[QUOTE=zenhorse;23193633]If the game was downstairs, what was that he just played?[/QUOTE]
[quote]and if her dad were dead, THEN WHO WAS PHONE?[/quote] was the first thing I thought of. But otherwise, meh... Not too bad.
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[QUOTE=GhettoGeek;23197134]But then who was phone?[/QUOTE]
Oh boy, I'm late.
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[QUOTE=Mexican;23196423]Then who was game?![/QUOTE]
I'm very late... :byodood:
Some one make a Russian version of this
[QUOTE=Phoenix Wright;23197591]Some one make a Russian version of this[/QUOTE]
Here you go Mr. Attorney!
Once in Soviet Russia, a gamer there was. Obessive player of Person First Shooters, he was. Glorious Return to Castle Wolfenstein, his favorite was. He play it seven to twenty-four with no stop. Up until glorious midnight, he would play it. He memorize every level and say them by heart. He knowed all of the characters and what did they. He knew it all.
Then, it was time for glorious Soviet highschool college. His Box-X left was in his attic was, together with glorious video game Return to Castle Wolfenstein. It sat like a professional sitter until the boy came back in the summer after graduating to KGB school.
The first thing on his mind was Return to Castle Wolfenstein. Qucikly he made his way up to the atticloft and grabbed his Box-X collection. The thing that is strange is, the boxcasette didn't have a single piece of dust on it, unlike every other boxcasette and sofachair and tabletop in there. He went to his glorious Soviet room, hooked the Box-X up, and then fired up Return to Castle Wolfenstein.
But different, the game was.
On the missionselect screen, a skull next to every gamelevel icon was. The background in the back, instead of the glorious raining background, it was all red. But what caught his eye most was an extra gamelevel on the missionselect menu. He knew level was not last time. No name for it was just ???. Being curious as a German spy he selected the gamelevel.
The gamelevel had glorious playerman Beejay being parachuted onto the side of a Soviet mansion that was ruined. What surprising was that there was no musicsound. All there was just random splices of scaryscreams. As Beejay made his way into the glorious Soviet mansion, things different was. No one there was. Quiet, everything was.
Further through the gamelevel, Beejay came to a tabletop where a uglydisgussting German radio stood. Beejay activated the uglydisgusting radio, expecting Germanpig oinks. But instead ultra-loud static there was coming through it. There then high pitched Germanpig oinking was. It explosionblasted through the Teevee speakers and hurt began to the boy's ears. He went to turn the volume down but the Germanpig oinking didn't go down, went higher and higher up. Then suddenly, voice came through. A frightened soldier, it sounded like.
"LEADER STALIN! HELLLLP! SOMEONE! COMING FOR YOU THEY ARE! RUN NOW BEFORE THE GERMANPIGS.....AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!
The radio went silent and a few very low oinks came through only. Then, as suddenly as the Berlin Wall exploded, the lights went off and Beejay was alone in darkness for several long seconds. Suddenly then, torch lit up to the side that revealed did a long wayhall that had not been there before. Torches to both sides of the wall lit up and they panned down the hallway revealing an almost infinitely long wayhall.
Beejay moving kept down to a door which see he could in the distance. The wayhall seemed like it went on forever and after. Then things started to go nogoodbad. There was loud Germanpig oinks coming from all direction. They grew louder and louder to the point where the boy turned the audio off.
But the oinks still came.
Further down, images began popping on the screen. They were in-game soldiers being eaten by zombies. But they were drawn realistically and made it look like real. Screen began to shake and Hitleradolfs voice began to shout the boy's name.
"JANE! JANE! DIE, YOU ARE GOING TO! JANE! JANE!"
The Hitleradolf voice playing kept as Beejay end of the wayhall reached. He opened the door and a glorious scenecut played.
The scene showed Beejay from the back walking slowly into a blackpitch room. Then the door shut and there was nothing but darkness total. Then the Hitleradolf voice came laughing with others as Beejay scream began to. A picture popped up on the screen that made the boy fall back on his chair.
