Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition>
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I don't see how the face works. What's the dark spot in the middle? Nose, mouth? How does it connect to the teeth? It lacks any kind of anatomy.
I need your opinions on how this display unit looks, it's for a yearbook and it will be 2 pages big -this is the left page- I need to know if this looks good enough for me to start putting photos on it
[media]http://f.cl.ly/items/3u0G0N0r1d2r2e1e243e/Screen%20shot%202011-02-24%20at%205.48.00%20PM.png[/media]
It needs more contrast, like add some shadows underneath the shelves, make the background darker and the shelves lighter at the top to make them stand out more.
The perspective of the indented text seems different to that of the actual shelving unit. We're looking down on the shelves but it seems like we're viewing the letters from straight ahead.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;28253738]The perspective of the indented text seems different to that of the actual shelving unit. We're looking down on the shelves but it seems like we're viewing the letters from straight ahead.[/QUOTE]
Nope. We're looking straight at the shelf as if we were in the exact middle of it, even though it's not centered horizontally nor vertically, we're looking down on the shelf plates and we look straight at the text even though it's further down. The bottom part of the shelf that the text is put on is also made as if we look straight at it causing a fight with the shelf itself that also says that we're looking straight at it. Which is obviously, impossible.
First attempt at some actual "art" with photoshop
[IMG]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/2990/slimey3.png[/IMG]
What do you think?
[QUOTE=Goodthief;28252804]I need your opinions on how this display unit looks, it's for a yearbook and it will be 2 pages big -this is the left page- I need to know if this looks good enough for me to start putting photos on it
[media]http://f.cl.ly/items/3u0G0N0r1d2r2e1e243e/Screen%20shot%202011-02-24%20at%205.48.00%20PM.png[/media][/QUOTE]
The shelves don't follow the perspective. See how the top and the bottom point in the opposite direction according to their vanishing point? The shelves should "fan" between those points too. As in, you're looking down to the lower shelf, straight ahead to the middle one and up to the topmost one.
For young enterprise again:
[img]http://i.cubeupload.com/nOwFq6.png[/img]
I like to see that your supporting help for heroes. My cousins in the army so I means something to see it.
[QUOTE=jenny7332;28262021]For young enterprise again:
[img_thumb]http://i.cubeupload.com/nOwFq6.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
I'd make the stuff in the background more subtle.
I like the pastel color scheme though.
By the way, that's not the order they'll be printed as :v:
I'll probably make the images a bit more transparent, they do stand out
too much.
came out HORRIBLE
[img]http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/055/4/2/portal_char__by_xephio-d3abm5l.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Goodthief;28252804]I need your opinions on how this display unit looks, it's for a yearbook and it will be 2 pages big -this is the left page- I need to know if this looks good enough for me to start putting photos on it
[media]http://f.cl.ly/items/3u0G0N0r1d2r2e1e243e/Screen%20shot%202011-02-24%20at%205.48.00%20PM.png[/media][/QUOTE]
holy cow how'd you get windows to look like that
[QUOTE=Ac!dL3ak;28267978]holy cow how'd you get windows to look like that[/QUOTE]
Go to deviantart.com and click on customization, type your os and browse
[Media]http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/5463/3dwah.png[/media]
Crappy Red/Cyan 3D picture I tried.
Reasons I think it didn't work
1) Not enough distance between focal point and background
2) Fucking GIMP not working right, so I had to use "PaintStar" which is a Pain in the Ass with layers.
3) I did it in 5 minutes.
4) I got the distance between two "cameras" wrong (I only used one, so I moved it to the position that camera 2 would be If I had two)
I would have cropped out the blue "edge" but PaintStar is a POS program I won't use again.
Now that I think about it....Who here even has a pair Red/Blue 3d glasses handy? :v:
This thread makes me wish I was good at drawing or really anything creative, I mean...I made THIS on my friends tablet when I was really fucking ripped.
[media]http://uppix.net/9/f/0/300edaf49106fced1a0f0a97bf4db.jpg[/media]
Mediatagged for NSFW.
My atrocious bullshit
[img]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/324/8/e/dump_by_bigorca107-d339w3w.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/324/e/f/pillman_by_bigorca107-d339wa7.jpg[/img]
[img]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/324/2/6/moosh_by_bigorca107-d339wj1.jpg[/img]
[img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/324/c/3/limbo_by_bigorca107-d339wm4.jpg[/img]
[b]Are your eyes melted yet?[/b]
[img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/037/8/8/yusdrrfh_by_bigorca107-d38zisl.jpg[/img]
My eyes did melt...
out of filterrape.
[QUOTE=Big Orca;28271755]My atrocious bullshit
[img_thumb]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/324/8/e/dump_by_bigorca107-d339w3w.jpg[/img_thumb]
[img_thumb]http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/324/e/f/pillman_by_bigorca107-d339wa7.jpg[/img_thumb]
[img_thumb]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/324/2/6/moosh_by_bigorca107-d339wj1.jpg[/img_thumb]
[img_thumb]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/324/c/3/limbo_by_bigorca107-d339wm4.jpg[/img_thumb]
[b]Are your eyes melted yet?[/b]
[img_thumb]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/037/8/8/yusdrrfh_by_bigorca107-d38zisl.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
I liked the second one. How did you do that?
[img]http://i42.tinypic.com/10gxkt5.jpg[/img]
Sigh... filters.
I challenge you all to use a filter and make it look artistic enough to be passed on as art.
[QUOTE=jenny7332;28240437]How bad? Do you have an example?[/QUOTE]
I can't reallylike sacn a page of cirles and eggs, I just have to say that in orded for me to draw an okay looking egg shape i had to spend something like 5 huge pages of practicing drawing eggs. I mean some other guys just like move their hand and BAM there's an egg.
[QUOTE=Big Orca;28271755]My atrocious bullshit
[img_thumb]http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/324/e/f/pillman_by_bigorca107-d339wa7.jpg[/img_thumb]
[/QUOTE]
I really like this for some strange reason.
[editline]25th February 2011[/editline]
do you have the original?
[QUOTE=k00lwhip;28276284]I challenge you all to use a filter and make it look artistic enough to be passed on as art.[/QUOTE]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/SP3bn.jpg[/img]
[editline]25th February 2011[/editline]
Just kidding, it's impossible.
[editline]25th February 2011[/editline]
Oh god what did I just make??
[editline]25th February 2011[/editline]
That's just terrible
Still trying my tablet
[img]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1298646769013396600.jpg[/img]
[editline]25th February 2011[/editline]
[img]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1298647965001803700.jpg[/img]
i'm so original
[QUOTE=Stathis;28277255]I can't reallylike sacn a page of cirles and eggs, I just have to say that in orded for me to draw an okay looking egg shape i had to spend something like 5 huge pages of practicing drawing eggs. I mean some other guys just like move their hand and BAM there's an egg.
I really like this for some strange reason.
[editline]25th February 2011[/editline]
do you have the original?[/QUOTE]
I wouldn't worry if your eggs and circles don't come out perfect, as long as they don't end up
as squares instead. Just take your time on the edges and keep looking at your model/object/whatever.
[img]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1298651029068229000.jpg[/img]
What the fuck I just draw
[QUOTE=k00lwhip;28276284]I challenge you all to use a filter and make it look artistic enough to be passed on as art.[/QUOTE]
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/5zIgK.jpg[/IMG]
I win!!!!!111!!!1
[QUOTE=Detlef;28278660][img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/5zIgK.jpg[/img_thumb]
I win!!!!!111!!!1[/QUOTE]
I see you used the find edges+invert. With a plastic wrap on top, it would have been ultimate.
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