Hey, so. It almost sounds like you're nervous to rap even by yourself. Confidence. Change the pitch in your voice and TRY. It's not the worst thing ever but c'mon.
Listened to both songs, and quite frankly, it's horrible. You have a great voice but it is NOT suited for rap, the lyrics are really lame, and your use of Canon in D is driving me fucking insane.
i doubt you're really going to hack my bank account.
-snoop-
"A gangsters life ain't fun"
I'm a G-A-N-G-S-T-E-R like Scarface bitch i'm a superstar,
Revered by all though I am the villain
Gainin' more juice by the others I'm killin'
profilin' and stylin'
Drive a fly ride and the hos just pile in
I make gangster money
'cause I'm gangster bold
Fuck gangster bitches
wearing gangster clothes
I'm the boy wonder, god of thunder
Make a move and I'll put you under
I'm notorious, I live glorious
I'm the fly gangster that remains victorious
Get up in your top-shelf clothes
Cold fuckin' top-shelf hos
I'm the man they call number one
Don't try this shit at home
A gangsta's life ain't fun
Mabus and me are rap bros
Together forever who knows,
We pop a cap in blitzkrieg88's ass with our colt 45
I'm gonna grab a mic and make the studio alive
while mabus got an ak47 and he shoots clive.
What what
Why was my volume so high :(
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oops actually you are pretty hot i take that back
[editline]15th December 2010[/editline]
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Welcome to Facepunch, enjoy your stay.
[QUOTE=Tu154M;26712795]Welcome to Facepunch, enjoy your stay.[/QUOTE]
Excuse me?
Oh god I hate nerdcore so much. It's trying to be funny by contrasting "nerdy" stuff in to already shit music.
[QUOTE=Activeellis;26712690]Mabus and me are rap bros
Together forever who knows,
We pop a cap in blitzkrieg88's ass with our colt 45
I'm gonna grab a mic and make the studio alive
while mabus got an ak47 and he shoots clive.
What what[/QUOTE]
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Try to put more emphasis on your P's, T's C's (K's) etc. This in sync with a good beat will help your vocals sound more percussive and they'll sit better in the mix. Not sure what system you are using, but good production can go a long way. Put more compression on your vocals, and don't be shy to let them sit above the mix. If it helps, pan most of the other instruments a bit and drop the high-mid frequencies a touch so that the vox sit better. Add a noise gate to cut any background noise created by the increased compression. Put a hard limiter in your master channel so that even if the track channels clip, you wont get any digital distortion on the main outputs. Also, mic-proximity; get closer to the mic, it'l give a deeper warmer sound. Listening to this on my NS-10's it sounds a bit tinny. Could just be the low bitrate off the site, but you might want to boost your low and mid levels a bit more. Slapping on a decent multipressor in the master output could help, but I always prefer just to use track automation.
(Hope none of this comes across as condescending. If it helps, I'm a graduate in Audio Engineering. Haven't been involved in it in a few years but it use to be my life. Good luck!).
Edit: just listened to the 'old' version, production on that is much better! Were you going for a much more raw sound?
You're pretty good.
I actually like part of your song.
Haha I am rated the number 3 hip hop artist in my city out of 26 people, I bet those other people viewing my page are pissed.
Lyrics are stupid, singing is boring.
Drop it, females don't belong in rap
This is shit.
i figured everyone would just jack off over this chick and tell her how awesome her music was so she might send them tits or something
but surprisingly they're all being painfully honest
[editline]15th December 2010[/editline]
bipolar fucks
But.. I actually LIKED part of the old one
[QUOTE=1337_f00;26714749]i figured everyone would just jack off over this chick and tell her how awesome her music was so she might send them tits or something
but surprisingly they're all being painfully honest
[editline]15th December 2010[/editline]
bipolar fucks[/QUOTE]
AH, Facepunch is growing up.
[QUOTE=1337_f00;26714749]i figured everyone would just jack off over this chick and tell her how awesome her music was so she might send them tits or something
but surprisingly they're all being painfully honest
[editline]15th December 2010[/editline]
bipolar fucks[/QUOTE]
my tits suck anyway, so does my rapping, I'll stick with playing my guitar for now.
[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26705300]:( everyone is mean, but thats ok at least you are honest, I guess rap just isnt my thing I will just have to find something else to be good at.[/QUOTE]
You can use your beauty for something
[sp]Convert it to prostitution[/sp]
Your voice sounds a bit nasally. It might be the mic you recorded with, or it might be your voice. I would work on it though. There are a few parts when you are completely off-rhythm and the flow is for the most part very bland.
[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26744204]my tits suck anyway, so does my rapping, I'll stick with playing my guitar for now.[/QUOTE]
see i can't even reply to this post without feeling like a fat sweaty nerd
[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26705300]:( everyone is mean, but thats ok at least you are honest, I guess rap just isnt my thing I will just have to find something else to be good at.[/QUOTE]
Also, just because you aren't good at something immediately doesn't mean you should quit. Everything worth having is worth working for. If you practice you will improve, simple as that. So keep working on it.
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