Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

Exactly. Also, smog. It was done as a go-green thing for my school. And I just think it's adorable.

Semi realism did the b&w first then colored [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/JdE6o.png[/IMG] [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] how does one draw hair wtf [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] I'm having problems with that....

[QUOTE=Detlef;29058527]how does one draw hair wtf[/QUOTE] I wouldn't worry, looks like you got it right

[QUOTE=Detlef;29058527]Semi realism did the b&w first then colored [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/JdE6o.png[/img_thumb] [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] how does one draw hair wtf [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] I'm having problems with that....[/QUOTE] You need to get a job doing concept art, I swear your shit is the best i've ever seen here [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] Also, is there a video editing thread or do I just ask for advice here? (or in the other arts thread) [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Gubbinz96;29055580]robots bleep blorp [img_thumb]http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/333/blautzerlightbotv2.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] That looks like a more detailed piece of something Dan Paladin would do, good work I like your style

Oops, I don't think my mushroom deserved a thread. [img]http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/4353/05042011001.jpg[/img]

[b]First Real Image Manipulation Attempt[/b] Took this [img]http://photoshoptutorials.ws/images/stories/1%5B4%5D_3a1efa85-8a0e-43cd-8bbe-f227ab944a07.jpg[/img] After a hour or two of blending, erasing, pasting, and editing. [img]http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/9586/ww2planeimage.png[/img] I know its a bit overdone. And badish.

I wouldn't be able to tell what you were trying to achieve if you had not posted the original pic... :(

I'm getting a little better now. You think so? [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3025/mysketchingnewstyletest.jpg[/img] I still need to work on coloring technique.

[media]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Winsauce.jpg[/media] This disproves your argument :smug:

[QUOTE=Codesta;29061983]I'm getting a little better now. You think so? [img_thumb]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3025/mysketchingnewstyletest.jpg[/img_thumb] I still need to work on coloring technique.[/QUOTE] Detlef is going to get all on you about that style

Does this make up for my last piece of shit? [img]http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/2673/movieposterr.png[/img]

That depends, what all did you do? Also you misspelled "Johnny." You might want to fix that.

[QUOTE=Codesta;29061983]I'm getting a little better now. You think so? [img_thumb]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3025/mysketchingnewstyletest.jpg[/img_thumb] I still need to work on coloring technique.[/QUOTE] The nose looks odd and the ear is too far back, the earlobe generally is where the jawline stops. Also, she appears to be lacking a trapezius.

[QUOTE=Toastador;29062624]That depends, what all did you do? Also you misspelled "Johnny." You might want to fix that.[/QUOTE] Fuck lol. I truthfully didn't do too much. -Edited F22 pretty heavily. Were two F22s before. -Added Blur and did color correction -Added Su-37, blur, and effects. -Bottom Movie Poster text -Moved and redid clouds a bit.

I do warn you that all of these are paintings that I never got around to finishing. [b]Corel Painter 11[/b] [img_thumb]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6418/aperture.jpg[/img_thumb] [img_thumb]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/2295/eyep.jpg[/img_thumb] [img_thumb]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/48/dovezr.jpg[/img_thumb] [img_thumb]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/410/cottesloe.jpg[/img_thumb] [b]Photoshop CS5[/b] [img_thumb]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/2450/tsunamis.jpg[/img_thumb] This one is nowhere near finished, I was going to remove the black lines and detail it more, but never got around to it. Can anyone please help me with my painting techniques. I need a lot of advice, I only just started painting some time last year, and I've only done about 6, but for art this year I'd like to do my final piece as a digital artwork so that means I'm going to have to improve a lot by then. My theme is natural disasters so I'll be painting a lot of buildings, and at the moment I'm terrible at that. They don't have to be super realistic, I'd be happy if they were sketchy but still had a sense of realism to them, and didn't look like a 5 year old painted them. I'd appreciate any help.

those eyes have HUGE tear ducts. maybe that's why they look so odd to me. I can't really comment on technique as I don't paint but everything seems rather flat

[QUOTE=cheesecurls;29062035][media]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Winsauce.jpg[/media] This disproves your argument :smug:[/QUOTE] We need a "fucking metal" rating. [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] What should I write on a poster/flyer to advertise the fact that I want to get some commissions?

[QUOTE=MadPro119;29062585]Does this make up for my last piece of shit? [img_thumb]http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/2673/movieposterr.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] No it's still pretty bad [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] I can even see the pixels from where you cut out the plane, man did you even try?

[img]http://www.zimg.eu/i/552900068[/img] Just wanting some CC on this, I'm not going to change anything on it, I'm just more looking for things to avoid and/or get better at in the future. Things I already know: The body looks pretty crap and has odd shading same to some extent with the wing things, I couldn't figure out how to shade those properly at the time. Some oddities in the perspective. The body blends into the wings at some places.

... i like it but i have no idea what it is supposed to be

Neither do I, it was something I saw in a dream.

[QUOTE=ReconUnit;29068245][img_thumb]http://www.zimg.eu/i/552900068[/img_thumb] Just wanting some CC on this, I'm not going to change anything on it, I'm just more looking for things to avoid and/or get better at in the future. Things I already know: The body looks pretty crap and has odd shading same to some extent with the wing things, I couldn't figure out how to shade those properly at the time. Some oddities in the perspective. The body blends into the wings at some places.[/QUOTE] the first thing I saw was a vagina [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] which explains why you saw it in a dream

[QUOTE=Detlef;29069436]the first thing I saw was a vagina [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] which explains why you saw it in a dream[/QUOTE] You must have the worlds weirdest vagina. I saw and see a desert landscaped fish with jellyfish tentacles.

[QUOTE=Detlef;29069436]the first thing I saw was a vagina [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] which explains why you saw it in a dream[/QUOTE] My life finally makes sense. [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] Any like, serious comments?

what is there to comment on, I have no idea what it is

Eh, mind as well come back with something that makes more sense later in that case.

[QUOTE=ReconUnit;29069463]Any like, serious comments?[/QUOTE] Contrasts. Use them. Colours. Make them nicer.

[QUOTE=Detlef;29067800]No it's still pretty bad [editline]9th April 2011[/editline] I can even see the pixels from where you cut out the plane, man did you even try?[/QUOTE] I did try. Would you mind showing where you still see the other plane? I am just hoping to improve.

protip when cutting things out. Cut a bit on the inside of what you're cutting out. Also helpful is using "refine edges" after you've made your selection and bump up the feather to 1,0 and contrast to 30% and smoothnes to 1-3 (toy around with those settings, see what works best). Also set Shift edge to ~25/-25 (depends on what kind of selection you've made... whatever goes more on the inside of your selection)

[QUOTE=Autumn;29052590]okay uhm so it's not really a "creative work" since i haven't actually made it yet but this is a little idea i have for a leaflet type thing for this butterfly charity? the whole metamorphosis thing... [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6BnG8oXSY9Q[/media][/QUOTE] Great idea! It looks a bit fiddly to open though, maybe you could adapt this origami [url=http://www.origami-instructions.com/origami-tato.html]box pattern[/url] so that it opens up more suavely. It opens out really great.