Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

[img]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/050/3/3/and_the_dergon_is_____me_by_msfatty-d39w5gg.png[/img] Boredom + Computer = Art

[img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8135/screenshotty1.png[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/5544/screenshotty2.png[/img] The platform shooter I'm working on that I posted about once before. I'm a having hard time finding the inspiration to work on it though because I posted a very early playable version but only got one response so I feel like nobody would be interested even if I did finish it :smith:

[QUOTE=Fatfatfatty;28148770][img_thumb]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/050/3/3/and_the_dergon_is_____me_by_msfatty-d39w5gg.png[/img_thumb] Boredom + Computer = Art[/QUOTE] leave that shit in the fucking dragon thread

Shameless trace of a picture of Zoey done in Illustrator for practice. Not done yet, want to completely redo the hair and add some more shades to the jacket. [img]http://cl.ly/1O431T2N1k2l3t2K3g1E/Screen_shot_2011-02-19_at_7.03.02_PM.png[/img]

the shadow makes it looks like she has a faint stubble

Yeah, I sat for ages trying to get it look right but I gave up on it. I'll have to go back to it later. [editline]19th February 2011[/editline] [img]http://cl.ly/3w22233V3u3O3I151S3P/Screen_shot_2011-02-19_at_7.23.23_PM.png[/img] A bit better, I think.

[QUOTE=Meller Yeller;28149558][img_thumb]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8135/screenshotty1.png[/img_thumb] [img_thumb]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/5544/screenshotty2.png[/img_thumb] The platform shooter I'm working on that I posted about once before. I'm a having hard time finding the inspiration to work on it though because I posted a very early playable version but only got one response so I feel like nobody would be interested even if I did finish it :smith:[/QUOTE] You should get a thread going asking for an artist, include all the necessary (and unnecessary) information and a payment sheet. Sometimes I dabble in other programs than MS Paint, such as the grafitti on facebook: [img]http://s3.amazonaws.com/graffiti/UORTf_UZE2M_580x425.png[/img] [img]http://s3.amazonaws.com/graffiti/imkqklseeZY_580x270.png[/img] The ears turned out so bad on this one, something I really need to work on. (And proper human anatomy, the face is still a bit too wide and not really placed all facial features where they should be, those kind of things).

[QUOTE=Gregah;28156011] [img_thumb]http://s3.amazonaws.com/graffiti/imkqklseeZY_580x270.png[/img_thumb] The ears turned out so bad on this one, something I really need to work on. (And proper human anatomy, the face is still a bit too wide and not really placed all facial features where they should be, those kind of things).[/QUOTE] Oh god

try this, it's pretty cool [url]http://muro.deviantart.com/[/url]

[QUOTE=Detlef;28156071]Oh god[/QUOTE] It's a picture that is going to haunt me for the rest of my life.

What are you guys talking about? it's a perfectly normal guy. [sp]At least where I live[/sp]

My first animated gif in photoshop. It was a lot more difficult than I expected (as everything art related usually is for me). [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/TIMLOCHWOODSTRIFE.gif[/img] Also I made this [img]http://meta.filesmelt.com/downloader.php?file=smoothskin_copy.png[/img]

Made a new avatar from a drawing of a warforged to reflect how much of a D&D nerd I'm becoming. Really didn't do too much besides recolor the eyes from green to red, make the background transparent, and resize. I like it, though. [editline]19th February 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=theLazyLion;28139356]Here's a face thing. [img_thumb]http://db.tt/J3riNSb[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Oh shit, reminds me of A Scanner Darkly.

I didn't have much drive to draw, still I wanted to draw something so this is the outcome..One of my nameless characters..A demigod/hero. [img]http://th04.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/050/f/4/roll_action_by_shether-d39xpgw.jpg[/img]

[IMG]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/3843/greenbeastly.png[/IMG] First try at using Gimp for art in at least a year... Much better than my earlier stuff still somehow. I feel like I may have picked up some good habits from reading this thread.

Drop this shit here to get C&C Link cause I took pictures with my camera [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/DSCF0836.JPG[/url] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/DSCF0830.JPG[/url] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/DSCF0832.JPG[/url] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/DSCF0832.JPG[/url] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/DSCF0833.JPG[/url] [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14329594/DSCF0829.JPG[/url] yes I took them on my bed shoot me. also the quality does no justice to the shading.

[Media]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Image_20.jpg[/Media] Huge scan, media tagged for size. All done in pen, no reference this time around, no pre-sketch. Why did I do all this (wrong from a general stand point)? Because I wanted to see how it came out from my mind.

[IMG]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7177/monochromaticmonster.png[/IMG] Another one of me experimenting. I think it's really good for practically no experience with this kind of medium.

[QUOTE=MindMuncher;28161646][img_thumb]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7177/monochromaticmonster.png[/img_thumb] Another one of me experimenting. I think it's really good for practically no experience with this kind of medium.[/QUOTE] Reminds me somewhat of a shy-guy

[QUOTE=EmRA;28157868] [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/TIMLOCHWOODSTRIFE.gif[/img_thumb] [/QUOTE] Good for a first try, photoshop is not the best to animate in of course. Although simply 'moving' (motion tweening) the body parts is a perfectly fine method of animation, on its own the divides between the different animated pieces are very obvious and smoothness is often lost. Try combining motion tweening with frame-by-frame animation (e.g. stomach heaving, fists clenching and a 3D effect on the hat). It'll make it look 100% better and more professional. [editline]20th February 2011[/editline] also the way both legs move apart doesn't look right, try moving one or bending the knees with frame by frame.

[QUOTE=Ac!dL3ak;28161697]Reminds me somewhat of a shy-guy[/QUOTE] Reminded me of Thomas the train.

Thomas the tank engine. Silly! :buddy:

Need to start on something else. [img]http://gyazo.com/a1ce463d284cd37939cf3c586e8cc16d.png[/img]

Got bored; quickly animated a gif from killzone 3. Helps get a feel for body and camera movement. [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2aaloau.jpg[/IMG]

that's kinda cool

I'd go as far and say it's really cool, I love rough sketches like those.

Doodled a bit with a pen at work yesterday. [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3655193/Drodle.jpg[/img]

I always come to this section to post something I draw and instantly feel like giving up and shooting myself from seeing what are other people here are accomplishing just "by the way". :frown: [IMG]http://www.sinus.cz/%7Emilan/xan_shaded.gif[/IMG] Used this as loose reference. [img_thumb]http://www.ic-gallery.com/albums/userpics/Xan-x.JPG[/img_thumb] Drawn using mouse in Gimp. Took me few fucking hours to draw this thing. I feel like I will never be able to draw anything properly.

[QUOTE=Awesomecaek;28173143] I feel like I will never be able to draw anything properly.[/QUOTE] Well you won't if you give up now. Just stop trying to draw using a computer for now and go practice on some paper, it'll help you improve and release your full potential.

Outcome was for me always much worse on paper. I guess I have problems with fine motor skill of the fingers and the mouse somehow works better. I know I must not quit, I keep drawing, but I feel like I am just completely missing something.