Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

[QUOTE=Shortyish;28134189]feel free to buy me more paper if it bothers you so much[/QUOTE] Don't draw on lined paper

[QUOTE=Fiskepudding;28134238]That doesn't even make sense[/QUOTE] Maybe to one who isn't enlightened

[QUOTE=BipolarPanda;28134277]Maybe to one who isn't enlightened[/QUOTE] That is just bullshit. I hope you're trolling.

[QUOTE=Fiskepudding;28134326]That is just bullshit. I hope you're trolling.[/QUOTE] Fine, I'll quit , but whatever I was going to make up might have been funny/interesting.

[QUOTE=St33m;28133587][img_thumb]http://www.filedump.net/dumped/gnoll21298061940.PNG[/img_thumb] a revamp of an older piece[/QUOTE] Cool design (but looks kinda like all the othet stuff you post) The hand holding the pump of the gun doesn't look right at all, and the whole piece lacks value so it looks flat. Might I suggest that you try another painting techinque? not to replace the one you are using but to maybe try out something different, now all your pieces are almost blending together.

[img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/042/d/8/btuth_yoreki_by_mrproudfoot-d39c6v3.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=Fiskepudding;28134003]But that person know how how to use it. Noobs don't.[/QUOTE] That's like saying "Don't draw because you are noob at drawing.". just like learning how to draw you can also LEARN how to use the burn/dodge tool.

[QUOTE=Roundhouse;28134594]That's like saying "Don't draw because you are noob at drawing.". just like learning how to draw you can also LEARN how to use the burn/dodge tool.[/QUOTE] Please don't put words in my mouth.

[QUOTE=Roundhouse;28134594]That's like saying "Don't draw because you are noob at drawing.". just like learning how to draw you can also LEARN how to use the burn/dodge tool.[/QUOTE] that ain't the same bro, they have to learn the right way and in the beginning dodge and burn can be hella fun and that makes people abuse it. Experimenting with PS tools is cool but they have to be used the right way in the beginning to build up a good foundation

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[QUOTE=Roundhouse;28133867]The result in the tutorial looked pretty good to me.[/QUOTE] Not really. The colours are actually very grey, dull and impactless. A bit to do with the style, but also a lot to do with the big round flat areas of grey light. There is also ZERO texture in the face. Of course those flaws also have a bit to do with the kind of drawing the artist wanted, but it's also clearly just poor execution. And there is nothing that says you can't have silky smooth skin without texture, colours and life in it. The lightning is simply unnaturally round and flat, and it lights up in a boring and unrealistic way that gradually fades over from one light grey shade to a darker grey shade, there is no colour change, just brightness change. A shaded gradient should also have more saturation in-between the highlight and shadow which is impossible to achieve with the dodge and burn tool... If you want it to look good that is.

I'm currently pushing the limits in my ceramics class by creating a full scale violin made entirely out of clay, with the ultimate goal of making a functional instrument. (I've run a few tests to check strength of the material and such already.) It has taken me a week of measuring and re-measuring to get to this point, as simple as it looks the scroll (head stock) of a violin is far more math based than previously thought. [IMG]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/103/20110216110911.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://img511.imageshack.us/i/20110216110911.jpg/[/IMG]

Me and my friends wrote a little song about Facebook for a bit of fun [url]http://soundcloud.com/josh-gore/facebook-ft-stuart-clev-ewen[/url] It's very rough though, hope you guys like it.

[QUOTE=mapperfan;28134466][img_thumb]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/042/d/8/btuth_yoreki_by_mrproudfoot-d39c6v3.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] This is really cool man. Great colours.

[QUOTE=CheeserCrice;28132851]My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; Coral is far more red than her lips' red; If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head. I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, But no such roses see I in her cheeks; And in some perfumes is there more delight Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks. I love to hear her speak, yet well I know That music hath a far more pleasing sound; I grant I never saw a goddess go; My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground: And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare As any she belied with false compare. tell me thats worse than a crappy webcomic, I dare ya.[/QUOTE] I'm sorry that so boring I struggled to will myself to read to the end. Look, remember people are allowed their own opinions, so they can not like poems if they want. I like some poems, there are some that really inspire me form WW1, but that was just a drab generic love poem.

[QUOTE=Barnhouse;28135865]This is really cool man. Great colours.[/QUOTE] thanks bro.

a WIP tried using some new brushes [img]http://gyazo.com/5e32829997ae84c5a63200911be448ca.png[/img]

[QUOTE=Greeneyes;28136025]I'm sorry that so boring I struggled to will myself to read to the end. Look, remember people are allowed their own opinions, so they can not like poems if they want. I like some poems, there are some that really inspire me form WW1, but that was just a drab generic love poem.[/QUOTE] I don't think you can really say Sonnet 130 is your generic love poem... sounds like you didn't actually read it.

Here's a face thing. [img]http://db.tt/J3riNSb[/img]

[QUOTE=theLazyLion;28139356][img_thumb]http://db.tt/J3riNSb[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Facepunch needs a "creepy" rating Or it just needs a "I'm not used to very sketchy digital drawings" rating

Do you add noise to your drawings True? [editline]18th February 2011[/editline] sorry I mean Lazy

[QUOTE=onox37;28140803]Do you add noise to your drawings True? [editline]18th February 2011[/editline] sorry I mean Lazy[/QUOTE] Sometimes when I feel it fits the mood.

[QUOTE=theLazyLion;28139356]Here's a face thing. [img_thumb]http://db.tt/J3riNSb[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] [img]http://i718.photobucket.com/albums/ww190/VR1/gman-smiling.jpg[/img]

I think he's saying that it can be Gman's wife. [editline]19th February 2011[/editline] you know.. both have awkward eye colours?

the point is they have the same colored eyes it's hard to get across in a gray scale image, but it was either a good reaction or a color image, and i know where my principles are

A project me and my friends been working on for a few days, we tried very hard to mimic the third inception trailer word for word and scene by scene, and we almost did it. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3rm3suVydQ[/media]

[QUOTE=Robbobin;28138942]I don't think you can really say Sonnet 130 is your generic love poem... sounds like you didn't actually read it.[/QUOTE] The point I was making was that it's up to people opinions. Clearly that poem is meant to be significant in the world of poetry, but I found it boring; an opinion. In Flanders Fields by Lieutenant Colonel John McCrae I found to be a good poem because it was touching and inspiring; an opinion.

[QUOTE=Robbobin;28138942]I don't think you can really say Sonnet 130 is your generic love poem... sounds like you didn't actually read it.[/QUOTE] Lol the whole point of it is the inversion of the typical generic love poem :rolleyes:

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;28146104]Lol the whole point of it is the inversion of the typical generic love poem :rolleyes:[/QUOTE] yeah. so not a typical generic love poem. :rolleyes: oH wait you were agreeing with me. ignore that sarcasm :buddy:

[QUOTE=Joschach;28145109]A project me and my friends been working on for a few days, we tried very hard to mimic the third inception trailer word for word and scene by scene, and we almost did it. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3rm3suVydQ[/media][/QUOTE] Looks really good, but it needs a lot of work on the sounddesign. The voices seems to get cut right after they said something wich sounds really unproffesional. And you should work more on the enviroment sounds. I suggest you go buy a better mic, and start working more on the sound. Becouse the sounddesign is one of the places most people fail, when making movies. Almost forgot. The editing and filming looks really nice.