65 Million Years Ago - General

[QUOTE=Arachnidus;16600559]I did when I was 10.[/QUOTE] Then post it i don't see you sticking your neck out like i am. Pussy.

Hey, all of you, here is a little piece of advice that I learned from a bickering modding community a while back: shut the fuck up, get over whatever button was pushed and grow the fuck up. Quit bitchin like little pmsing school girls and drop it.

[QUOTE=1chains1;16615317]Hey, all of you, here is a little piece of advice that I learned from a bickering modding community a while back: shut the fuck up, get over whatever button was pushed and grow the fuck up. Quit bitchin like little pmsing school girls and drop it.[/QUOTE] Omg another poster that hasn't even read the story. Seriously, unless you read it don't post.

[QUOTE=FacepunchZen;16615569]Omg another poster that hasn't even read the story. Seriously, unless you read it don't post.[/QUOTE] I think you just completely disregarded what he just said.

[QUOTE=Shuzup;16616141]I think you just completely disregarded what he just said.[/QUOTE] Hey buddy if you don't like my art why are you here?

How can you write a story without a girl? Are they gay?

Hey look, I am posting again, and it looks like I am going to have to totally be blunt with yall. Shut. The. Fuck. Up. No one truly cares about whether or not his writing is good anymore, and hes being a little obnoxious bitch, just fucking ignore the thread and let this die already, it is getting pathetic and to the point where I feel pity for all of you, because this thread has no more purpose. So again Shut. The. Fuck. Up. Bunch of dumshits I swear.

I've read the first few chapters, and i must say..for the stuff that i've found on facepunch, this actually seems promising :]

[QUOTE=1chains1;16622672]Hey look, I am posting again, and it looks like I am going to have to totally be blunt with y[B]'[/B]all. Shut. The. Fuck. Up. No one truly cares about whether or not his writing is good anymore, and hes being a little obnoxious bitch, just fucking ignore the thread and let this die already, it is getting pathetic and to the point where I feel pity for all of you, because this thread has no more purpose. So again Shut. The. Fuck. Up. Bunch of dum[b]b[/b]shits I swear.[/QUOTE] :science: ontopic (as to not get banned) dinosaurs. real fucking original there. posting a goddamn story about fucking dinosaurs written by some kid in grade seven on facepunch might be one of the stupidest things you could post here. Unless there's a fight scene where your faggot classmates get the shit shot out of them from a dinosaur flying an F16 Fighter Jet, there's really nothing in this goddamn story that's interesting. its stupid, and if you think just adding a bunch of long words will make a story better, it doesn't. I think we understand that its hot out. we understood it the first time, no need to say it again five fucking times in one paragraph. oh, and they didn't "mysteriously disappear". they got taken out by a fucking meteorite that landed somewhere around the area of the gulf of Mexico. when a meteorite smashed into earth, nearby shit got blasted by the shock wave. If I recall from social studies, when a large amount of weight is added to earth, it changes its course around the sun, usually fucking up the environment and changing temperatures and shit. they most likely died from cold weather, or not enough food. [quote]They've existed for a FAR longer time on earths calendar than we have, and yet we immediately assume they were primitive in comparison to us. What did they act like? [B]What did the breed like?[/B] How did they feed? How did they live?[/quote] Well when a boy dinosaur loves a girl dinosaur, THEY FUCKING STICK THEIR DICK IN THEIR GODDAMN VAGINA. [quote]Ryan Eason got to his feet, and then immediately collapsed to his knees from the weight of his equipment.[/quote] [quote]This equipment was so heavy.[/quote] [quote]he found it difficult to stand in this dizzying heat. [/quote] WE FUCKING GET IT. [quote]“MacNeill just stop bitching!” Eason snapped. “I don't wanna hear you complain.” MacNeill looked at Eason, “I wasn't complaining.” he protested. “I was just saying that-” “MacNeill you were definitely bitching.” “No I wasn't!” “Yea you were.” “No, I wasn't” Eason stopped. “MacNeill.” MacNeill stopped and looked back at him. “You were bitching.” Eason continued walking. MacNeill threw up his hands in disgust. “Eason...” Ryan scrunched up his face and did his impression of David. “E-A-S-O-N!?!?!” MacNeill stopped. “Eason...” “E-A-S-O-N!?!?” “Eason...” “E-A-S-O-NNNNNN!!!” MacNeill pointed into the trees.[/quote] wait, what? I dont even know what the fuck is going on. ok, Ive had enough of this shit. Its not interesting.

[QUOTE=Diealready;16625777]:science: ontopic (as to not get banned) dinosaurs. real fucking original there. posting a goddamn story about fucking dinosaurs written by some kid in grade seven on facepunch might be one of the stupidest things you could post here. Unless there's a fight scene where your faggot classmates get the shit shot out of them from a dinosaur flying an F16 Fighter Jet, there's really nothing in this goddamn story that's interesting. its stupid, and if you think just adding a bunch of long words will make a story better, it doesn't. I think we understand that its hot out. we understood it the first time, no need to say it again five fucking times in one paragraph. oh, and they didn't "mysteriously disappear". they got taken out by a fucking meteorite that landed somewhere around the area of the gulf of Mexico. when a meteorite smashed into earth, nearby shit got blasted by the shock wave. If I recall from social studies, when a large amount of weight is added to earth, it changes its course around the sun, usually fucking up the environment and changing temperatures and shit. they most likely died from cold weather, or not enough food. Well when a boy dinosaur loves a girl dinosaur, THEY FUCKING STICK THEIR DICK IN THEIR GODDAMN VAGINA. WE FUCKING GET IT. wait, what? I dont even know what the fuck is going on. ok, Ive had enough of this shit. Its not interesting.[/QUOTE] For the record I am going into my Junior year of high school and I wrote this last year. And guess what, a meteor crashing into Earth is just a THEORY. There are thousands of other THEORYS that claim to explain what happened to the dinos. So, stop getting your panties in a twist over something noone has the answer to. If you want to do that go to the religion section.

