Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

you can also make the eyes more fish-like too, like make them pop out a little.

[img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2627/4061152265_c4023a3c26.jpg[/img] :( i shall move'em [editline]3rd April 2011[/editline] oh yar the eyes were just a quick scribble so i could see whereabouts they'd be [editline]3rd April 2011[/editline] gonna start pathing it up~

[QUOTE=1chains1;28973419]First off I want to apologize for last night, I was running off 4 cups of coffee at 3 am, so I was a bit pissy. Now, here's an update with the insertion of the moped, currently all the parts are coming off a bit flat, I am probably going to finish the moped as a whole before trying to add anymore depth, as the "black chrome" is giving me issues. I actually like the change from walking to moped, as it gives a slight sense of comedy but preserves the bad assness. Also he will still be holding a beer while driving. [img_thumb]http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/1chains1/detlefprogress-1.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Ya know I liked it better before [editline]3rd April 2011[/editline] Damn u Rusty....

[QUOTE=k00lwhip;28973906]chains all your drawings no matter what have a very slight slant to the right on them that I've noticed since your birth.[/QUOTE] Itll go away when I get my new tablet. I am left handed and the awkwardness of the pen I am using causes me to twist my hand oddly so everything becomes slanted. I will straighten it out once completely done, because if I do it before then everything else will be slanted anyways.

why did u change it chains

What do you mean changed it? Also I fixed the slant just for you kool <3 [img]http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/1chains1/detlefprogress-2.jpg[/img] Better?

[QUOTE=1chains1;28973419]First off I want to apologize for last night, I was running off 4 cups of coffee at 3 am, so I was a bit pissy. Now, here's an update with the insertion of the moped, currently all the parts are coming off a bit flat, I am probably going to finish the moped as a whole before trying to add anymore depth, as the "black chrome" is giving me issues. I actually like the change from walking to moped, as it gives a slight sense of comedy but preserves the bad assness. Also he will still be holding a beer while driving. [img_thumb]http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/1chains1/detlefprogress-1.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Haha, that's a great change. Gives it more humor and also makes it slightly more realistical given the person he is as well as the time and setting of the series. He's not some badass gun-wielding mothafucka.

hmpf

Detlef I still have no clue what you are asking.

i think she's asking why you changed it from the original pose. was it just because rusty gave you shit about it?

While Rusty's post was not the best crit ever, he was right about the pose being over used. Putting in the moped offered some originality and injects some humor into the situation. Also mopeds are europey. Hes a european, so he needs a moped.

[QUOTE=1chains1;28974386]Also mopeds are europey. Hes a european, so he needs a moped.[/QUOTE] :raise:

Hes not italian

Well if I have time I will re-create the walking version, but I am already short on time as it is. edit- Chesty it was a joke, I am not that ignorant!

Finish it however you want, it's your painting

[QUOTE=Autumn;28967307]okay, you know that saatchi and saatchi are a big prosperous and fairly prestigious design company right? myself and one or two others from my class are looking to apply there for placements for next year (as we're taking a year out to spend in the industry) and it's going to be hard work to get accepted. also you should know that the placements are generally quite short (2 or 4 weeks) and that they don't pay you, only expenses are covered. also what are IGCSEs? intermediate GCSEs or something? and how old are you? in the nicest way, don't apply for saatchi and saatchi, it'll be a waste of time.[/QUOTE] My school wants everyone to do a 2 week work experience in a certain company, I chose saatchi and saatchi along with Grey company Malaysia and leo burnette. It's quite ambitious but if I get in it will be really good for my future. I am 15 and i do take GCSE subjects but most of them are IGCSE (international I think) [editline]4th April 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Autumn;28974340]i think [B]she's[/B] asking why you changed it from the original pose. was it just because rusty gave you shit about it?[/QUOTE] Detlef is a girl?

[QUOTE=Goodthief;28975043]My school wants everyone to do a 2 week work experience in a certain company, I chose saatchi and saatchi along with Grey company Malaysia and leo burnette. It's quite ambitious but if I get in it will be really good for my future. I am 15 and i do take GCSE subjects but most of them are IGCSE (international I think)[/QUOTE] where are you studying? saatchi and saatchi are london based, "grey company malaysia" i can't find any information on and leo burnette are in chicago?? [editline]3rd April 2011[/editline] also i really wouldn't hold out being accepted at saatchi and saatchi. at all. sorry [editline]3rd April 2011[/editline] my bad saatchi and saatchi are also in NY

I live in malaysia and all three of those companies have branches in malaysia

[QUOTE=Goodthief;28975144]I live in malaysia and all three of those companies have branches in malaysia[/QUOTE] Oh that may mean you will have things slightly easier. In the UK there was a TV series about people getting work experience at S&S, that's how hard it is to get in. I did my work experience with [url=http://www.passion-pictures.com/flash.html]Passion Pictures[/url], but only because I had a foot in the door, as the guy who runs the place is a family friend. [editline]3rd April 2011[/editline] Aww fuck that, they don't have the ad I worked on.

[QUOTE=Goodthief;28975043]Detlef is a girl?[/QUOTE] The Nintendo 64 was just released and you feel you have the time to sit here and ask such trivial questions?

Wow that's like a slap in the face

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1157653/pff.png[/img] still the scanners fault i swear

[QUOTE=Heroms;28971034]Testing out MyPaint, doesn't exactly look like him v:v:v [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/fq7Fm.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] hahahahah the facial features are great which makes this all the more disturbing and hilarious [editline]4th April 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Detlef;28974060]Ya know I liked it better before [editline]3rd April 2011[/editline] Damn u Rusty....[/QUOTE] kind of wish i didnt say anything tbh

Here's a picture of another plant I drew. It turned out looking like Craptasket. Oh well [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/ft4z4.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/TGsvx.jpg[/IMG]

i hate to give you more shit about your alteration but mopeds are fucking gay [editline]4th April 2011[/editline] i regret saying anything!!!

Mopeds are kinda gay but. It's kinda funny. Tho I still like the first version the best

Just go off the phone with he creative director of S&S, sounds promising he said "we're going through renovation right now so I hope you don't mind walking through the construction" yeah I think I might get in. sorry mods if this is derailing I think it's sort of relevant, if not, I'll stop with the updates.

maybe it belongs in the art off topic discussion

ooh never seen that before, thanks. by the way, I find it quite awkward talking to you now because for the longest time I thought you were a guy. I mean that in the least offensive way possible though.

I wanna draw gasmask people now...