A music video I recently made. Please leave some constructive criticism - General

[QUOTE=circuitbawx;45815663]Lytter nordmenn til dette alltid?[/QUOTE] I'd like to think that one day they will. [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] Also, I realize the name "Dj Dong" sounds a bit vulgar and silly. The reason I chose the name in the first place is that I wanted to make different music. When i started producing a couple of years ago, i was primarirly into techno music. I was also more childish, and i thought the name “Dj Dong” was really funny. But as I grew older my focus shifted away from techno, and more towards the music that is deepest inscribed in my head. The name stuck with me, and I didn’t really think that it would be a problem, but now i kind of regret not changing the name.

Should play this before every episode, to really get in the zone [video]http://soundcloud.com/dj-dong-1/game-of-thrones-theme-dj-dong-cover[/video]

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;45815701]I'd like to think that one day they will. [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] Also, I realize the name "Dj Dong" sounds a bit vulgar and silly. The reason I chose the name in the first place is that I wanted to make different music. When i started producing a couple of years ago, i was primarirly into techno music. I was also more childish, and i thought the name “Dj Dong” was really funny. But as I grew older my focus shifted away from techno, and more towards the music that is deepest inscribed in my head. The name stuck with me, and I didn’t really think that it would be a problem, but now i kind of regret not changing the name.[/QUOTE] How old are you if I may ask?

interesting idea but really poorly executed work on it

[QUOTE=Pr0fane;45815992]How old are you if I may ask?[/QUOTE] I am 20 years old and I recently started going to school for music production, so I'm hoping to improve my skills soon. There is another person in Dj Dong, and he is 20 years old aswell. We have both been producing music as a hobby for some years. [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] And thank you all for the replies, I will try my best to take your suggestions to heart.

Dude, playing all the videos at once on this page was a mistake

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;45816053]I am 20 years old and I recently started going to school for music production, so I'm hoping to improve my skills soon. There is another person in Dj Dong, and he is 20 years old aswell. We have both been producing music as a hobby for some years. [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] And thank you all for the replies, I will try my best to take your suggestions to heart.[/QUOTE] First the bad news: I think most people dont like the music you make now, and I dont think there will be a future in it. There's no proper rythm and it sounds cluttered and messy. The good news: [B]What IS reason for thinking you might have a future[/B], is that you take criticism well and to heart, and that you actually listen. This is great. Improve, refine and hone your skill and you might, one day, with luck and talent, get to the top!

[QUOTE=Pr0fane;45816661]First the bad news: I think most people dont like the music you make now, and I dont think there will be a future in it. There's no proper rythm and it sounds cluttered and messy. The good news: [B]What IS reason for thinking you might have a future[/B], is that you take criticism well and to heart, and that you actually listen. This is great. Improve, refine and hone your skill and you might, one day, with luck and talent, get to the top![/QUOTE] Pr0fane.... profan hmmm

[QUOTE=SoUl_ReApEr2;45816737]Pr0fane.... profan hmmm[/QUOTE] What?

Do you mind if other artists (such as myself) start creating music under the genre of "dongstep"? I feel like this is the next big thing and my musical abilities will definitely be tested making music like this.

:rock: aw yea i can get down to this :rock: sub 4 sub?

[QUOTE=_illuminati_;45817351]Do you mind if other artists (such as myself) start creating music under the genre of "dongstep"? I feel like this is the next big thing and my musical abilities will definitely be tested making music like this.[/QUOTE] Of course you can. I'd be honored. [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=Dissolution;45817404]:rock: aw yea i can get down to this :rock: sub 4 sub?[/QUOTE] What's your soundcloud [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] Ok I hope I don't post to much, so please stop me if I do so, but here is a newer song by me. I think this one has better timing than Dubstep Funeral. If you have the time I would really enjoy some feedback. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=So1wjrortdM[/media]

id love to collab with you sometime if you ever want some cool guitar licks and sick riffs here's my portfolio piece it demonstrates my proud vocals and wicked skills also its a year old so sorry for any mistakes (i cant find any though) [media]http://soundcloud.com/logan-mcdaniel/american-idol-here-i-come[/media]

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;45818006]Of course you can. I'd be honored. [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] What's your soundcloud [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] Ok I hope I don't post to much, so please stop me if I do so, but here is a newer song by me. I think this one has better timing than Dubstep Funeral. If you have the time I would really enjoy some feedback. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=So1wjrortdM[/media][/QUOTE] so what's the scenario you imagine here? Who's running, and from what?

