Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition>

[Fatfatfatty]

[QUOTE=Occlusion;28211071][B]Terrible [/B]Squad :smug:

But yeah the proportions are pretty off and the light from the eyes/gun doesn't seem to do anything glow wise. Also the muzzle flash is starting before the end of the barrel, how does that work?

Not trying to be mean, just constructive critisism.[/QUOTE]

Thanks mate, I never really draw humans in paint.net, but I try to improve, thanks for the guidance.

[T.F.W.O.]

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/20799748/gfy.gif[/img]

I am learning Flash.

[BipolarPanda]

good start

[Greeneyes]

[QUOTE=T.F.W.O.;28215228][img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/20799748/gfy.gif[/img_thumb]

I am learning Flash.[/QUOTE]

Oh god! Just motion tween it!

[red_pharoah]

Way to completely ignore my post.

[editline]22nd February 2011[/editline]

again.

[Greeneyes]

Your picture won't load for me so i can't CC.

[jenny7332]

There's not really all that much to say, they're not good enough or bad enough to
kick up a fuss.

Anatomy on the first one is still and awkward looking. I think you should get a full
tonal range worked into your drawings before you start simplifying it to get a
knowledge on what shadows go where and which are essential and which aren't.

The second image isn't working for me.

[red_pharoah]

[QUOTE=jenny7332;28216337]There's not really all that much to say, they're not good enough or bad enough to
kick up a fuss.

Anatomy on the first one is still and awkward looking. I think you should get a full
tonal range worked into your drawings before you start simplifying it to get a
knowledge on what shadows go where and which are essential and which aren't.
[/QUOTE]

Now here's something useful, thanks

I didn't pay much attention to the anatomy on purpose since I was mainly experimenting with this shading technique

[quote] full
tonal range [/quote] I have no idea what that means, unless you are referring to the shadows?

[quote]
The second image isn't working for me.[/quote]
That's it no more imageshack for me.

[editline]23rd February 2011[/editline]

uh-oh, pageking, >DEPLOY EMERGENCY CONTENT

[img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/7254/punchdatspah.jpg[/img]

[Fiskepudding]

[QUOTE=red_pharoah;28216205]Way to completely ignore my post.

[editline]22nd February 2011[/editline]

again.[/QUOTE]

2nd image isn't working now, but when it did, I noticed that the anklebones were waay too short.

Also, if you're really trying, don't draw on lined paper.

[SweetSwifter]

[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/np5g9i.jpg[/IMG]

[jenny7332]

[QUOTE=red_pharoah;28216627]Now here's something useful, thanks

I didn't pay much attention to the anatomy on purpose since I was mainly experimenting with this shading technique

I have no idea what that means, unless you are referring to the shadows?

That's it no more imageshack for me.

[editline]23rd February 2011[/editline]

uh-oh, pageking, >DEPLOY EMERGENCY CONTENT

[img_thumb]http://1.1.1.2/bmi/img844.imageshack.us/img844/7254/punchdatspah.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]

[img]http://www.photographyicon.com/photos/63.gif[/img]
That's a tonal range.

[red_pharoah]

Ah, thought so.

[Gregah]

[QUOTE=red_pharoah;28216627]
[img_thumb]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/7254/punchdatspah.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]

Did you ignore anatomy on purpose on this picture too?

[lucky]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/RpFVs.png[/img]

Flavah on the 3rd.

[red_pharoah]

[QUOTE=Gregah;28217640]Did you ignore anatomy on purpose on this picture too?[/QUOTE]

As I said, next time I'll either use another host or register.

[T.F.W.O.]

[i]
soft spot so sodden
sudden surprise
Serotonin supply
so sucked out and dry
[/i]

[Stathis]

It seems I have a great difficulty drawing simple shapes :(
Any help? I know I have to practice I just thought with you guys being awesome and stuff if you could like you know show me the way.

[Yur|ko]

[QUOTE=lucky;28224755][img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/RpFVs.png[/img_thumb]

Flavah on the 3rd.[/QUOTE]
ahwhw snap

[jenny7332]

[QUOTE=Stathis;28229238]It seems I have a great difficulty drawing simple shapes :(
Any help? I know I have to practice I just thought with you guys being awesome and stuff if you could like you know show me the way.[/QUOTE]

Break them down into simpler shapes?

How simple are you talking?

[Stathis]

[QUOTE=jenny7332;28232571]Break them down into simpler shapes?

How simple are you talking?[/QUOTE]
Like an egg or even a circle, even my lines are like awful. And no matter how much i practice I don't really see a difference.

[jenny7332]

How bad? Do you have an example?

[Ehanced_AI]

So I was told to post this here to get help with various stuff even though i didn't really want to.
large

[media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8702336/anatomy.png[/media]

spent like 5 minutes looking at the submit reply button.

[Back_Slash]

lacks neck there on the woman bro

[Cuon Alpinus]

[QUOTE=Ehanced_AI;28242491]So I was told to post this here to get help with various stuff even though i didn't really want to.
large

[media]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8702336/anatomy.png[/media]

spent like 5 minutes looking at the submit reply button.[/QUOTE]
Legs on the top-left man are way too short.

[Mr. Scorpio]

[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/1566/meessinround.jpg[/img]

for some reason uploading it turned it blue

fuck if i know

[Viper202]

Looks like a robotic Mr. Freeze.

"Ice to meet you"

[Greeneyes]

Test art for an I-phone game:

[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/wmy6f.png[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/260aljt.png[/IMG]

[LufOo]

[QUOTE=Mr. Scorpio;28245070][img_thumb]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/1566/meessinround.jpg[/img_thumb]

for some reason uploading it turned it blue

fuck if i know[/QUOTE]

Thats lookin really awesome, try getting some more metallic feel into the material. Now it looks kinda matte. Make it shine bit more. But then again, i do not know if that is you intentions. But I think it would look cool if it looked more metallic. :)

[MindMuncher]

[QUOTE=Mr. Scorpio;28245070][img_thumb]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/1566/meessinround.jpg[/img_thumb]

for some reason uploading it turned it blue

fuck if i know[/QUOTE]

Looks similar to some stuff I've drawn... I'd like to see some more stuff by you!

[TheSmartass]

I've started work on a intrinsically detailed/zombie looking alternative to a Minecraft creeper made in the form of a nifty little drawing. I think it looks pretty good for what I got so far;
[img]http://i.cubeupload.com/cCufGk.png[/img]

He kind of looks like a Rabid Beaver, doesn't he?

[b]Things to do:[/b]

I want to do something more interesting with the eyes.

I might try and fix up his mouth a little bit, depending on whether I change my mind and decide it no longer needs to be changed.

I also need to add some feet. (How else can the creepy looking blighter walk over to places and destroy hours worth of it's block-related labour?)

After working on this for a while, I'm now kinda gearing toward the idea that I might add him into some bigger minecraft related drawing, but I'll have to finish this little sketch first and see how I feel after I'm done. I'm funny with my drawings like that.

-Please C&C, want to improve.