Just want to point out that this still is required ;
[b]You are allowed to post your wips in this thread. However you have to provide constructive criticism to the previous poster.[/b]
There is always something that can be improved, so don't say that "wow your piece is perfect" or "I'm not good enough to give you constructive criticism".
[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/4419213c.png[/IMG]
I gave it a go, could be better
[QUOTE=Livewire2440;26037394][img_thumb]http://ooft.net/upload/4419213c.png[/img_thumb]
I gave it a go, could be better[/QUOTE]
What are the things in the background? also you have a similar idea to mine.
@James, the ground looks like a starry night sky, the 'sky' looks more like a groundish color.
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[QUOTE=Thereddragon;26037418]What are the things in the background? also you have a similar idea to mine.[/QUOTE]
suns
Thats what i was aiming for.
The ground in the darkness turns to an calmed twilight colour but the war rages on in the backstory to give the sky its malevolent red.
stll not finished :v:
[QUOTE=technologic;26036335]Can we use grey?[/QUOTE]
[quote]Black and white (pure black/white, no shades) is unless I say so allowed to use.
I think this one is pretty straight forward, you are always allowed to use black and white (0/0/0 versus 255/255/255) in your paintings unless I say it's not ok in the current challenge.[/quote]
Livewire, your bullet looks like it didn't detach from its case, in other words it's a bit too long
[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/246139m.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/984135m.png[/IMG]
Have a shitty attempt.
Will have to adapt to no grey.
Wewt, don't know why the helmet is in holes, also the knapsack is too small.
[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/8616118m.png[/IMG]
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Live the gun seems a bit to short and slim for the man and the 'splosion. It also looks as though it is at a different angle to the guy.
technologic ; you have a week to finish, so use that time :) You have a good idea and plenty of space to fill.
@techno those planes would look better if they were each at an angle, instead of being the same image
[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/3111242m.png[/IMG]
I'm a bit stumped here, should I keep the bang sign?
I really think it would look better without it..
Edit:
[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/542514m.png[/IMG]
It looks short because most of it is behind the guy, and the muzzle flash is crap i know but eh...
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[QUOTE=wewt!;26038576]@techno those planes would look better if they were each at an angle, instead of being the same image
[img_thumb]http://ooft.net/upload/3111242m.png[/img_thumb]
I'm a bit stumped here, should I keep the bang sign?
I really think it would look better without it..[/QUOTE]
I really like the soldier but everything else doesn't look as good in comparison, maybe you should add some more details and a landscape around the soldier.
Also with the bang sign and the whatever it is going through the soldiers head, it depends if you can make it fit the art style of the solider, but for what it is it looks good.
Huh..
It's too straightforward to me, considering how I want the image to be subtle. I'll probably remove it.
Oh and the rest is WIP, I have a ways to go.
Thanks bro :v:
[editline]13th November 2010[/editline]
Final entry:
[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/511008m.png[/IMG]
here's my WIP, it's a bit messy.
[img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/5816/wipl.png[/img]
As for wewt!'s WIP, I'm not exactly sure what to make of it, but I really like it and the depressing nature of the background. part of it kinda looks like a flash back of his childhood or something similar to that.
Damnit Anax. That's so similar to mine. :saddowns:
[QUOTE=Jamesness2;26038283][img_thumb]http://ooft.net/upload/8616118m.png[/img_thumb]
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Live the gun seems a bit to short and slim for the man and the 'splosion. It also looks as though it is at a different angle to the guy.[/QUOTE]
The battle flashes in the background really don't look like they're far off.
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[QUOTE=wewt!;26038697]Huh..
It's too straightforward to me, considering how I want the image to be subtle. I'll probably remove it.
Oh and the rest is WIP, I have a ways to go.
Thanks bro :v:
[editline]13th November 2010[/editline]
Final entry:
[img_thumb]http://ooft.net/upload/511008m.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
The soldier looks really good but the rest sort of ruins it.
I hate to sound like a douche.
@Amilo, the dude in the front looks awfully clean to be in a war zone to be honest.
[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/991337w.png[/IMG]
Just somewhere about halfway done.
[QUOTE=I'm an Alt;26049534]@Amilo, the dude in the front looks awfully clean to be in a war zone to be honest.[/QUOTE]
ok, thanks for the feedback. I'll try dirtying him up tomorrow.
[QUOTE=I'm an Alt;26049534][img_thumb]http://ooft.net/upload/991337w.png[/img_thumb]
Just somewhere about halfway done.[/QUOTE]
I'm gonna go out on a limb here and guess you're from the PW boards? :v:
[QUOTE=Amilo;26049948]I'm gonna go out on a limb here and guess you're from the PW boards? :v:[/QUOTE]
How did you know? :v:
[QUOTE=mastermaul;26041611]
The soldier looks really good but the rest sort of ruins it.[/QUOTE]
I wish you'd elaborate :smith:
Wewt I think he is comparing the art of the soldier to the style of the background, mainly the level of detail. If you are going for a more emotional picture it's fine as it is.
If you are going mainly for paint skills, detail and definition of fact instead of emotion, it needs more background detail
Oh, I wanted to keep the focus on the soldier so I didn't draw a backdrop, I left it orange.
I think it looks fine, for one but listen to everyone
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[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/820125m.png[/IMG]
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Almost done
Okay fuck it. Imma going to do it. Mine was like Recons before I saw his. Then I changed it. I'm changing it back.
I have a feeling I'm making you loose all your self confidence every time I join a competition you're in. :v:
Oh and, for anyone who's confused, my old account was called "ReconUnit", hence why most people from PW call me "Recon" instead of I'm An Alt.
[QUOTE=Anax;26039466]As for wewt!'s WIP, I'm not exactly sure what to make of it, but I really like it and the depressing nature of the background. part of it kinda looks like a flash back of his childhood or something similar to that.[/QUOTE]
Yes, that is what I was going for :buddy:
[QUOTE=wewt!;26038697]Huh..
It's too straightforward to me, considering how I want the image to be subtle. I'll probably remove it.
Oh and the rest is WIP, I have a ways to go.
Thanks bro :v:
[editline]13th November 2010[/editline]
Final entry:
[img_thumb]http://ooft.net/upload/511008m.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
I think it's really nice and not blatant at all! :D
[QUOTE=I'm an Alt;26049534]@Amilo, the dude in the front looks awfully clean to be in a war zone to be honest.
[img_thumb]http://ooft.net/upload/991337w.png[/img_thumb]
Just somewhere about halfway done.[/QUOTE]
I have one that looks just like that.
:smith:
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[QUOTE=Amilo;26049948]
I'm gonna go out on a limb here and guess you're from the PW boards? :v:[/QUOTE]
Most of the people who posted WIP for this are from the godly PW boards :v:
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