Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

[QUOTE=Viper202;28916685]shes fat[/QUOTE] welcome to life drawing classes

[QUOTE=jenny7332;28916754]She was really hard to draw because her tummy kept on flubbering about the place, killing everything I know about anatomy. Her ass cheeks folded weird.[/QUOTE] [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/I_what2.jpg[/img]

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I've taken 1 life drawing class and nobody posing was an average dude/chick. I mean the longest torso I've ever seen and then saggy woman everywhere. Doesn't make for an easy first real go at drawing.

[QUOTE=DOG-GY;28917244]I've taken 1 life drawing class and nobody posing was an average dude/chick. I mean the longest torso I've ever seen and then saggy woman everywhere. Doesn't make for an easy first real go at drawing.[/QUOTE] I was told they do that on purpose, for a challenge.

Saggy tits EVERYWHERE.

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;28917312]I was told they do that on purpose, for a challenge.[/QUOTE] Dude his torso was long like standing a bus on its back. That's not a challenge that's an abomination.

I'm working on a project i visual arts, where i have to make a drawing including all the principles of art. I wanted to do some type of WWII propaganda, but i found this photo while searching. [IMG]http://www.hydroponicsonline.com/store/img-hydroponics/japanese-pilot-aircraft-propaganda-poster-wwii-army-war_390285444598.jpg[/IMG] last night i drew it so that i could have a reference to use on my huge sheet in school. I would appreciate criticism, because i know there's allot of errors, plus I'm still working on it anyway. [IMG]http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5134/5577491973_6e06eef95f_z.jpg[/IMG]

[img]http://www.bookofjesus.org/images/b131ia8l69i9vln504em.jpg[/img] My awesome apple :D

[QUOTE=duckboy38;28917664]I'm working on a project i visual arts, where i have to make a drawing including all the principles of art. I wanted to do some type of WWII propaganda, but i found this photo while searching. [img_thumb]http://www.hydroponicsonline.com/store/img-hydroponics/japanese-pilot-aircraft-propaganda-poster-wwii-army-war_390285444598.jpg[/img_thumb] last night i drew it so that i could have a reference to use on my huge sheet in school. I would appreciate criticism, because i know there's allot of errors, plus I'm still working on it anyway. [img_thumb]http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5134/5577491973_6e06eef95f_z.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Um... if you're doing aviation art you have to be really careful. REALLY careful. Everything has to be straight and correct, in proportion, equal and symmetrical because, if it's not, what you're drawing won't look real because it wouldn't be able to fly. You're clearly not good enough to do it from eye so I suggest gridding your reference and drawing it that way.

[QUOTE=duckboy38;28917664]words[/quote] I'm on my iPhone or I would give a better crit. However, ask yourself every time you are drawing something from reference (or anything for that matter) "Does this look fucking anything like my reference?" if you say no, fix it. I'm not talking about a good solid rough draft for the final product. I'm talking about "what the fuck is wrong with everything in this picture and why does everything look wrong???" I mean that picture shows you don't give a shit. I mean your horizon line isn't even strait. Come on. Do the wheels on that plane "really" look like that on the reference? Don't give me a "it's a ruff draft!!!! It's suppose to look rong!!!" please.

I hate it when I can't draw [img]http://i.cubeupload.com/05QBo8.png[/img] Look at it.. LOOK AT IT IN TEH EYES111! :v: Tried again, worked better this time: [img]http://i.cubeupload.com/EqKJSB.png[/img] I'm tired... time for bed.

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;28918557]I'm on my iPhone or I would give a better crit. However, ask yourself every time you are drawing something from reference (or anything for that matter) "Does this look fucking anything like my reference?" if you say no, fix it. I'm not talking about a good solid rough draft for the final product. I'm talking about "what the fuck is wrong with everything in this picture and why does everything look wrong???" I mean that picture shows you don't give a shit. I mean your horizon line isn't even strait. Come on. Do the wheels on that plane "really" look like that on the reference? Don't give me a "it's a ruff draft!!!! It's suppose to look rong!!!" please.[/QUOTE] I never once said that it doesn't have to be good because it's a rough draft, or for sympathy because of it, sometimes i wonder why people can't just give criticism, and not be a dick about it..

Being nice takes effort?

Because you said that same shit the last time you made a post here so I prepared.

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;28919130]Because you said that same shit the last time you made a post here so I prepared.[/QUOTE] said what? Because the last time i posted i was actually asking for ideas on what to draw.

Thanks for the advice on my project people who gave advice :)

did did the bike [img]http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/090/4/5/photo_study_04_by_xephio-d3cwree.jpg[/img] also off to bed~~

Got a replacement pen for my tablet and drew this. It's not good, but it's a hell of a lot better than my gas mask drawing. [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/v8gex1.png[/IMG] Kinda fixed colors.