[QUOTE=FacepunchZen;16626105]For the record I am going into my Junior year of high school and I wrote this last year.[/QUOTE] Last year = Grade seven This year = Grade eight Next Year = Grade nine you wrote it in grade seven. [Quote=FacepunchZen;16626105]If you want to do that go to the religion section.[/quote] I dont think that a magical zombie living in space has anything to do with how dinosaurs became extinct. wait, why exactly did you think when you saw my post, "OMFG RELIGIONFAG LOL". there wasnt a fucking thing in my post having to do with religion. [quote=FacepunchZen;16626105]a meteor crashing into Earth is just a THEORY. There are thousands of other THEORYS that claim to explain what happened to the dinos. So, stop getting your panties in a twist over something noone has the answer to.[/quote] You just said it. there are thousands of other ANSWERS that are completely LOGICAL. as I explained in my other post, weather and/or food issues makes the most sense. not some faggot in space hurling asteroids at earth.

[QUOTE=Diealready;16626429]Last year = Grade seven This year = Grade eight Next Year = Grade nine you wrote it in grade seven. I dont think that a magical zombie living in space has anything to do with how dinosaurs became extinct. wait, why exactly did you think when you saw my post, "OMFG RELIGIONFAG LOL". there wasnt a fucking thing in my post having to do with religion. You just said it. there are thousands of other ANSWERS that are completely LOGICAL. as I explained in my other post, weather and/or food issues makes the most sense. not some faggot in space hurling asteroids at earth.[/QUOTE] First off, last year was grade 10 this year is grade 11 (during summer you are considered the year you are going into) and next year will be grade 12. Secondly, the part i said about religion: ("So, stop getting your panties in a twist over something noone has the answer to. If you want to do that go to the religion section. ") was supposed to make fun of religion fags by stating that they get their panties in a twist over something that no one can answer. Thirdly, stop crying, just because I don't believe in a certain cause for the dinos to disappear doesn't mean I am as retarded as you think I am. I didn't base my story around how they died off, that was just ONE SENTENCE in the whole story. Hell it shouldn't even be considered part of the story. Its pretext. So please, take your middle school logic somewhere else.

fuk u game suk

[QUOTE=Diealready;16634221]fuk u game suk[/QUOTE] Clever retort, lets make babies.

:byodood:

This story is pretty damn good.

[QUOTE=Frank_West;16637324]This story is pretty damn good.[/QUOTE] Thanks :)

[QUOTE=FacepunchZen;16442542]Feel free to criticize i need all the help i can get.[/QUOTE] Then stop bitching at everyone who is criticizing your story.

I hate how you have to describe what type of gun everyone is carrying as if anyone who isn't a gun nut cares.

There wasn't enough action and the story seemed saturated and sluggish. At least for the bit I read. There wasn't enough action and there would have been loads of creatures back in the dinosaur times, they wouldn't survive 6 pages without having someones head bitten off. For further critisism, accept my Xfire invite, because nobody wants to listen to the rantings of Chris.

You should try to make your story flow better, linking the sentances together instead of quick short sentances. Also I don't see how it took you 2/3 of a year to write 62 pages unless you stoped halfway though for at least 10 months. Also dinos are overused. Edit: since you're only 10 (I think) I guess its fairly good for your ability but you shouldn't think it will look good compared to the work of older people. [QUOTE=FacepunchZen;16442542] Feel free to criticize i need all the help i can get.[/QUOTE] Never say stuff like that unless your prepared for everyone to criticize it judging by your reactions it dosn't seem like you where ready for people to critize it.

[QUOTE=Juggernog;16643383]There wasn't enough action and the story seemed saturated and sluggish. At least for the bit I read. There wasn't enough action and there would have been loads of creatures back in the dinosaur times, they wouldn't survive 6 pages without having someones head bitten off. For further critisism, accept my Xfire invite, because nobody wants to listen to the rantings of Chris.[/QUOTE] My Xfire has been down for the past couple days but feel free to add me on AIM: Imanaziwithanmp5

Lolz penoris!

FacepunchZen is an Impersonator and a troll. He did NOT write 65 million years ago, I did. I AM happycompy, the author. He's blatantly plagurizing my work. I do realize having almost no posts degrades the credibility... Edit: "I took everyone's flaws and inflated them to make good story. (except mine of course, im Ross)" and now "Ross stop looking at my posts." There it is, right there, he caught himself impersonating me. Everytime you troll, the internet dies a little.

[QUOTE=HappyCompy;16952907]FacepunchZen is an Impersonator and a troll. He did NOT write 65 million years ago, I did. I AM happycompy, the author. He's blatantly plagurizing my work. I do realize having almost no posts degrades the credibility... Edit: "I took everyone's flaws and inflated them to make good story. (except mine of course, im Ross)" and now "Ross stop looking at my posts." There it is, right there, he caught himself impersonating me. Everytime you troll, the internet dies a little.[/QUOTE] Bah fail troll is failing. I AM SPARTACUS!