Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition>
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[QUOTE=Super_Poo;27746134]Improve everything. Really really boring looking.[/QUOTE]
Could start by putting the explosion in the middle, as it's the most dramatic and symmetrical image there.
font doesn't fit and I don't know, I'm tired.
[img]http://i53.tinypic.com/25kao.png[/img]
It's p.cool but the lights are way too clean. Add a texture to them or something and don't let them go to full opacity.
Right now composition wise it's really off balance to the left. You'd need free space on the left side.
Another solution would be to have the fullest opacity rest in middle and gradients go left and right.
Truck WIPan
perspective ignoran
lightsource unknowan
Later lots of things fixan.
[IMG]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/184/ss20110130164922.png[/IMG]
Checklist:
Front bumper unsymmetrical, hood undefined, right wheel misplaced, left got a flat, the whole dude, skewy perspectav, lotsa lots.
Just letting you know I'm back to digapaitin, this a concept for a movie, gon use it later to get the colour scheme right.
Now to watch a movie and rest for a while.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27747303]It's p.cool but the lights are way too clean. Add a texture to them or something and don't let them go to full opacity.
Right now composition wise it's really off balance to the left. You'd need free space on the left side.
Another solution would be to have the fullest opacity rest in middle and gradients go left and right.[/QUOTE]
yeah, I woke up this morning and looked at it and the lights looked off. and I'll play around with the gradient lights and see what looks best. thanks
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27751300]Truck WIPan
perspective ignoran
lightsource unknowan
Later lots of things fixan.
[img_thumb]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/184/ss20110130164922.png[/img_thumb]
Checklist:
Front bumper unsymmetrical, hood undefined, right wheel misplaced, left got a flat, the whole dude, skewy perspectav, lotsa lots.
Just letting you know I'm back to digapaitin, this a concept for a movie, gon use it later to get the colour scheme right.
Now to watch a movie and rest for a while.[/QUOTE]
Why don't the roof inside of the car follow the perspective lines? Looks weird
it does. The rear post is kinda badly positioned I guess, makes it look skewed. Should go over that, thanks.
Is the hanger and the roof of the car following the same perspective?
what's hanger?
That thing behind the car
[editline]30th January 2011[/editline]
oh it's not named hanger at all
What you paint is usually very interesting, but i really dislike your brushwork, how you make it look so soft and blurry.
But I'm a stupid weeaboo so what do i know about "art".
yeah I could do more flattening.
[editline]30th January 2011[/editline]
[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/6t1hkk.png[/IMG]
bit better it should be. - chrome doorknob edition
His elbow doesn't seem to be touching the headlight from what I can see, perhaps add some shadows and cloth crumpling to better illustrate that he is leaning on the headlight? Also his knee looks like its straight and not slightly bent unless thats what you were aiming for. . . His face looks a bit odd also since the hat is absolutely giant.
'I'll look into everything but the knee issue tomorrow.
the values look reeealy flat
what do?
Throw in some brighter colors to add a nice contrast say like a pale orange and red, or perhaps green and blue on the truck, and perhaps red on the trench coat guy?
trow in some hard shadows.
Look in real life pictures for reference
[QUOTE=Dysgalt;27757253]Throw in some brighter colors to add a nice contrast say like a pale orange and red, or perhaps green and blue on the truck, and perhaps red on the trench coat guy?[/QUOTE]
it's fucking monochrome.
paintover
You use way too light values
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/wTHQ9.png[/IMG]
The power of a few straight/defined lines.
reworked this a bit, any better?
[img]http://i54.tinypic.com/spiydg.png[/img]
I feel like the text/lines need some kind of texture. they're too clean, thoughts?
The center lights really lack contrast compared to the rest of the image, its the same color, but that you made them less opaque (is opaque the right word for "low opacity"?) makes it look very plain.
[QUOTE=flandre;27759863]The center lights really lack contrast compared to the rest of the image, its the same color, but that you made them less opaque (is opaque the right word for "low opacity"?) makes it look very plain.[/QUOTE]
yes, less opaque=more tansperant.
I know what you're talking about but it's hard to do with a yellow traffic light and a yellow light.
[QUOTE=flandre;27759863]The center lights really lack contrast compared to the rest of the image, its the same color, but that you made them less opaque (is opaque the right word for "low opacity"?) makes it look very plain.[/QUOTE]
Technically translucent is in between opaque and transparent
How about coloring the light parts of the traffic light in their colors before slapping on a colored circle on it, to get rid of that dull gray/brown sort of look? The details of it can of course be there, just make them in a more blending color.
[img]http://gyazo.com/783d920c317135148b05750b45122cd3.png[/img]
[editline]31st January 2011[/editline]
Made with stylewars.hu.
[img]http://gyazo.com/a2addc74c0319fc2349b671c096f7daf.png[/img]
Practising some colors and some different styles.
[QUOTE=MetalToast;27758849]reworked this a bit, any better?
[img_thumb]http://i54.tinypic.com/spiydg.png[/img_thumb]
I feel like the text/lines need some kind of texture. they're too clean, thoughts?[/QUOTE]
I don't know if it's just me, but the light itself looks a little crooked.
[QUOTE=TheDudeGuy;27763954]I don't know if it's just me, but the light itself looks a little crooked.[/QUOTE]
I think it's that the lights on the left are more opaque, so your mind naturally attributes more weight to that, so you think it should be crooked. And it appears crooked.
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