Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

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[QUOTE=red_pharoah;28110665]:saddowns:[/QUOTE] Ey man, not everyone get critique. Or maybe it's a good thing, means that your art ain't that shitty. Or it means that it's too boring to even bother.

It's just because I know I need to improve, and in order to improve I need advice (AKA critique) and this is the only place I know that can give me some proper C&C. Maybe I'll post attempts at stuff that I can't draw (i.e. the pelvic bone) and actually learn how to draw them.

Don't even know what you posted. I can give some critique for you probably in the future, since I live here

[QUOTE=Greeneyes;28105925]Engineering class? Boy, that ain't engineering.[/QUOTE] its made of wood.

[QUOTE=OrionChronicles;28112352]its made of wood.[/QUOTE] No, look up a definition of engineering. What you're doing is art... DT at the most.

hahaha I'm going though my old sketches from about 1-2 years back there are thousands of them, all anime crap but dayum, it's hilarious how much one can improve by dropping anime style.

[QUOTE=Detlef;28112529]hahaha I'm going though my old sketches from about 1-2 years back there are thousands of them, all anime crap but dayum, it's hilarious how much one can improve by dropping anime style.[/QUOTE] Is it better to avoid it from the start?

[QUOTE=BipolarPanda;28112569]Is it better to avoid it from the start?[/QUOTE] Fuck yeah

drop anime style for a while even if you want to do anime style. Knowing more proper anatomy helps you make better stylized decisions when going back.

[QUOTE=daijitsu;28113915]drop anime style for a while even if you want to do anime style. Knowing more proper anatomy helps you make better stylized decisions when going back.[/QUOTE] That ain't directed to me is it?

just in general, it's a good idea to study proper anatomy, shading, etc if you're serious about your art, nomatter what the style you want. Knowing proper anatomy and artistic techniques helps to make anime artists much better and more uniquely stylized than someone who just copied anime style from the start.

I hate anime [editline]17th February 2011[/editline] But yeah with a foundation of good anatomy studies plus realism it can be done well.

[QUOTE=Detlef;28114039]I hate anime [editline]17th February 2011[/editline] But yeah with a fundation of good anatomy studies plus realism it can be done well.[/QUOTE] Sadly, no one told Swhittingstall this before he started posting here. [sp]Not that he would have listened, anyway.[/sp] [QUOTE=Detlef;28114039]fundation[/QUOTE] Because with ART, it's [i]fun[/i]dation, not [i]foun[/i]dation. I'm going to start using this world, whether or not it was a typo. Also, I'd love to have an avatar of the dog's face in your most recent panel. I'd crop it out myself, but the white exclamation bubble would make it look bad.

[QUOTE=Mystery Penguin;28114243]Sadly, no one told Swhittingstall this before he started posting here. [sp]Not that he would have listened, anyway.[/sp] Because with ART, it's [i]fun[/i]dation, not [i]foun[/i]dation. I'm going to start using this world, whether or not it was a typo. Also, I'd love to have an avatar of the dog's face in your most recent panel. I'd crop it out myself, but the white exclamation bubble would make it look bad.[/QUOTE] My english skills are off. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/9rqMl.png[/IMG] resize it however you want Also armthing [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/TNx5H.png[/IMG] Because I like drawing shirtless guys

Give my cat thing a face

[QUOTE=Detlef;28114547]My english skills are off. [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/9rqMl.png[/img_thumb] resize it however you want[/QUOTE] Oh god, I love you so much.

sup creativity corner, first post here [img_thumb]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4318/hand001.jpg[/img_thumb] giant picture alert this is actually my first time shading, please give criticism. i used pencil for the arm, and pen for the hairs

[QUOTE=Shortyish;28117416]sup creativity corner, first post here [img_thumb]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4318/hand001.jpg[/img_thumb] giant picture alert this is actually my first time shading, please give criticism. i used pencil for the arm, and pen for the hairs[/QUOTE] No one holds their fist that loosely when punching. The inner fingers are also way too small, and the arm is just a long tube. The entire hand is also very small compared to the arm.

[QUOTE=Shortyish;28117416]sup creativity corner, first post here [img_thumb]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4318/hand001.jpg[/img_thumb] giant picture alert this is actually my first time shading, please give criticism. i used pencil for the arm, and pen for the hairs[/QUOTE] I looks.. Phallic

[QUOTE=Shortyish;28117416]sup creativity corner, first post here [img_thumb]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4318/hand001.jpg[/img_thumb] giant picture alert this is actually my first time shading, please give criticism. i used pencil for the arm, and pen for the hairs[/QUOTE] looks like a monkey's arm

Was happy for my Spring Break (Reading Week) [URL=http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/577/springbreak.png/][IMG]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/2919/springbreak.png[/IMG][/URL]

[media]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/046/9/3/expressions_by_lfrostl-d39n757.png[/media] [media]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/046/1/a/frank_is_in_it_by_lfrostl-d39n6ee.png[/media] [media]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/046/1/e/face__s_2_by_lfrostl-d39n666.png[/media] Since nobody even looked at my stuff the first time :saddowns: here it is again. Looking for some constructive criticism please.

Good stuff in my opinion, I like the style you are developing. Relaxed but stylish. Can't think of too much constructive things unfortunately. Looking over a second time, still nothing jumps out at me that warrants much criticism. Sorry :(

for the first one: why are his eyes closed if he's smug.

Um. I guess thats just the way I drew him. No real reason.

[QUOTE=0frost;28119768]Um. I guess thats just the way I drew him. No real reason.[/QUOTE] otherwise, they're pretty cool. Can't really say anything about them.

This is odd. When ever I show my stuff to my friends they always got something to say, usually bad to. Oh and thank you Here is my tablet stuff which still sucks for the most part. Some constructive criticism if you will. [media]http://th00.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/046/e/9/me_with_long_hair_by_lfrostl-d39nnv5.png[/media] [media]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/046/f/0/haunter_by_lfrostl-d39noco.png[/media]

[IMG]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/1654/fastf.png[/IMG] My reaction to the running fast glitch in Minecraft

I failed to emulate Joe Shuster's style [img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/048/8/a/i_can__t_draw_like_joe_shuster_by_tetromino-d39sjyn.png[/img] I started with the face and ended up making a concept art wallpaper of something I don't even know [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/0qfGa.png[/IMG]