[QUOTE=DChapsfield;45818674]so what's the scenario you imagine here? Who's running, and from what?[/QUOTE] I have typed out the story in the description of the video. "The story behind this song is when I was a little kid and I was going to my grandmother. To get to her house I chose a route i didn't normally take. I usually walked on the road, but this time i chose to go over a field, wich was musch faster. But when I came halfway over, I suddenly heard gutteral sounds from the distance. The farmer had released his cows onto the field. I panicked becaouse i was very scared of cows when i was a child, so I ran as fast as I could towards my grandmothers house. This was a very traumatising experience for me, and this song is a way for me to express those feelings."

As a Norwegian I can safely say there was absolutely no Norwegian folk music in this.

Sounds like it belongs in the soundtrack to LSD Dream Emulator.

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;45818006]Of course you can. I'd be honored. [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] What's your soundcloud [editline]27th August 2014[/editline] Ok I hope I don't post to much, so please stop me if I do so, but here is a newer song by me. I think this one has better timing than Dubstep Funeral. If you have the time I would really enjoy some feedback. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=So1wjrortdM[/media][/QUOTE] to be fair I like the drums in this to some extent it's just that the synth(?) you chose for the melody really sucks, the bass sounds pretty though [editline]28th August 2014[/editline] spotify debut album when

If you do end up improving, please keep doing at least some stuff in the current style, because it's just gold. Haven't laughed so hard in a long time, this is true musical comedy.

When will we see a parody montage featuring this song?

this is like some avant garde shit right here

Dj Dong never stop making music.

follow your dreams, dj dong

I've heard worse. Such as actual dubstep.

[QUOTE=Drury;45824204]I've heard worse. Such as actual dubstep.[/QUOTE] You forgot to make a long post about what counts as "real" music.

[QUOTE=_illuminati_;45824377]You forgot to make a long post about what counts as "real" music.[/QUOTE] Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, at laboramus constituto incorrupte pri, sit duis facer inciderint eu. Ut natum recusabo consetetur mel, pri mazim mediocritatem an, posse errem eleifend sea no. No sed partem lucilius, pro ei sumo impedit. No mel modo alterum. Ne amet modo fierent quo, saepe tollit efficiendi qui no, at sed enim fugit. Ne novum altera verterem vix, ex cum facete postulant definiebas.Te vim dicta quaeque facilis, qui graecis pertinax eu. Vix at novum alterum, vocent dignissim assentior ad vel. Sed vocent moderatius at, per ea periculis reformidans, habeo labores luptatum has id. Possit luptatum expetenda per ex, et mea meis definitionem, sit mutat essent tamquam in. Aliquip civibus at nec.Vix ut appareat partiendo, eu qui legere prodesset, atqui feugiat conclusionemque eum et. In vix solum lorem tincidunt, in epicuri salutandi prodesset ius, latine aliquip vulputate mei ex. Dicant referrentur id sea. No choro constituto has, no civibus omittantur definitionem usu. Habeo elitr iudicabit ea duo. Vel commodo deserunt laboramus an, ex eos solum dictas tractatos.Mel illud errem eu, vix hinc dolorum ei, no magna putent percipit eos. Imperdiet efficiendi mel te. Nihil regione quo et. Id mei summo essent sensibus, eu mel impedit quaestio, no per laudem blandit. Dicant latine delicata eum eu, no eum magna quodsi lobortis, an suas timeam repudiandae vel. Ei quem error dolore vel, mundi inermis ne eam.In homero munere dicunt mea, nihil laboramus repudiandae at pri. Vim modus facilisis an, pro populo bonorum et. Mei ne dolore eripuit intellegam, id usu errem ancillae fastidii. Vis te minim quidam constituam, an pro oratio comprehensam. Nam labores legendos theophrastus ad, his fabellas deserunt efficiantur et. Ea probo incorrupte eos, pro nobis fabellas ex, ea his brute aliquam. In short, I like real music, dubstep is not real music.

[video=youtube;Hz-5KNDWjLk]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hz-5KNDWjLk[/video] did you draw any inspiration from this dj dong? and also, i'd like to thank you for everything you've been doing, as i've been going through a real rough time lately and your music is helping me get through it. follow ur heart dong xoxo.

fuck you op its 1am and im in tears and trying to hold back my laughter by biting my tongue

That bass drop sounds has some kind of perverse allure to it. I can't get enough, it's so absurd.

The fact that this guy seems genuine makes this 10x more hilarious