Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition>
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At least it's not sadistic elves.
[QUOTE=Rubs10;27802955]At least it's not sadistic elves.[/QUOTE]
It's ok I'm not into elves.
Just catgirls :v:
That's not where assholes are, and right now she would have a camel toe as it seems a bit far forward.
[QUOTE=babyarm-bat;27803869]That's not where assholes are, and right now she would have a camel toe as it seems a bit far forward.[/QUOTE]
Do you think it's too far back or too far foward? The smaller circle is the anus.
nsfw, reference
[media]http://www.model-archive.com/met-art/dasha/serenity/metart-dasha-13.jpg[/media]
pretty sure you can figure out where the orifices are supposed to be
[QUOTE=slayer20;27804444]Do you think it's too far back or too far foward? The smaller circle is the anus.[/QUOTE]
This feels so awkward, but yes her vagina needs to seem a bit farther back, maybe extend the line you have already separating the lips a few millimeters or something, ass for the anus i'm not sure anymore
[editline]1st February 2011[/editline]
[B]as[/B] for the anus
tbh right now it looks like the front side with weird circular tumors
Hey
it'sa poem
well, lyrics I guess
whatchall think?
Where are your creeping doubts?
Where do your fantasies play out?
Where do I fit in your heart?
What makes your smile start?
When do you dream if you dream at all?
How often do you look before your fall?
You're keeping it all inside of your head
And I don't have the right words to ask you
So I write it down, sing it out instead.
I hear it beating violently
I try to enter silently
But I know you'll always catch me,
You've got it guarded thoroughly.
I can tell by your smile that you mean what you say.
I see it in your eyes, when we kiss, when we play.
The warmth, the stars, sweet smelling summer nights
I can't see you down here but you're stunning in flight
Your touch lingers from when you held me so damn tight...
I dream of life ten years from now
When life has the usuals and stabilities
Our home full of light with open windows,
purple curtains and pillows
me baking my cupcakes, you playing with the dogs
Where's the ending?
A victorious celebration of happiness,
what people are losing for whatever is right
Your free will drew me to you in the first place.
Please, never change.
But there's still so much that I don't know.
I know my way around your heart, but I'm still in the dark.
I'm navigating with my instinct and sensitivity.
I can't find your center.
You're always two steps ahead and I can never catch up;
where are you going?
Let me dive into subconscious, find your dreams.
I promise you can trust me. I don't want to hurt you.
Your free will dream me to you in the first place.
Please, never change.
Let me dive,
let me swim,
let me explore,
let me in
I feel it on your skin
your love still on my skin
Let's both be butterflies;
come out of your crystal shell.
There's moons and suns we haven't seen.
Together we can feel the warmth,
we can see the shine,
fly with me, I'll be your queen, be my king.
Where are your creeping doubts?
Where do your fantasies play out?
Where do I fit in your heart?
What makes your smile start?
When do you dream if you dream at all?
How often do you look before your fall?
You're keeping it all inside of your head
And I don't have the right words to ask you
So I write it down, sing it out instead.
I hear it beating violently
I try to enter silently
But I know you'll always catch me,
You've got it guarded thoroughly.
I can tell by your smile that you mean what you say.
I see it in your eyes, when we kiss, when we play.
The warmth, the stars, sweet smelling summer nights
I can't see you down here but you're stunning in flight
Your touch lingers from when you held me so damn tight...
[QUOTE=slayer20;27799633]hi art people I drew a butt, hope that's ok
[media]http://filesmelt.com/dl/abutt2.png[/media]
Never really tried to draw a butt before, so I did. Also tried some shading. Tell me what you think.
I mainly focused on the legs and panties (mostly the panties :3). I didn't really attempt shading the shirt. But any constructive criticism is accepted.
Also, my hand hurts now. From drawing, that is.[/QUOTE]
holy shit i just came like 46 times you should be a professional 10/10
[editline]2nd February 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=Barnhouse;27800234]It's just weird to think people sit at home alone and attempt to draw their own porn material.[/QUOTE]
It's odd when that's [I]all[/I] that they draw. And then it's even more odd when they start doing so at work, and then everything they make is [I]about[/I] porn.
For example,
[img]http://www.firingsquad.com/games/final_fantasy_x-2_preview/images/04.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=slayer20;27799868]Go on...
Edit:
But really, I know this isn't some god-like art I'm presenting here that most people tend to post, but I don't feel like this deserves a thread and I honestly would like to improve.[/QUOTE]
your butt has weird anatomy
Quick guys I Need to come up with a labelling system for my Portfolio.
Here's what I've got now. Really not feeling it though.
[img]http://localhostr.com/files/16yDJuc/capture.png[/img]
I think the text shouldn't be at an angle.
[img]http://localhostr.com/files/MJoFSWn/capture.png[/img]
Was playing around with it level earlier. Leaves the page number kinda floating around though.
[editline]2nd February 2011[/editline]
Also it wouldn't work as well with some of the other longer project titles.
The bold text shouldn't be in the middle of the curves. And try to integrate the 1 into it somehow.
Another quickie in a different format. The one above will be ~A5 and this will be almost the length of an A4 sheet of paper.
[img]http://localhostr.com/files/1gcFQe1/capture.png[/img]
Looks much better, but the circles around the 1 have quite obvious flat edges; make it smoother.
[QUOTE=Greeneyes;27815077]Looks much better, but the circles around the 1 have quite obvious flat edges; make it smoother.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, noticed that. Goddamn contractions do that most of the time. Will manually ring it off.
[QUOTE=roflcakes;27815062]Another quickie in a different format. The one above will be ~A5 and this will be almost the length of an A4 sheet of paper.
[img_thumb]http://localhostr.com/files/1gcFQe1/capture.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
this one looks loads better
[QUOTE=Talkbox;27821220][img_thumb]http://a6.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs885.ash1/179334_1573706106160_1340767517_31310589_7517945_n.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
The middle guy creeps me out.
[img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/033/4/7/redscale_by_mrproudfoot-d38n8ld.jpg[/img]
Probably isn't very good compared to... anything really.
[QUOTE=Mystery Penguin;27821272]The middle guy creeps me out.[/QUOTE]
lol why, theyre all girls btw
Arm study:
[img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/034/e/5/arm_study_by_chestymcgee-d38p886.jpg[/img]
The hand is fucking terrible and too small, but oh well that hand study I did a couple of weeks ago was okay.
Big beginners mistake is to draw the hand too small.
wtf everyone does it
[editline]3rd February 2011[/editline]
I mean you have your hand right in front of you when drawing. Study it
sos :smith:
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;27833326]Bat-wolf-rat-[b]smoker[/b]-monster.
I love it.[/QUOTE]
I fixed that for you.
[QUOTE=Detlef;27833567]Big beginners mistake is to draw the hand too small.
wtf everyone does it
[editline]3rd February 2011[/editline]
I mean you have your hand right in front of you when drawing. Study it[/QUOTE]
well dude, not that im trying to be against you for the sake of being against things.
you cant really set a standard for proportions like that.
Even though he admitted himself that the hand is smaller than intentioned, some people are just genetically dispositioned to have small hands.
..... if you are trying to teach yourself anatomy you have to study perfect proportioned bodies
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