• Dark Matter - Heavy electronic track
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Title says all, check it out! [media]http://soundcloud.com/color-coast/dark-matter[/media] Comments, criticisms, etc...? Thanks :)
Add some reverb onto that snare, you'll notice it'll sound alot more fuller. I like that LFO'd sound your using at 1:40, really nice addition but its kind of made redundant once it hits 1:53. Also try and get your kick-ins a bit more obvious, like at the moment it sounds like the song is just an intro-main-outro rather than intro-kick in-main etc. I also don't think that lead at 1:50 does the chorus justice, it should have alot more presence, try adding a saw wave to it and make it a bit more 'fuzzy' so that it has a bit of grit to it if you know what I mean. Other than that its a great song well arranged and sounds well put together.
Sure is heavy. Good job :v:
i enjoyed many bits
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[QUOTE=Patcher;27004500]-snip- to avoid flaming[/QUOTE] I don't mind if you post criticisms or whatever Thanks to all the posters, though!
Pretty good but might need some mastering. I like it.
Sexy song, very much my kind of music. Can't wait to audiosurf it.
Oh this is just awesome! I can't wait to see more!
[QUOTE=Natrox;27005379]Pretty good but might need some mastering. I like it.[/QUOTE] If I had to choose I'd rather mix it again and not master.
[QUOTE=Natrox;27005379]Pretty good but might need some mastering. I like it.[/QUOTE] You don't master until you fix the mix, and the mix on this could use some work. It's a bit on the muddy side, everything smears together a little too much.
[QUOTE=KmartSqrl;27045183]You don't master until you fix the mix, and the mix on this could use some work. It's a bit on the muddy side, everything smears together a little too much.[/QUOTE] I've always had a problem with that, I can't seem to fix it. Any tips?
[QUOTE=KanonieR;27045749]I've always had a problem with that, I can't seem to fix it. Any tips?[/QUOTE] That's just a sign that your brain comes up with more ideas than is healthy for a single song. It's common among musicians and doesn't require "fixing" so much as harnessing. :P
i liked the melody from 30-42, i think it would sound a lot better as a trance tune though
[QUOTE=Matix;27071256]That's just a sign that your brain comes up with more ideas than is healthy for a single song. It's common among musicians and doesn't require "fixing" so much as harnessing. :P[/QUOTE] It's not about ideas, I'm talking about mixing and mastering
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