Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28744052]Only if I get to hold the rose.[/QUOTE] I've learned to lead, you shall hold the rose. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7aro4uBPBC4[/media] Don't speak. Just do.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28744065]imo they should be a lot less visible[/QUOTE] dey lokali lightan

they should either be less visible, or replace the stripes. but having both full on looks terrible. + as it is, theres not a balance between left and right side and it looks wonky

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/20799748/ohgr%20flyer%202.jpg[/img] It's past 4 a.m. I am beat.

That is loads better

What's the QR code for?

Yeah, it's much better, but still a lot can be done. For example: I don't like how all the text elements are confined to the bottom when there's a lot of empty black space around.

Should I colour it with waters or keep it pencil?

I finished the portrait of my grandad: [img]http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/3355/portraito.jpg[/img] I'm tempted to shade in some sort of background so that the highlights of the hair and skin are distinguishable from the paper (it is more apparent when viewed physically, but a background would still be handy). I'll get my dad to take it into work and get a properly cleaned up, ridiculously hi-res scan of it soon too.

Might be the photo editing but I'd add some darker tones here and there.

Yes I was thinking the inside of the ears should be darker at the very least.

very nice, love your texturing, especially around the crinkles in the shirt collar

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/20799748/ohgr%20flyer%202a.jpg[/img] Trying a US letter sized poster.

I'd move some text on the top of the poster

way too crowded and chaotic. padding is inconsistent throughout

The way the bar-code-reader-thingy has no gap between it and the edge of the image is pretty ugly

[img]http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/7726/teefi.jpg[/img] is there something in my teeth

yeah

I think it's your bad shading technique. Don't go random scribbles overlapping eachother inconsistantly. Try going for hatching or something. Look up examples of good penwork.

[QUOTE=No_0ne;28750228][img_thumb]http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/7726/teefi.jpg[/img_thumb] is there something in my teeth[/QUOTE] I don't know; I can only see your hands.

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/20799748/ohgr%20flyer%202b.jpg[/img] This project has taught me a design technique that I should print and stick on my wall. [editline]minute changes not worthy of a post[/editline] [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/20799748/ohgr%20flyer%202b%20rev1.jpg[/img]

Much better. But I don't know if it's just me or is the text ontop in a bad font.

the font's not too bad but the border for it should be a bit thicker, maybe 150% of what it is now?

tiny gap between the border of the grey box and the "wdihtf.com etc" text is ugly too - extend the border for the whole image and then extend the grey box a bit and move the text in the grey box inwards too

[QUOTE=dead60;28732645]Never knew Vogons love to sing. Love the drawing though :smile: [img_thumb]http://blogs.telegraph.co.uk/culture/files/2010/08/vogons-buena-vista1.jpg[/img_thumb] [URL="http://blogs.telegraph.co.uk/culture/files/2010/08/vogons-buena-vista1.jpg"] [/URL][/QUOTE] That can't be a vogon I didn't try to kill myself at the sight of his poetry

I need something interesting to house my design rules.

make the text at the top much larger so it gathers some attention. Right now I hardly notice it with that huge image everywhere. Imo the font for the venue and date is just awful. The OhGr thing is blurry. The grey transparent or whatever on the box around venue looks weird.

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;28749499]I finished the portrait of my grandad: [img_thumb]http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/3355/portraito.jpg[/img_thumb] I'm tempted to shade in some sort of background so that the highlights of the hair and skin are distinguishable from the paper (it is more apparent when viewed physically, but a background would still be handy). I'll get my dad to take it into work and get a properly cleaned up, ridiculously hi-res scan of it soon too.[/QUOTE] I would add in some more midtones, right now it looks very stark in a scratchy way.

What is stark and can I rub a layer of it on my chin?

Uhh like, there isn't s full spectrum of tones in there? The highlights and shadows don't gel sort of like an old black and white photograph.