
It's about half done. I want it to look delicious.
Try doing your art with lines and then finish it while slowly shading, coloring and removing them.
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/516743/30daygamer/6.PNG[/img]
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/516743/30daygamer/6256.PNG[/img]
Apocalypse tank reporting in :D
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/sad_stalker_color.png[/img]
Based off of my avatar
[editline]22nd June 2011[/editline]
first shot at this by the way, what do you think?
Make the drawings less sketchy.
but I like that style :saddowns:
This the MS-Paint forums. It's not about what YOU like, its about what the masses demand of you!
No, it's what pleases the most.
All jokes aside, if you use the eraser-inverse fill trick to fill those white spots in the outlines with color than maybe it'll fix some of the sketchiness reservations.
are they [I]really[/I] that much of an eye sore? I like them. :frown:
[editline]22nd June 2011[/editline]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/sad_stalker_colorv2.png[/img]
I guess that does look better.
[img]http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/icons__r1741317111.png[/img]
[url=http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/62648.htm](link to pixeljoint where you can zoom if you want)[/url]
Updated my icon set which was previously shown in the small pieces of pixel art thread. So who missed, it's an icon set for a model checking software. Whats new? Pretty margins and about 6 new icons. I know, this is not deviantfail but I just put this everywhere and now just incase; No stealing unless you want me to cut off your mom's groin and make a hat of it.
I did a movie poster!
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/roadkill.png[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/roadkillwipbig.png[/img]
C&C?
I'd also like to hear ideas for a catchpharse. The title is going to be "Roadkill". Cheesy, right?
"Roadkill, prepare to be driven."
Horrible I know.
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/516743/30daygamer/8.PNG[/img]
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/516743/30daygamer/8256.PNG[/img]
Kyle Katarn from the Jedi Knight series.
Not really happy with the clothes, but I like how his head turned out.
[QUOTE=ForestRaptor;30630349]I did a movie poster!
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/roadkill.png[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/roadkillwipbig.png[/img]
C&C?
I'd also like to hear ideas for a catchpharse. The title is going to be "Roadkill". Cheesy, right?[/QUOTE]
Feels a tad empty with all that black space, maybe add more to the city skyline and some other junk around the bottom
[QUOTE=Irespawnoften;30627967]are they [I]really[/I] that much of an eye sore? I like them. :frown:
[editline]22nd June 2011[/editline]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/sad_stalker_colorv2.png[/img]
I guess that does look better.[/QUOTE]
I happen to think it looks a good deal better.
[QUOTE=Parakon;30632112]Feels a tad empty with all that black space, maybe add more to the city skyline and some other junk around the bottom[/QUOTE]
Oh, I forgot to mention it's a wip. I'll add the face of the cheesy protagonist in the empty space. The bottom is for title etc.
The skyline is from Miami, btw.
[QUOTE=Irespawnoften;30627967]are they [I]really[/I] that much of an eye sore? I like them. :frown:
[editline]22nd June 2011[/editline]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/sad_stalker_colorv2.png[/img]
I guess that does look better.[/QUOTE]
It's great!
[QUOTE=ForestRaptor;30630349]I did a movie poster!
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/roadkill.png[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/roadkillwipbig.png[/img]
C&C?
I'd also like to hear ideas for a catchpharse. The title is going to be "Roadkill". Cheesy, right?[/QUOTE]
Apart from the technical mistakes (the anatomy could be better), the composition isn't very good. There's too much negative space and nothing is really in focus, it's just three images.
Sup I drew myself
[img]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/173/5/f/too_hot_outside_for_suits_id_by_sir_william_iii-d3jpw14.png[/img][img]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/173/6/7/too_hot_outside_for_suits_id_by_sir_william_iii-d3jpw14.png[/img]
Not sure which colors I prefer
[QUOTE=Retyuoligkl;30648646]Sup I drew myself
[img]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/173/5/f/too_hot_outside_for_suits_id_by_sir_william_iii-d3jpw14.png[/img][img]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/173/6/7/too_hot_outside_for_suits_id_by_sir_william_iii-d3jpw14.png[/img]
Not sure which colors I prefer[/QUOTE]
I'd go for left.
at least you've stopped using thick black lines
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/516743/30daygamer/10.PNG[/img]
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/516743/30daygamer/10256.PNG[/img]
Drew up a combine today.
Weapon sprites!
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/aaaweaponsprites1.png[/img]
C&C? All the weapons are in the same scale (1px = 3cm).
Also, the first one to request a machine pistol/small SMG gets it done.
You should shade in shapes instead of just lines.
Makes for much nicer sprites.
[editline]23rd June 2011[/editline]
Oh and don't use gradients, gradients are bad and just look horrible.
Your USP looks fluffy because of banding.
[editline]23rd June 2011[/editline]
Instead of darkening the colors close to the outline, have a lighter line where it makes 'sense', for more readability.
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Acutance[/url]
[QUOTE=Lizzrd;30657233]You should shade in shapes instead of just lines.
Makes for much nicer sprites.
[editline]23rd June 2011[/editline]
Oh and don't use gradients, gradients are bad and just look horrible.
Your USP looks fluffy because of banding.
[editline]23rd June 2011[/editline]
Instead of darkening the colors close to the outline, have a lighter line where it makes 'sense', for more readability.
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Acutance[/url][/QUOTE]
I put my USP trough a blender, just for you! Thanks for the helpfulness.
[img]http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg9/scaled.php?server=9&filename=uspenchanged.png&res=medium[/img]
[editline]23rd June 2011[/editline]
Left is after.
Here, have a tank.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/EI7LO.png[/img]
Just something out of boredom. Colours aren't final.
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