Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

I need to get a real pencil. Mechanical ones are a pain in the ass to shade with.

Figured I don't actually have the time to try and draw the lady right if I am to reach that deadline and decided I should just do the whole piece digitally through illustrator. Will vectorise the rat tomorrow. CC on the light, shape forms or whatever would be nice if you feel like it. [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Poaseses.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=Cuon Alpinus;28807276]I need to get a real pencil. Mechanical ones are a pain in the ass to shade with.[/QUOTE] Buy some nice 4B pencils. Yaaaa

Her right arm is crooked.

[QUOTE=onox37;28807950]Buy some nice 4B pencils. Yaaaa[/QUOTE] But 4B is so rough. [QUOTE=Maya2008;28807961]Her right arm is crooked.[/QUOTE] Hmm, yeah I overdid that bend. Will fix tomorrow.. [del]Reference[/del]Trace source by the way: [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/PoasesesRef.jpg[/img]

the feet. OH GOD THE FEET

I get off to 4b pencils.

Shitty photo study line art. That I turned into a kind of zombie killing soldier. [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/Cleanup%20guy.jpg[/img] I fucking draw marines WAY TOO MUCH.

the anatomy is so wrong... :(

It's from a bottom up prospective. And I traced the outline from IRL picture So I don't hope it's wrong. pics here BTW [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/Fed%27s%20MARSOC_05.jpg[/url] I didn't feel like drawing the face because it was blurred and had a balaclava.

Well, his right leg looks broken and his left leg is crooked. His arm is too skinny. You might have messed up the folds or something, it doesn't really look like the ref even though it is traced.

That makes more sense then. [editline]25th March 2011[/editline] Which arm lol? I'm a bit slow.

[QUOTE=Back_Slash;28811263]And I [b]traced[/b] the outline from IRL picture So I don't hope it's wrong.[/QUOTE] [QUOTE=Back_Slash;28811263]I fucking [b]draw[/b] marines WAY TOO MUCH.[/QUOTE]

I didn't want it to look exactly like the picture, either. [editline]25th March 2011[/editline] You've never seen the sketchbook pages I post have you? [editline]25th March 2011[/editline] Here's a few [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/DSCF0836.JPG[/url] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/DSCF0830.JPG[/url] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/DSCF0829.JPG[/url] any questions?

those all look so wonky anatomy wise lol and their poses too, the poses looks alittle weird like an example, in the last one both the guys feet are facing towards the left while he's facing the right firing his gun from the hip and falling backwards at the same time

The only ones I post I have reference for,God I need to practice more. I found out the reason why I draw marines so much. I have free access to leatherneck magazine oh-feec-shall mehh-reen magazine.

Rooky rooky, did some work on my custom geetar! [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/iPUk6.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/c6rNx.png[/IMG] Cables aren't soldered, neck isn't bolted, and input jack is not in place yet.

that's p.cool but seems disproportional.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28813173]that's p.cool but seems disproportional.[/QUOTE] It looks much better in person. In the first photo, you can barely see the headstock at the tip, in the second, bad angles. Also, I wanted it to be somewhat slim as it was made with fretting hand in mind.

It's a quality work but personally, that's one of the guitar body shapes that I find most horrible looking. That and the dragon guitar.

[img_thumb]http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/085/b/d/tron__legacy___clu_by_superkusokao-d3chhhv.png[/img_thumb] Thumbed for hugeness. Clu fron Tron: Legacy.

[IMG]http://51bk.org/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/ascari-kz1-front-dark-car-wallpapers.jpg[/IMG] Reminds me of this.

thats a car

when i look at the grain in the yellow background it looks like its moving eeaAHAShasd AGFASDG

[quote=detlef;28815266]thats a car[/quote] :iiaca:

[img]http://uppix.net/e/e/0/208a595241982e054fc9f5fa8c9d2.png[/img] Don't know who is exactly this guy but he is funny/creepy [editline]26th March 2011[/editline] Image reference: [media]http://uppix.net/1/8/2/e10d671fe76ca39f9e8233942c7f8.jpg[/media] [editline]26th March 2011[/editline] Okay I've just realized something was wrong with his hand

Not enough arse chin. Also he's some cunt from lazytown.

[QUOTE=Viper202;28816751]Not enough arse chin. Also he's some cunt from lazytown.[/QUOTE] Yar har fiddle di-dee.

[QUOTE=ADT;28816695][img_thumb]http://uppix.net/e/e/0/208a595241982e054fc9f5fa8c9d2.png[/img_thumb] Don't know who is exactly this guy but he is funny/creepy [editline]26th March 2011[/editline] Image reference: [media]http://uppix.net/1/8/2/e10d671fe76ca39f9e8233942c7f8.jpg[/media] [editline]26th March 2011[/editline] Okay I've just realized something was wrong with his hand[/QUOTE] Looks very traced... Why must people trace...

It could be that is entirely hard to draw a free handed outline on a mouse. As long as the the tracing disappears for the final product I don't actually care personally.