Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

It's better than mine At least the gif gets another frame

[img]http://i.imgur.com/eE1Yq.jpg[/img] What can a lost soul do to find its way through this dark forest? Any good tutorials/series? I am desperate as fuck.

[QUOTE=Stathis;29236018][img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/eE1Yq.jpg[/img_thumb] What can a lost soul do to find its way through this dark forest? Any good tutorials/series? I am desperate as fuck.[/QUOTE] you could. um. [url=http://www.anatomyplz.com/]This place helped me a lil bit.[/url]

[QUOTE=Stathis;29236018][img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/eE1Yq.jpg[/img_thumb] What can a lost soul do to find its way through this dark forest? Any good tutorials/series? I am desperate as fuck.[/QUOTE] oh my lord

I couldn't find a place online to buy a print of the creeper's face for me to hang up on my walls, so I decided to make a little something of my own. I'm not good with painting at all but I think it looks fine enough. [img]http://a6.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/217386_10150219857876355_594901354_9006051_6216123_n.jpg[/img]

looks nice, actually.

[QUOTE=Sir Tristan;29233247]:([/QUOTE] now you've made me sad :(

Started learning my pen tablet, little by little. Ruined her lips, because didn't save the .psd [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/g83art72.jpg[/url]

[QUOTE=Sir Tristan;29232958]i have two things i've made, please critique. im pretty ashamed of them, especially the face, which is disproportionate and crooked, it looks stupid. [media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/437089/IMG_0054.JPG[/media] [editline]17th April 2011[/editline] i hate how neither drawing has any depth, all of the sketches i've seen in this subforum are almost photo-realistic in their depth[/QUOTE] A few tips: You'll want to avoid outlining the entire opening of the eyes. It makes your drawing look like it's wearing mascara, kinda like the mayor from batman. [img]http://www.gazillionmovies.com/Actor/N/Ne/Pictures/nestor-carbonell.jpg[/img] Second, try to keep the angle between the eyes around 45 degrees. If the angle is too much, they look cross-eyed, if the line of sight for each eye is parallel, they look like, well, :downs: [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4565878/IMG_0054.JPG[/img] Lastly, don't outline the entirety of the lips, it makes it jut out too much. If you take a look at the darkest parts of the mouth, there's only a couple lines you should draw. From there on end you can shade it or heck, avoid using any outlines at all. [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4565878/Untitled-1%20%283%29.jpg[/img] my two cents.

[QUOTE=KirilloTRON;29238785]Started learning my pen tablet, little by little. Ruined her lips, because didn't save the .psd [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/g83art72.jpg[/url][/QUOTE] bananana lips

[QUOTE=KirilloTRON;29238785]Started learning my pen tablet, little by little. Ruined her lips, because didn't save the .psd [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/g83art72.jpg[/url][/QUOTE] [url]http://vocaroo.com/?media=vicgEgXO5Wum14CL0[/url] [editline]18th April 2011[/editline] this is fun [editline]18th April 2011[/editline] HER LIPS MAN!!!! the lipsss

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29241775][url]http://vocaroo.com/?media=vicgEgXO5Wum14CL0[/url] [editline]18th April 2011[/editline] this is fun [editline]18th April 2011[/editline] HER LIPS MAN!!!! the lipsss[/QUOTE] [media]http://soundcloud.com/funnycat/a-message-to-rusty[/media]

[QUOTE=lexus04;29242491][media]http://soundcloud.com/funnycat/a-message-to-rusty[/media][/QUOTE] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/lexus04.mp3[/url]

Rusty talks the exact same way he types it's amazing

uggh i cannot find a good colour for the 3rd one. [img]http://a2.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/207065_10150169505602250_515442249_6797345_4166074_n.jpg[/img][img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/19936378/wr_trio2.jpg[/img] the goldy one is too dingy and the dark green just looks pish and too "classic" any suggestions? [editline]17th April 2011[/editline] - doesn't matter, i'm going to try a really clean and pure white with metallics scheme instead -

brighten the green a little? [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2848674/btg.png[/img]

JoeyZ inspired me. [img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/107/3/6/inimene_by_shether-d3e77fs.jpg[/img] a human-like..entitiy. [img]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/107/2/0/paabulind_by_shether-d3e77t7.jpg[/img] A surrealistic peacock? The swirls are crooked, that's beacuse I tend to act on the momentum, I don't think too much in beforehand...

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29242792][url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/lexus04.mp3[/url][/QUOTE] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4608952/rustyy.mp3[/url]

[img] http://filesmelt.com/dl/practice1.jpg[/img] ccccc pls [editline]17th April 2011[/editline] sry for size

[QUOTE=lexus04;29243411][url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4608952/rustyy.mp3[/url][/QUOTE] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2848674/ahdjalkal.wav[/url]

[QUOTE=Stathis;29243497][img_thumb] http://filesmelt.com/dl/practice1.jpg[/img_thumb] ccccc pls [editline]17th April 2011[/editline] sry for size[/QUOTE] well, for a start get your proportions right here download [url=http://www.alexhays.com/loomis/Andrew%20Loomis%20-%20Drawing%20the%20Head%20and%20Hands.pdf]this book by Andrew Loomis[/url] also be confident with your strokes use long ones not tons of small ones + [url]http://www.theartofanatomy.com/phpBB3/viewforum.php?f=3&sid=573733027bd9a73da0cd7b81e544786c[/url]

[QUOTE=kevlar jens;29243801]well, for a start get your proportions right here download [url=http://www.alexhays.com/loomis/Andrew%20Loomis%20-%20Drawing%20the%20Head%20and%20Hands.pdf]this book by Andrew Loomis[/url] also be confident with your strokes use long ones not tons of small ones + [url]http://www.theartofanatomy.com/phpBB3/viewforum.php?f=3&sid=573733027bd9a73da0cd7b81e544786c[/url][/QUOTE] thanks problem is long strokes come out like my granny's hair but I will practice that [editline]17th April 2011[/editline] something I did yesterday [media]http://filesmelt.com/dl/hair6.jpg[/media]

Trying to learn some new methods for facial features [img]http://i.cubeupload.com/Q52ZBn.png[/img] [media]http://i.cubeupload.com/nbDgqy.png[/media] Still lots to learn

[QUOTE=Rusty100;29242792][url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/lexus04.mp3[/url][/QUOTE] Here you go rusty, you can have autotune and echo effects. [media]http://soundcloud.com/climbeta/autorusty[/media]

[QUOTE=wewt!;29245021]Trying to learn some new methods for facial features [img_thumb]http://i.cubeupload.com/Q52ZBn.png[/img_thumb] [media]http://i.cubeupload.com/nbDgqy.png[/media] Still lots to learn[/QUOTE] detlef is gonna rape you for that

[QUOTE=lexus04;29246089]detlef is gonna rape you for that[/QUOTE] why? before when I didn't draw frames beforehand I made more errors

[QUOTE=LufOo;29245739]Here you go rusty, you can have autotune and echo effects. [media]http://soundcloud.com/climbeta/autorusty[/media][/QUOTE] i can barely even hear my voice

[QUOTE=wewt!;29246343]why? before when I didn't draw frames beforehand I made more errors[/QUOTE] Your errors are low opacity brushes. don't. use. them.

[QUOTE=Detlef;29248368]Your errors are low opacity brushes. don't. use. them.[/QUOTE] Oh ok, I can do that :v: It's just super easy to make it low opacity instead of changing the colour shade like I do in MSP Before I read that though: [img]http://i.cubeupload.com/oqnnta.png[/img]

come on