Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

[QUOTE=dgg;29185167]Since I don't have the drawing skills to illustrate the cover for my favourite book (and 1 of total.. 4 or 5 books I've ever read) but am still tasked to design it I decided to make it into a sketch and this is the result. The product would as such be sent to an illustrator explaining what character is what and all that jazz. [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/DeFireogHanSomGjorGaltVerre.png[/img_thumb] The shell overlay on the bottom is just to illustrate that it is supposed to be a shell. "The Four and He Who Does BAD WORSE - The Beginning" I'm not all that happy with it, even though I have this odd liking towards it (most of it is probably "ahurpadurr I love it cuz I maeds it" shit that the brain does). But the deadline to have all these works, and 10 previous ones printed and sent in the mail is in a bit under 8 hours and I'll have to start printing and get stuff going. If colours are completly fucked up on something when printing it out it won't be very nice if I got less than an hour to fix it. Original cover: (which I wouldn't really change. But so the tasks tells me to do.). [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/DeFireOgHanSomGjorGaltVerreOriginal.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] stick figures... [editline]15th April 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Autumn;29188080][img_thumb]http://www.ironicsans.com/images/keming.gif[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] reposting this (not mine obviously) [img]http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lbzf36x63d1qeqo31o1_500.png[/img] i'd get that on a shirt

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29188474]stick figures...[/QUOTE] I think stick figures looks far more proffessional than a pile of shit trying to look like an animal.

well no not at all that's dumb you're dumb [editline]15th April 2011[/editline] there's nothing less professional than STICK figures. minimalistic silhouette people (thats a good name, right? idk) are good, like on health and safety posters and shit.

[QUOTE=dgg;29188708]I think stick figures looks far more proffessional than a pile of shit trying to look like an animal.[/QUOTE] You'd be wrong then.

I think the stick figures are shit. Along with the guy on top having a more black "body" than the others. And the font looks like poop as well.

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;29190214]I think the stick figures are shit. Along with the guy on top having a more black "body" than the others. And the font looks like poop as well.[/QUOTE] If you think the stick figures are shit why did you disagree with PLing?

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;29190250]If you think the stick figures are shit why did you disagree with PLing?[/QUOTE] Because I thought he was quoting rusty. Small screen ok???

[img]http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/215856_10150213755255795_653255794_8801104_2528572_n.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=Shiftyze;29186536]Here is a sketch I did for my idea of a reptile like alien. [img_thumb]http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/brand0n23/Alienconcept.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]I guess I'm getting funnies because Facepunch sees a vagina.

[QUOTE=Robbobin;29191296][img_thumb]http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/215856_10150213755255795_653255794_8801104_2528572_n.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] maybe tone down the noise a little

yeah I was pretty noise happy. [img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/8695/spacebeaver.jpg[/img]

Trying to get back into some computer based drawing. Maybe want to do some animation. I like working with hand a lot more. [img]http://i.imgur.com/QsViE.png[/img]

[QUOTE=Pepin;29197273]Trying to get back into some computer based drawing. Maybe want to do some animation. I like working with hand a lot more. [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/QsViE.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] What, no, nooo

[QUOTE=Pepin;29197273]Trying to get back into some computer based drawing. Maybe want to do some animation. I like working with hand a lot more. [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/QsViE.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] what are you doing?

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/derp%20faec.jpg[/img] [editline]15th April 2011[/editline] another sketchbook.

[QUOTE=Back_Slash;29198265][img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/derp%20faec.jpg[/img_thumb] [editline]15th April 2011[/editline] another sketchbook.[/QUOTE] Your pencilstrokes are really bad, try long fluent ones instead of short scratchy ones

thanks for the advice. .5mm lead has failed me.

Uh it's nothing about what kind of pencil it is, it's the technique you got to work on

Oh sorry for the misunderstanding I thought you were talking about the shading.(looks like ass to me to be honest anyway)

again, don't blame the tools

Wait I thought I just said [b]I[/b] did a bad job on the shading not my pencil lol.

This the first time I ever manage to make a neat looking walking pose, tell me how I did: [media]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/9435/dscf0123qe.jpg[/media] Also a small dump: [media]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/6775/dscf0127p.jpg[/media] [media]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/5351/dscf0119r.jpg[/media] [media]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/1751/dscf0133a.jpg[/media] [media]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/8403/dscf0134r.jpg[/media] [media]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/687/dscf0124bi.jpg[/media] [media]http://img860.imageshack.us/img860/5793/dscf0129a.jpg[/media] This is the most fucked up thing I have ever made: [media]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/4144/dscf0125o.jpg[/media] Sorry for all the labelling, my friends didn't quite get the first time around.

I fucking love hoodies. short photostudy [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/OXiuk.png[/IMG]

Is this thread for writing too? Because I have something I wrote that I wouldn't mind having critiqued, but it seems as though it consists mostly of pictures.

[QUOTE=Detlef;29200463]I fucking love hoodies. short photostudy [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/OXiuk.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Detlef could you do a step by step to getting to something like this? Don't mean a tutorial just take a few screenshots as you go next time and put them as a .gif. Something like that would help me tremendously, others i'm sure too.

[QUOTE=Occlusion;29200964]Detlef could you do a step by step to getting to something like this? Don't mean a tutorial just take a few screenshots as you go next time and put them as a .gif. Something like that would help me tremendously, others i'm sure too.[/QUOTE] uh yeah sure

Detlef, why do you look like your characters?

don't you mean why do my characters look like me

I hate everyone in this thread. My friends at school as well as all of my teachers always compliment any art that I create in my classes, but when I see the art posted in this thread, I realize that mine absolutely pales in comparison.

That's the secret of Art I guess :\