• I was published by a web blog.
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So many I's.
Cool story, I had fun reading your reply to her post as well.
I like Capt. Bald.
Greetings again Captain Bold. Glade to see you made quite a career for yourself.
I thought it was a excellent short story, and good on you for ripping the shit out of that person trying to criticize your work.
Half the battle of writing is killing the assumption that your story is shit.
I like your writing, keep it up.
what's a captain bald just kidding, you're famous
is your story about bald people
[QUOTE=OvB;30438157]I'd rather be poor and happy than rich and unhappy.[/QUOTE] I'd rather be rich, I want a trophy wife.
[QUOTE=Captain Bald;30253423]I also work at and co-own a photography studio, which makes a shit ton of money[/QUOTE] Yeah ok thanks for letting us know.
[QUOTE=MoarFunz;30441007]Yeah ok thanks for letting us know.[/QUOTE] you're welcome.
Just read your rebuttal on that lady. Is she retarded? How the fuck is the POV unfocused. I'm pretty damn sure it's first person when there's and "I" in every damn paragraph.
If you go elsewhere on those forums you'll find her writing. It's just unintelligible, like 6 5-syllable-words a sentence
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