I just found a story I wrote when I was 10 years old.
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I used to write stories when I was 10 all the time. I still have a few of them somewhere...
DON'T TELL ME YOU WANT MY DIAMOND
i wrote a story about dragons in 2010
had alot of sex
In 1999 I wrote a story about Fogbee, a crime fightng anthromorphic cross between a frog, a dog, and a bee whose sidekick was a budgie so you're doing better than me
Entertaining read.
[QUOTE=Big Orca;32105313]I wrote this in middle school
[url]http://bigorca107.deviantart.com/art/Chernzobog-Dream-Cycle-188583993[/url]
got suspended because i said "blood"[/QUOTE]
Biology teachers must've had a difficult job.
The first thing I remember writing was a story about everyone having to live on Mars for some reason (maybe Earth got blown up somehow)
I had to write a story when I was ten.
It had terrible unfunny humor, shitty drawings and a transparent plot.
I wrote a story about a bee wandering about then dieing on a windshield of a car, literally just flying around then going splat on a windshield of a car. I got the most original story award for that story I wrote.
YYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAHHHHOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
The stories I wrote when I was little were usually fucking crazy and dumb. I can think of a story up in a minute and write down 4 paragraphs, then sell it to my friends at school for a dollar, the story it's self is usually about me waking up, getting on a dog/zebra/dolphin/ by jumping out my window and flying over to africa, in the process I get in a huge argument with Aladdin and we get into a gun fight some how. Then I crash land into the Ebola river in Africa, and get Ebola from it so I have to find the cure
I remember I wrote a story for school once like fucking 5-6 years ago.
About a sniper who is sneaking through Pipyrate to stop some mother fucking fucking deal going down man.
Shit man it pre-dated STALKER and CoD:MW. Where's my money Infinity Ward you gypsies grifters.
What the fuck, TH89.
This is brilliant.
i remember i wrote a story about serious sam when i was 5-6. i played the hell out of that game, which inspired me to create a blood filled story. school ended up phoning my mom because they were worried about how i knew so much violence at such a young age.
I hated that book.
[QUOTE=sunzaud;32110746]I hated that book.[/QUOTE]
*breathes fire on you*
I actually find it really hard to believe you wrote this at 10 years old. There's quite a bit of advanced sentence structure and high-brow language here. You even have a glossary the reads like a glossary.
Table of contents like that as a child? I bet you smoked a lot of weed.
[QUOTE=melonmonkey;32114428]I actually find it really hard to believe you wrote this at 10 years old. There's quite a bit of advanced sentence structure and high-brow language here. You even have a glossary the reads like a glossary.[/QUOTE]
That's because I'm a genius.
I think I'll write a book about Dragons when I'm ten too. Thanks TH89!
I wish I was that cool back in 1999..
Better then Twilight.
When I was ten, Windows 95 was a year old :)
All my early writing was set in obvious ripoffs of Middle Earth, and made liberal use of "hails of arrows" and "blows so strong that they shattered arms."
[QUOTE=Big Dumb American;32116278]All my early writing was set in obvious ripoffs of Middle Earth, and made liberal use of "hails of arrows" and "blows so strong that they shattered arms."[/QUOTE]
I think my main influence here was Redwall. I don't know why else the dragons would have swords.
[QUOTE=TH89;32121708]I think my main influence here was Redwall. I don't know why else the dragons would have swords.[/QUOTE]
The book was amazing considering you wrote it at ten.
Too bad Jaques is no longer around :smith:
Anyone else surprised at how good this writing is for a 10 year old?
I love how you even copyrighted your book.
Only things I wrote were Superman spinoffs.
I remember writing a story about Pokemon Football when I was 10. Magikarp was the downs kid that won them the game.
when i' was in third grade wrote a book named Kile (kyle) because my teacher said icant have kill in a title, anways, the first part of the story was me waking up exactly like in zelda:link to the past. got out of bed and switched from zelda to Diablo 1. was playing these games when iwas like 4 so my story was me finding a portal that was red like in diablo 1 and going through it to find the gollem in the barracks in diablo 2. he was friendly and told me that there was some quest that ihad to do that involved curing the towns drinking water, just like one of the early diablo 1 quest. ido that and he tells me the witch poisned it and she was in some tower of doom or whatever. put in every generic diablo enemy in from the fallen, to the death cows lol. Iremember having 3 partners but forgot their species or names. Near the tower ihave an epic fight with fire archers that have 25 hit points, ikill those fuckers and at the end tame a dragon to fly into the tower. The with was described as the witch from wizard of oz. So instead of having the dragon kill the witch, Igo into detail about how itake my sword and make stab wounds all over her body, but my sword was unsharpend so she suffered or something really cruel. at the end she cries for mercy and curb stomp the bitch. One of the teacher aids came in to help us print and bind our books, so of course iget the grandma who keeps editing the gore out. when she got up i' fixed it and printed up the story, and dedicated it to my bestfriend spencer. we got the chance to read our stories to our class. Needless to say the students were looking at me weird and my teacher was cool with it. i'm writing this really late at night so proably gonna edit my post in the morning.
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