Okay, next task. Making a page for a calendar about enviromental problems. My choice: water poisoning. This will be the illustration in the frame: [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/PoisonedWater.jpg[/img] (Took the photo myself) Will keep it at max one more update before showing the finished product. CC appriciated. Will add oil spills in the plate. Possibly some bad seaweed or rice or some other form of side-food that will suffer heavily from water poisioning. (anything that grows in the earth or lives in the water basically. A.k.a anything that you would eat with fish). Water in the glass will be either oil or ill-coloured water.

Thats pretty awesome, dude

[QUOTE=dgg;28923019]Okay, next task. Making a page for a calendar about enviromental problems. My choice: water poisoning. This will be the illustration in the frame: [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/PoisonedWater.jpg[/img_thumb] (Took the photo myself) Will keep it at max one more update before showing the finished product. CC appriciated. Will add oil spills in the plate. Possibly some bad seaweed or rice or some other form of side-food that will suffer heavily from water poisioning. (anything that grows in the earth or lives in the water basically. A.k.a anything that you would eat with fish). Water in the glass will be either oil or ill-coloured water.[/QUOTE] What are you doing these for?

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;28923248]What are you doing these for?[/QUOTE] Tasks that are given out that are required to be sent in in order to be considered to get into the school. Dunno what it's called in english. Opptakskrav in Norwegian.

This is a def poetry jam, slam style piece I wrote. "The definitive experience that you can find, is lying awake, biding time, thinking of a new rhyme til the sunrise. Eternal life symbolized with a bomb, exploding with the force that signals the divorce of all ignorance, the hindrance of all mankind, kindred of the blind, this kingdom I find, I destroy, with words of stone set in solid paper. I don't need your doubt, cuz i've got my own, we should all just help each other out, human ambitions on the throne, not a man not a god just a light that can be shown, through the mind, our spirit, the human condition is to love unconditionally, you wont find love on MTV, just a shattered ghost they call "reality", packaged and boxed and mass produced. just open your eyes, this is crucial, lost in this forest, this wilderness, its unreal. throw of their disguise you will benefit corporate minds runnin' government seekin profit at the cost of life, poverty, hate, strife engineered disasters at your throat with a knife. Locked away in a progressive mind, formulated in uncomprehended designs, look at things with an encompassing eye, give it more than just a feeble try, give a chance too enhance more than just your wallet but the whole world through the spread of word. what this world needs is a change of creed, with this we can surmount greed, hate and envy. The ego of the mind twists the space aside and clouds what resides, STOP! what you do is your choice what you've got to do is choose brotherhood mankind one family humanity brothers sisters mothers fathers open up your mind, this is crucial. open up your heart, this is crucial. open up your mouth, this is crucial. then you will know what I am talking about. Its real."

So I was doing a recording of one of my digi paints, got some pretty good shit up for about 3 hours, then everything crashed, and nothing is recoverable. GG.

[QUOTE=dgg;28923019]Okay, next task. Making a page for a calendar about enviromental problems. My choice: water poisoning. This will be the illustration in the frame: [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/PoisonedWater.jpg[/img_thumb] (Took the photo myself) Will keep it at max one more update before showing the finished product. CC appriciated. Will add oil spills in the plate. Possibly some bad seaweed or rice or some other form of side-food that will suffer heavily from water poisioning. (anything that grows in the earth or lives in the water basically. A.k.a anything that you would eat with fish). Water in the glass will be either oil or ill-coloured water.[/QUOTE] i dont like your dining table buy a better one

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28923930]i dont like your dining table buy a better one[/QUOTE] it's cool because it looks like a door

[QUOTE=theLazyLion;28923925]So I was doing a recording of one of my digi paints, got some pretty good shit up for about 3 hours, then everything crashed, and nothing is recoverable. GG.[/QUOTE] i feel ya brudda

[QUOTE=dgg;28923019]Okay, next task. Making a page for a calendar about enviromental problems. My choice: water poisoning. This will be the illustration in the frame: [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/PoisonedWater.jpg[/img_thumb] (Took the photo myself) Will keep it at max one more update before showing the finished product. CC appriciated. Will add oil spills in the plate. Possibly some bad seaweed or rice or some other form of side-food that will suffer heavily from water poisioning. (anything that grows in the earth or lives in the water basically. A.k.a anything that you would eat with fish). Water in the glass will be either oil or ill-coloured water.[/QUOTE] Looks good. Can't wait to see the other 70 versions of it.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28924032]Looks good. Can't wait to see the other 70 versions of it.[/QUOTE] That joke is like, so yesterday.