Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

[QUOTE=JoeyZ;28885332]Why not just use a ye-olde sheet of paper[/QUOTE] i have but it turns out like page 45

[media]http://soundcloud.com/countshaqula/the-60th-hour[/media] So I cobbled together this 60 sec (well a little longer but fuck it) tune made in Sony Acid for a class assignment Tried to get a little bit of a mood in there ehhh

[QUOTE=dgg;28881460]May I suggest? [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Mayisuggest.jpg[/img_thumb] [editline]30th March 2011[/editline] Does she look better now? [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/PoasesesRat04.jpg[/img_thumb] Previous: [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/PoasesesRat03.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] not hugely, no

That brush you used is really awful. [editline]30th March 2011[/editline] Doesn't look like fur at all.

and that chicks hand is pretty fucked up too

[img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/9348/pr3abaker.jpg[/img] gradient mesh.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28887017]not hugely, no[/QUOTE] Well that means it's better at least. [QUOTE=Heroms;28887123]That brush you used is really awful. [editline]30th March 2011[/editline] Doesn't look like fur at all.[/QUOTE] It's not a brush. [QUOTE=Rusty100;28887161]and that chicks hand is pretty fucked up too[/QUOTE] Yeah, can't fix that because I suck too much for the time being. (I will start studying anatomy, forms, perspective, proportions, values and everything after April is over though (since in April too much is going on to have that time and focus, half of it is eaten up by these tasks and another week by The Gathering)

The technique you use for fur dgg is really terrible. waay to repetitive

poor dgg, getting shot down so many times, I guess that's what criticism is

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;28880357]the black borders change thickness and spill out into frames and into the background a lot [editline]29th March 2011[/editline] I'll red-circle all of these errors that I can spot - it looks messy. [editline]29th March 2011[/editline] [media]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/7563/layouterrors.jpg[/media][/QUOTE] Thanks! i'll fix it right now [QUOTE=Detlef;28880217]I like the comic style and all, but I hate the concept Yes everyone play minecraft so they can relate to this, u build stuff and then the creeper comes and fucks shit up. I don't really see the point[/QUOTE] true, but as i said i made this for the school i'm going to (actually it's an alternative) and i highly doubt that they've played Minecraft alot. So i chose a common situation

[QUOTE=Glitchman;28887618][img_thumb]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/9348/pr3abaker.jpg[/img_thumb] gradient mesh.[/QUOTE] is that a vector? if so fantastic work

[QUOTE=dgg;28889545]Well that means it's better at least.[/QUOTE] Actually I'll say that it looks worse or just as bad as before. I've seen so many of your wips on that piece and they haven't been getting before. You should just move on.

[QUOTE=dgg;28881460]May I suggest? [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Mayisuggest.jpg[/img_thumb] [editline]30th March 2011[/editline] Does she look better now? [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/PoasesesRat04.jpg[/img_thumb] Previous: [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/PoasesesRat03.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Why did you mirror the painting?

[QUOTE=Ehanced_AI;28871856]... [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8702336/P1030413.JPG[/media] and here it is without all of the text and red lines.. [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8702336/P1030414.jpg[/media] anatomy on par with fakefactory.[/QUOTE] [url]http://posemaniacs.com[/url] will help, try the "30 second drawing" thing and start from 90 seconds and try to get poses down quickly. arms should always reach just about the knee

That's what I've been using for the past three months, along with some other thing which only got sent to me recently [url=http://lovecastle.org/draw/]which is like the 30 second posemaniacs thing, only i'm actually able to see what i'm supposed to be drawing without that silly muscle overlay on everything.[/url] but thanks anyways.

[img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/089/8/4/zombie__s_chains_by_getgrenade-d3ct1vw.jpg[/img]

Why is he shackled to balls in his tum tum?

[QUOTE=jenny7332;28892934]Why is he shackled to balls in his tum tum?[/QUOTE] He was trying to have balls of steel but failed miserably.

[img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/089/3/5/full_forward_by_getgrenade-d3ctgi9.png[/img] It says - Full forward, Cannibal-Shahids

hmm I don't like the brush you used bro

Well, I think I'm gonna buy an Intuos4 I'd also like to take this opportunity to apologise for anything negative I've said about digital painting.

My wet dreams are about Intous4. Gonna get it someday.....

Sorry detlef I kinda got inspired dontkillme [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/balrrr.jpeg[/img] Anybody know the reference for the helmet? [editline]30th March 2011[/editline] fucking sketchbook too big for scanner.

Inspired by what

Your comic. I kinda saw it and was like "Man, I love drawing destroyed cities" "Man, I do love zombie apocalypses" "Man, I should draw something like that"

yeah post apocalyptic shit is always fun. and gasmasks, man I love them

Hot damn man, so do I. along with all sorts of face coverings. Should I Line art this? I feel like it would be a lot of work but rewarding.

you should shade it. i don't know why you're so scared of shading

Because my friend told me once that my drawing looked like a black guy. I've been scared to shade ever since.

In which I try to learn how to draw arms god damn studies are boring. [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8702336/P1030420.JPG[/media] ...Practice makes perfect.