• [ECIV]Evozation
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[img]http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/282/evolizationjawamap.png[/img] Shaman Luun and 4 of her followers wander through the desert, looking for shelter. She sees a tree, and heads towards it. (this is my 1st civ, is 4 people ok? more or less?) Trait: Scavengers Benefit: Jawas are accustomed to their native Tatooine, where resources are hard to come by. They can harvest more resources per object (IE: tree), salvage destroyed things, and scavenge things after a battle. Disadvantage: They lack the fighting skills seen in other races, they are more accustomed to trading and diplomacy than being aggressive.
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Thanks Trifon :3:
I think you can add more though.
Who, me?
No, the Jawa guy.
[URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Evociv2.png[/IMG][/URL] 4 oni move in Traits:- [U]Assasin[/U] Advantage: Being a demonic being, they are masters of shadows, able to take advantage of almost everywhere, and now able to become completely invisible, the claws on their hands have grown for them to become brilliant warriors Disadvantage: Being brilliant warriors and excellent assasins, they do not exceed in growing crops and tending to animals, having to kill what they find in order to survive, even though they have no mouth, they also do not have the technology to have guns, vehicles and other technology. [U]All in all[/U] +Stealth +Combat -Resources -Technology
[img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/282/evolizationjawamap.png[/img] Walking, and another Jawa catches up behind them. BTW Kommy, you forgot to put your name.
Wh-wh-wh-whats that?
A womp rat.
Looks a little large for a womp rat
[img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091203051933/starwars/images/c/c9/Womp_Rat.jpg[/img] Apparently they're 2 meters tall, and my Jawas are only about 1, 1.4 meters tall. So they're about the good size, maybe even too small. :)
Declare [img]http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/9022/ecocivhomebase.png[/img] Ten lone surviving crew members of the Aurora land on a strange planet. No UEF (United Earth Federation) Colonies exist here. The drop pods fall virutally silent to the surface of the planet. Their stealth rendered useless by the roar of trans=atmospheric containment crates slam into the planet's crust. The doors pop off as the commander moves to his men, waiting for all of them to reach the surface before giving out orders. He gives a sigh of dispair as he realizes that these pods will be one of the last signs of civilization for a very long time. UEF Forces Attribute: Survivors Benefits [+] Resources crash to the planet's surface allowing for easy construction. It's a long way from a distress beacon, but it'll do. [+] Field Manual: Survival 101 [-] The last of their kind... for now: It'll be a long time before they can reach any other ships for a long time. They aren't getting back up until then. [-] What do you mean there's no rifles?!: Shouldn't have left it on the ship kid, maybe next time you wont expect more than a flare gun to be in the survival cache.
Jesus christ, what is with the purple and the shaded sky
1. too futureistic. 2. work on the map
[QUOTE=synth;21411591]Jesus christ, what is with the purple and the shaded sky[/QUOTE] Shaded rock Mid-morning [QUOTE=Thereddragon;21411628] 1. too futureistic. 2. work on the map[/QUOTE] It's just an explaination of how They got there. Going from having everything to having nothing. It's hard to change things when you don't tell me what you think should be changed.
help with map: keep the water and air one colour it would look better.
They don't really have any disadvantages, no one has rifles and no one can call in reinforcements either.
Sky - one colour. All the colours you currently have are ugly. Purple - I've never seen that colour of purple as a big blob underground? Gold Mine thingy - a lot of gold, don't you think? Sea - looks more like some floating slush puppy. More blue. Why do you have two levels of sea? o_O Make your sea go straight to the bottom too, you don't need that strip of sand at the bottom. Grass - way too thick, have you ever seen grass that thick? Also, grass isn't clumped in big heaps like that, it's strands. Plus, what grass implements itself through dirt and stays the same colour? Usually you find routes under the soil, not grass still. Underground cavern thing - Blue is horrible. So is the orangey colour, find some reference pictures and take colours from them. There, now we expect to see improvements.
thanks for writeing the stuff i want to see improved im half asleep by here.
Declare on world map. [editline]10:40PM[/editline] [IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/de9800worldmap1.png[/IMG] Updated my territory.
[img]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/e07200fastcivmap.png[/img] Will declare territor later tired now.
[img]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/e7ae0077fa00civvymap.png[/img] The leader blessed by the tree gods stands high on top of a struck down tree, the followers bent down to show respect they treat him better than anyone else, he is the one who teaches them how to sneak how to stay hidden.
The followers stand around looking for something to do, while Luun walks through the trees. Observing the Oasis, she breathes a sigh of relief, and says to herself [B]"This will do perfectly!"[/B]. She thinks of a plan of what to do in her head while gazing at the water running down the side of the mountain. [editline]06:27PM[/editline] [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/282/evolizationjawamap.png[/img]
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Worldmap declare! [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/aadawdawd.png[/img]
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This appears to be going well will post in a bit
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Oskutin, you play PW? o_O [editline]09:18AM[/editline] Sorry guys, I'll post my map when I have finished some of my men.
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