I gave rapping one last try. - General

:( everyone is mean, but thats ok at least you are honest, I guess rap just isnt my thing I will just have to find something else to be good at.

Sounds like you're talking instead of actually rapping. There's no emotion at all. Just follow TH89's advice when he hits up this thread.

Cool you live near me, too bad you fucking suck

Here's the problem. I don't know if energy can be taught. It's sad but I don't think you have the talent to become a rapper.

[quote]Perpetually poised in a downtown studio in Toronto, Canada, the electronic music artist Pronobozo has been carving his own niche in today's iteration of the ever-evolving music industry. With a history of over 500,000 gratis mp3 downloads and a present average of over 150 album downloads per day, Pronobozo has set positive expectations for other aspiring Creative Commons (CC) artists. [/quote] It'd be better if it didn't have tons of editing and modulation. Check out Pronobozo for some examples. [url]http://pronobozo.com/[/url] [editline]14th December 2010[/editline] [quote]Perpetually poised in a downtown studio in Toronto, Canada, the electronic music artist Pronobozo has been carving his own niche in today's iteration of the ever-evolving music industry. With a history of over 500,000 gratis mp3 downloads and a present average of over 150 album downloads per day, Pronobozo has set positive expectations for other aspiring Creative Commons (CC) artists. [/quote] It'd be better if it didn't have tons of editing and modulation. Check out Pronobozo for some examples. [url]http://pronobozo.com/[/url]

[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26705300]:( everyone is mean, but thats ok at least you are honest, I guess rap just isnt my thing I will just have to find something else to be good at.[/QUOTE] Draw three circles, like a venn diagram: [img]http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ARqPOVHg04YNRM:http://www.daviddarling.info/images/Venn_diagram.gif&t=1[/img] One circle is for what you enjoy, one for that you are good at, and one for what can make you money. Aim for whatever ends up in the center.

I had a feeling that name sounded familiar, then I realized it was you. I regret clicking.

[QUOTE=Mattk50;26704828]I thougt rap had died out in the mainstream by now[/QUOTE] Do they not have radios or TV where you live?

Did you actually record the canon "sample" from your speakers. Goddamn.

I couldn't even listen to enough of the song to tell you my honest opinion. The song kept pausing after 5 seconds.

Really improved. The sample sounds like it was recorded with a microphone

You want to know how to rap? Pick up this book [url]http://www.howtorapbook.com/[/url] It has many great MC/hip hop artists in it describing how they perfected the art. [editline]15th December 2010[/editline] Also, nasally voice, try to do something about that.

The new one is a huge improvement over the old.

Honestly, you're not that bad. If you haven't been doing this for very long, I'd encourage you to keep going. Just look at how long it's takes for many musicians to build a fanbase.

lol is all I can say

i actually like your lyrics haha :)

Oh god. Your avatar just makes everything more funny.

Rapping is bad and is a crime.

This is how you do it: [url]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/TJ_Big_Blaster_Electric_BoogieTu154M_-_Facepunch_Be_My_Shawdy1.mp3[/url]

[QUOTE=Tu154M;26710508]This is how you do it: [url]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/TJ_Big_Blaster_Electric_BoogieTu154M_-_Facepunch_Be_My_Shawdy1.mp3[/url][/QUOTE] I can't stop crying. Too beautiful!

[QUOTE=ShazzyFreak0;26705310]Sounds like you're talking instead of actually rapping. There's no emotion at all. Just follow TH89's advice when he hits up this thread.[/QUOTE] His advice was: [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yv5okplLajY[/media] Make a song about raptors

[QUOTE=Tu154M;26710508]This is how you do it: [url]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/TJ_Big_Blaster_Electric_BoogieTu154M_-_Facepunch_Be_My_Shawdy1.mp3[/url][/QUOTE] hahaha that was awesome, what editing program are you using?

[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26710795]hahaha that was awesome, what editing program are you using?[/QUOTE] Adobe Audition.

I was using audicity like a n00b and the only thing I have to record vocals with is my video camera so everytime I record I have to export the audio of my video, it makes it a tedious process, it seems like I can't find a decent mic for under 50$ everything is shit.

[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26710868]I was using audicity like a n00b and the only thing I have to record vocals with is my video camera so everytime I record I have to export the audio of my video, it makes it a tedious process, it seems like I can't find a decent mic for under 50$ everything is shit.[/QUOTE] Audacity isn't bad and can give you brilliant results if you use it right. I just find Audition a lot sleeker, it doesn't make my blargy skills any better. Everything under $50 in microphones is probably shit, yes. I've recommended this to someone else for a cheap starter a while ago, it is certainly better than a video camera. [url]http://www.amazon.com/Samson-SAQ1UCW-Q1U-Microphone/dp/B000RMDGWA/ref=sr_1_20?ie=UTF8&qid=1292425572&sr=8-20[/url] Also i think rap is not your genre. You should experiment a little with different styles.

Find a better beat, the one you used is horribly MIDI. I like how your hair is blue though.

[QUOTE=Tu154M;26710955] Also i think rap is not your genre. You should experiment a little with different styles.[/QUOTE] I play accoustic guitar but I don't think that is any better than my rapping skills. point and case [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kLwzqlSkGxQ[/url]

[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26711035]I play accoustic guitar but I don't think that is any better than my rapping skills. point and case [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kLwzqlSkGxQ[/url][/QUOTE] Don't see what's wrong. Wish i could play guitar and wasn't too lazy to learn. Your singing is good. Now you just need to show some more boobs and the labels will most likely come running to you. That's how i'd do it. [editline]15th December 2010[/editline] If only i had some.

I HATE rap. So I won't say anything.

hahahaha oh the midi sounds! they are horrible!