Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

The hand on her back seems way too big, and they do look pretty flat.

[QUOTE=kaskade700;28384177]Did you use a reference picture for this or?[/QUOTE] To be honest I really don't remember.

i think this is much better [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/macaronfin.png[/img] [editline]3rd March 2011[/editline] imagine it the size of two business cards

[QUOTE=I_Forgot;28385053]The hand on her back seems way too big, and they do look pretty flat.[/QUOTE] What do you guys think I should do to make them less flat? Also, it's cartoony so the hand and wanky sizes of limbs was done on purpose :)

lol excuses. Your piece isn't nearly stylized enough to have wanky proportions

I'm writing random poems for English. Here's a verse/part that I made. The drawings you make, The innocent souls you take, I want to murder you with a motherfucking rake. Do you think he will like it?

[QUOTE=Detlef;28386710]lol excuses. Your piece isn't nearly stylized enough to have wanky proportions[/QUOTE] But I used the TF2 spy skeleton as a reference. It's not an excuse.

I wouldn't use Tf2 characters as a reference :c. jus throwin my two cents out there.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28386044]i think this is much better [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/macaronfin.png[/img_thumb] [editline]3rd March 2011[/editline] imagine it the size of two business cards[/QUOTE] I like the left side much better than the right, could you have the card printed portrait instead of the landscape with just the selection of the macaroons and then the contact info on the back of the card? I don't like the drop shadow on the red text, or the font. I think it would stand out well enough without the shadow. [editline]2nd March 2011[/editline] Or maybe have the whole card portrait? I reckon it'd look better in a linear format.

[QUOTE=Mosquito;28386894][b]But I used the TF2 spy skeleton as a reference.[/b] It's not an excuse.[/QUOTE] That looks like an excuse to me

[QUOTE=psredspy;28385953]To be honest I really don't remember.[/QUOTE] Ok, it's just that it looks very familiar to a tutorial someone once linked me :) [editline]2nd March 2011[/editline] [url]http://www.onlypencil.com/blog/tutorials/drawing-the-human-eye/[/url]

[QUOTE=Mosquito;28386894]But I used the TF2 spy skeleton as a reference. It's not an excuse.[/QUOTE] aha, no wonder it looks bad

A poster i've been working on: [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/2duzajs.png[/img] (i shamelessly stole rusty's dimensions for the border, don't sue me bro I want it to look good next to the goodbadugly poster if i'm gonna print it) Somehow the idea looked better in my head, the silhouette of the girl somehow looks weird i dunno what it is. What do you guys think.

also sossidge fingers

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28386044]i think this is much better [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/macaronfin.png[/img_thumb] [editline]3rd March 2011[/editline] imagine it the size of two business cards[/QUOTE] I was going to say that I thought your first version was messy as shit. Then you fixed it. It looks nice, but why the drop shadow if it's going to be printed on a card? it only makes sense on screen or in the middle of something to give something else an actual drop shadow. In real life you will just have some grey shit out on the edges.

[QUOTE=Detlef;28387809]aha, no wonder it looks bad[/QUOTE] Yeah well i wasn't really happy with how it looked at the end because of the mix of the weird shape of the spy and the way i drew it, but mmmh. I still like it in some way. :)

Wrote 2 more verses. You stab children in their soul, In fact, yours is dark as coal, I want to throw you into the nearest black hole. You turn childhood dreams, Into violent screams, You should be thrown into hundred Death Star beams. You get +1 respect if you guess what I'm writing about

I need some help... I made some updates to my previous drawing, from the start i knew what i wanted, a man doing some kind of energy blast from his hand... But i really don't think that i captured the motion and feeling of power that i intended. Need feedback, what i was thinking is either the actual " energy blast " should be bigger or a serious problem with the hand.. If i can't get it to look how i wanted i guess I'll just draw him punching something :-/ [IMG]http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5096/5493046690_44447991f0_z.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://gyazo.com/13bb270a4690172dae3e691d705cff5d.png[/IMG]

It's kinda nice to see someone improving their anatomy but still attempting some sort of original idea at the same time, rather than just doing boring studies.

[QUOTE=duckboy38;28390010]I need some help... I made some updates to my previous drawing, from the start i knew what i wanted, a man doing some kind of energy blast from his hand... But i really don't think that i captured the motion and feeling of power that i intended. Need feedback, what i was thinking is either the actual " energy blast " should be bigger or a serious problem with the hand.. If i can't get it to look how i wanted i guess I'll just draw him punching something :-/ [img_thumb]http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5096/5493046690_44447991f0_z.jpg[/img_thumb] [img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/13bb270a4690172dae3e691d705cff5d.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Left arm is fucked

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;28390265]Left arm is fucked[/QUOTE] what I'm saying is.. what exactly do you think i should do to improve it? should i make the shoulder larger?

The shoulder is out of place.

[QUOTE=Mosquito;28389034]Yeah well i wasn't really happy with how it looked at the end because of the mix of the weird shape of the spy and the way i drew it, but mmmh. I still like it in some way. :)[/QUOTE] No one will know you used spy as reference, everyone will just think you fucked up the proportions, and like other guy said it's lacking depth. Google line value and apply your newly gained knowledge.

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;28390341]No one will know you used spy as reference[/QUOTE] Actually I spotted the spy's ridiculous shoulders immediately. [editline]2nd March 2011[/editline] Then again that may have been swayed by knowing Mosquito does Garry's Mod posing.

Hehe, yeah well it would've been handy if i told that. My fault. Thanks and I will look it up.

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;28390369]Actually I spotted the spy's ridiculous shoulders immediately. [editline]2nd March 2011[/editline] Then again that may have been swayed by knowing Mosquito does Garry's Mod posing.[/QUOTE] Not everyone remembers the anatomy of characters in a shitty game.

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;28390454]Not everyone remembers the anatomy of characters in a shitty game.[/QUOTE] Um hey don't get all sweeping with me. I never implied that "everyone" will recognise the spy, I merely stated that I and I alone did... contrary to your belief that "no one" would be able to spot it.

[QUOTE=Mr_Razzums;28390454]Not everyone remembers the anatomy of characters in a shitty game.[/QUOTE] THEN GOD SAID LET THERE BE THE JOINT PHOTOGRAPHIC EXPERT GROUP. SO PEOPLE CAN USE IT AS REFERENCE, BACKGROUNDS, FUNNY PICTURES AND SHOW ART! /god.

Detlef will you please give me some feedback?

[QUOTE=duckboy38;28390644]Detlef will you please give me some feedback?[/QUOTE] Purchase "The Idiots Guide to Drawing Anatomy". I'm completely serious, I have a copy and it's an excellent book.