It was a still picture of Hitleradolf's holed head only this time it was drawn very realistically and you could see every finedetail.
Then the Hitleradolf voice came back in::
"DIE YOU ARE GOING TO! DIE YOU ARE GOING TO!"
Then the screen black went. The Box-X shaking began and screen began rattling. Then a loud laughter came: HAHAHAHAH!
Boy got up of his chair, ripped open the Ceedee and coffe holder, crumbled the Ceedee into several pieces and along with the casettebox into his fireplace.
He weak felt and stumbled onto his bed where he just laid there, trying to stay sane. A few minutes later mom came in and noticed the Box-X on.
"Oh you hooked it up you have? You very anxious are. I put your game downstairs when I cleaned the atticloft a while ago so it would not get dusty. Hope happy you are!" Then she left. But while mom was downstairs, she thought she could hear Hitleradolf's voice and called KGB. Boy was killed, and all records erased by KGB.
Such is life in Soviet Russia.
this is a "first (blank)" thread. Kinda like "this is my first map so dont expect it to be good". you cant expect it to be a masterpiece. It was fun to read while listening to maiden though :P
It makes no sense. If the boy would've had any brains he would've stopped playing when the screams didn't stop after he turned the sounds off.
Aww, that wasn't scary.
That sucked.
that wasn't the least good, and if you are so good at writing other stuff whip something up right here and now.
creepy pastas shouldn't start with " once there was" its suppose to be from the person itself most of the time that was more of a story.
just breakin' it to ya
[QUOTE=Mryamanami;23204150]that wasn't the least good, and if you are so good at writing other stuff whip something up right here and now.
creepy pastas shouldn't start with " once there was" its suppose to be from the person itself most of the time that was more of a story.
just breakin' it to ya[/QUOTE]
look up The Facepunch Times. I made that.
I think I'll write a Doom one sometime. I like this sort of stuff, but the OP [i]really[/i] needs improvement.
Whats up with all these shitty creepypastas.
This is crappypasta
[QUOTE=Laserbeams;23205444]This is crappypasta[/QUOTE]
This pun is so painfully obvious, that I want to seriously harm myself for not thinking of it sooner.
oh shit what did he play
Don't think its been mentioned, but did anyone else notice the excessive use of "then suddenly" in the story?
If the game was downstairs...
THEN WHO WAS PHONE?
EDIT: Oh, and I thought I'd try my luck at creepypasta too:
The Day of all the Blood:
THIS IS THE STORY OF A DAY WHERE THERE WAS ALL THIS BLOOD. A MAN WAS WALKING AROUND AND BLOOD STARTED COMING OUT OF HIM EVERYWHERE. THERE WAS SO MUCH BLOOD THAT IT FILLED UP AN ELEVATOR. HE WENT TO THE STORE AND THERE WAS JUST BLOOD ALL OVER THE PLACE! PEOPLE WERE SLIPPING IN IT AND THEY WERE ALL GROSSED OUT. HE TRIED TO GO SWIMMING AND ALL OF THE SHARKS WENT NUTS AND BITTENED EVERYBODY. HE GOT CHASED BY ALL THE VAMPIRES EVER. ONE TIME THE BLOOD GOT A KID AND A DOG. AT THE END OF THE DAY EVERYONE DECIDED THEY WOULD SEND HIM TO SPACE SO THAT HE WOULD STOP GETTING BLOOD EVERY WHERE. THE SCARIEST PART IS THAT THE MAN WAS YOU!!! (OR HE WAS A LADY IF YOU ARE A LADY) AND YOU FORGOT THAT THIS HAPPENED
lol his name is bj
Then who was [b]DAD?[/B]
You should have started it with "It was a dark and stormy night..."
[QUOTE=GrimBloodyFable;23205372]I think I'll write a Doom one sometime. I like this sort of stuff, but the OP [i]really[/i] needs improvement.[/QUOTE]
Yes please
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