A music video I recently made. Please leave some constructive criticism

[MatheusMCardoso]

I've never really liked music, but this opened my ears. It's like i've never used them for anything worthwhile until now. I'm literally crying right now. Keep doing this please.

[Ding Dong]

You Can't Handle the Sky is pretty rad.

[Singed]

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;45979358]Does anyone know what this song is called?

[video=youtube;rX4LtKF_Znw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rX4LtKF_Znw[/video][/QUOTE]

I fucking love your art

[upsideonion]

[video=youtube;HH44Lbm19Eg]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HH44Lbm19Eg&src_vid=oKOY94ANXEg&feature=iv&annotation_id=annotation_4021965873[/video]

[circuitbawx]

Dj Dong

I have decided to do a remix of your best track, Dubstep Funeral

This is what I have so far

[URL="https://soundcloud.com/dropdatabase/dubstep-funeral-remux-wip"]https://soundcloud.com/dropdatabase/dubstep-funeral-remux-wip[/URL]

[NoPartyHats]

Bought The Creation of Dongstep, keep up the good work dong!

[RogueEsp]

I'm really, really sorry, but this isn't good.

[.Ducky]

I genuinely think You Cant Handle the Sky is a relatively decent song

[NoPartyHats]

[QUOTE=RogueEsp;46036275]I'm really, really sorry, but this isn't good.[/QUOTE]

It's subjective. It's rough, absolutely. Could he use work? Of course! But he is pioneering his own genre, between that and being a new artists, he's gonna have some rough patches, but you can definitely see the groundwork for some baller tracks within The Creation of Dongstep. You Can't Handle the Sky, if redone by him in say 5 years, could be one of my favorite electronic tracks.

[morky]

Facepunch song incoming!

[TheRealDJDong]

[QUOTE=No Party Hats;46036123]Bought The Creation of Dongstep, keep up the good work dong![/QUOTE]

Thank you very much!

[QUOTE=circuitbawx;46036100]Dj Dong

I have decided to do a remix of your best track, Dubstep Funeral

This is what I have so far

[URL="https://soundcloud.com/dropdatabase/dubstep-funeral-remux-wip"]https://soundcloud.com/dropdatabase/dubstep-funeral-remux-wip[/URL][/QUOTE]

Really cool, I would love to hear the finished song!

Wow, this is actually really weird for me. I actually never imagined anyone would like my music. That someone would take the time to cover my songs and buy the album. But I really appreciate it! Here is the special thank you Facepunch song I posted about earlier. I guess a lot of you have played Half Life 2 since this is a Garrysmod forum. It's definitely one of my favourite games, so I decided to make a Half Life 2 themed song for you guys. I hope you enjoy it!

[video=youtube;rekAvF2roVs]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rekAvF2roVs[/video]

[rejax]

it's beautiful
[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TBsdWW7MOew&channel=Jimbomcb]vibes[/URL]

[LieutenantLeo]

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;45919178]Allright. Here it is. The first Dj Dong album.

This is a very emotional moment for me. When I first started producing music I never in the world imagined I'd release a full album. But here I am. I would like to thank all of you at Facepunch for the comments, I really appreciate them. You have encouraged me to pursue music as something I want to do for the rest of my life. Now I've found out that producing music is something that makes me truly happy, and I'm never going to stop.

If you have some time to spare, I would very much enjoy if you checked out the album. It features two new songs. [URL="http://djdong.bandcamp.com/releases"]https://djdong.bandcamp.com/releases[/URL]

And again, thank all of you for the kind words. I have a special Facepunch song in the planning, so stay tuned.[/QUOTE]

Isn't it illegal to sell a cover of a song?

[mezzokoko]

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;46039628]Thank you very much!

[video=youtube;rekAvF2roVs]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rekAvF2roVs[/video][/QUOTE]

Oh lord, this makes me feel like a huge amateur right now ...

Ask this guy, if you wanna make the soundtrack for his game: [url]http://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1402969[/url]

[TheRealDJDong]

Hello people on Facepunch! I'ts time for the annual [I]Dj Dong song naming competition![/I] (The competition will happen on the 28th of september each year starting now)

[B]How to participate in the contest:[/B]
To get a chance to name the next Dj Dong song, you have to make one piece of art. It must be something visual, like a drawing or a painting. You can make it digitally or physically. Just post the picture here in the thread. The art must be something related to Dongstep. The deadline is the [B]4th of october[/B]. The winner will then be announced the next day. If you want, your art can be incorporated in the official video art.

If you have any questions, just ask.

Dj Dong now has a Deviantart account. I will be posting our art there. Not just art made for Dj Dong, but other stuff aswell. [url]http://djdong.deviantart.com/[/url]

There is also a new song!
[video=youtube;eX9rAUTAaLc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eX9rAUTAaLc[/video]

[Str4fe]

It's almost too good

[Dwarfy77]

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;46098107]Hello people on Facepunch! I'ts time for the annual [I]Dj Dong song naming competition![/I] (The competition will happen on the 28th of september each year starting now)

[B]How to participate in the contest:[/B]
To get a chance to name the next Dj Dong song, you have to make one piece of art. It must be something visual, like a drawing or a painting. You can make it digitally or physically. Just post the picture here in the thread. The art must be something related to Dongstep. The deadline is the [B]4th of october[/B]. The winner will then be announced the next day. If you want, your art can be incorporated in the official video art.

If you have any questions, just ask.

Dj Dong now has a Deviantart account. I will be posting our art there. Not just art made for Dj Dong, but other stuff aswell. [url]http://djdong.deviantart.com/[/url]

There is also a new song!
[video=youtube;eX9rAUTAaLc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eX9rAUTAaLc[/video][/QUOTE]

I'm going to be honest, I actually like this one above the others :v:

[Dr. Fishtastic]

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;46098107]Hello people on Facepunch! I'ts time for the annual [I]Dj Dong song naming competition![/I] (The competition will happen on the 28th of september each year starting now)

[B]How to participate in the contest:[/B]
To get a chance to name the next Dj Dong song, you have to make one piece of art. It must be something visual, like a drawing or a painting. You can make it digitally or physically. Just post the picture here in the thread. The art must be something related to Dongstep. The deadline is the [B]4th of october[/B]. The winner will then be announced the next day. If you want, your art can be incorporated in the official video art.

If you have any questions, just ask.

Dj Dong now has a Deviantart account. I will be posting our art there. Not just art made for Dj Dong, but other stuff aswell. [url]http://djdong.deviantart.com/[/url]

There is also a new song!
[video=youtube;eX9rAUTAaLc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eX9rAUTAaLc[/video][/QUOTE]

the beat timing in this feels just ever so slightly off to be bothersome

like enable snapping in whatever sequencer you're using

[MatheusMCardoso]

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;46039628][video=youtube;rekAvF2roVs]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rekAvF2roVs[/video][/QUOTE]

So fucking good. 2:10 made me crap my pants, is it the brown note?

Garry should hire you and use this for the Rust soundtrack.