Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition>

[onox37]

[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/3d1.png[/img]

Post artwork that you feel doesn't deserve a thread or could use a little C&C love.

ONLY FIVE RULES:

[b]1. No Photography[/b]: Photography goes into the [url=http://www.facepunch.com/threads/888650-the-quot-Which-camera-is-right-for-me-quot-Megathread]"Creative Photography That Doesn't Deserve A Thread"[/url] thread.
[b]2. No MS Paint drawings[/b]: MS Paint drawings belong in the MS Paint section. It couldn't be any clearer. It's right [url=http://www.facepunch.com/forumdisplay.php?f=316]HERE[/url] in case you missed it.
[b]3. Give feedback[/b] This is the most important rule. The reason the art isn't posted in it's own thread is because the user feels that it's not complete enough to make one. Tell him/her why!
[b]4. No 3D Stuff![/b] 3D Artwork belongs in the [url=http://www.facepunch.com/threads/964538-Digital-3D-Art-v6] 3D Art[/url] thread regardless of completion.
[b]5. No Anime[/b] Unless you are or become Maya2007 in the near future.
[b]6. No arguments about what art is and isn't[/b]

:siren:[highlight]Post Only Your Own Work[/highlight]:siren:
Have Fun!

I'm going to bed right now so finish up the other thread for now.

[Detlef]

OOOH yeah baby let's get this shit on

[editline]18th January 2011[/editline]

Title made me lol

[onox37]

Thank you thank you.

[ChestyMcGee]

[QUOTE=onox37;27496088]
[b]5. No Anime[/b] Unless you are or become Maya2007 in the near future.
[b]6. No arguments about what art is and isn't[/b][/QUOTE]

This seems a little contradictory, not that I like anime with no traditional fundamentals behind it.

[Greeneyes]

Yes! No rules against Furry art. I can finally post my ever growing collection.

[kevlar jens]

can't wait to post some Madness scenes made in Flash!!

[Asgard]

I already got my scene editor ready!

[Super_Poo]

Ba-zing.

[Maya2008]

Already up and running?
Gonna post some update on something.

[JoeyZ]

Oh man,

Sorry 3v3, but the title made me laugh.

[3v3ryb0dy]

Glad it made atleast someone happy.

[Maya2008]

Changed my design of the spring festival poster.
[img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2408/tsaspringposter2copy.png[/img]
The rabbit is a paint over.
and damn, I need better fonts.
I'd write the words my own if my hand writing did not suck.

Still under work.

[Detlef]

Don't be sad. your critiques are mostly helpful, we just have to filter some crap first.

[editline]18th January 2011[/editline]

to 3v3ryb0dy <3

[ChestyMcGee]

That's a shit ton better.

Moar contrast though.

[3v3ryb0dy]

Yes, colours seem bit washed down. Needs darker values.

[Maya2008]

I do have a high contrast version, just that the font will be an even harder ask to design.
[img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/2408/tsaspringposter2copy.png[/img]

[ChestyMcGee]

Maybe don't turn the contrast up on the background where the text is over it? You could always have text with borders or something.

[3v3ryb0dy]

[QUOTE=Detlef;27501350]Don't be sad. your critiques are mostly helpful, we just have to filter some crap first.

[editline]18th January 2011[/editline]

to 3v3ryb0dy <3[/QUOTE]
I'm not sad. It's like advertising and it creates prejudice which will in turn create intresting situations.

[ForestRaptor]

[img_thumb]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/3817/postapogunsilencer.png[/img_thumb]
Improved lighting and overall colours, fixed trigger. Removed silencer wrap.

[ChestyMcGee]

Desaturate your rust more. Rust may have a strong orange/red hue, but it is more brown than what you have here.

[3v3ryb0dy]

I liked the supressor wrap.
Looks much more refined right now, might want to make the grip more ergonomical and smaller.

[editline]18th January 2011[/editline]

Also connect bolt handle to the bolt.

[JoeyZ]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27501538]I'm not sad. It's like advertising and it creates prejudice which will in turn create intresting situations.[/QUOTE]

Don't worry, we all love you

[SweetSwifter]

[IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/11l293k.jpg[/IMG]

3D Tileset project for college. All of the objects share a single texture.

[editline]18th January 2011[/editline]

FFF Goddamn Gamma/LUT correction.

[editline][/editline]

[IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/29m1tgo.png[/IMG]

[DOG-GY]

rules clearly don't matter seeing as 2 were broken in half a day.

[onox37]

Guys, no 3d. Plox.

Oh hey 3v3rb0dy, do you like the thread title? I just woke up and didn't get to see the response. Morning spaghetti and this = made my day.

[dookster]

[IMG]http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5043/5367952931_9cddc53935_z.jpg[/IMG]

[I]What if God was one of us... Just a stranger on a bus...[/I]

[ChestyMcGee]

holy shit size

[dookster]

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;27508317]holy shit size[/QUOTE]

I brought him down to a manageable level :downs:

[DeanWinchester]

I painted a friend using photoshop, took about 2 and a half hours:

Click for HD:
[img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9133125/photoshop.png[/img_thumb]

[Badunkadunk]

[QUOTE=Maya2008;27501458]I do have a high contrast version, just that the font will be an even harder task to design.
[/QUOTE]

I like the first one you posted more, I'd like the girl more if she were looking downwards more, and if you could incorporate green more, maybe into the background or into the rabbit's fur, or even the girl's hair a little.

The font's fine, but the when,where,etc is a little hard to see and will probably be harder to see after you get prints done. I also feel like some more space up top would give the poster a more relaxing feel, maybe an extra inch or two just extending the background further.

The rabbit right now honestly looks like a cut out filter with a ton of layers, but the rest of the piece looks similar in style to the rabbit, it's mainly the girl who sticks out to me, she's an attention grabber so maybe that was what you were going for but it just seems off.