Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V6 <3v3ryb0dy Hypocrite Critiques Edition> - General

the specks are almost invisible

Makin a portfolio webdesign for a school project Yeah I know I'm not a concept artist, but the site won't be launched and my teachers won't care [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/ytQhi.png[/IMG] C&C Please

Makin a portfolio webdesign for a school project as well Yeah I know I'm not a 3D artist, but the site won't be launched and my teachers won't care [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/OD2GD.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/A5aDc.jpg[/IMG] C&C Please

You'll be hired in a second [editline]3rd March 2011[/editline] Look at that z brush work

looks p good. make sure that the previews on the main page really give a preview of what the piece is. Half the time people will do a close up of something they made for the preview, and you can't distinguish shit before you load the actual page. Overall I like the presentation.

background study [img]http://i.imgur.com/fVH0c.png[/img]

[QUOTE=onox37;28397735]oh hey, like my new avatar, I guess that counts as work that doesn't deserve a thread. I love illustrator[/QUOTE] The animated one that zoomed in was giving me a head-ache. I don't know why. but it was

[QUOTE=Detlef;28398826]Makin a portfolio webdesign for a school project Yeah I know I'm not a concept artist, but the site won't be launched and my teachers won't care [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/ytQhi.png[/img_thumb] C&C Please[/QUOTE] i don't like the style and i think it's arranged poorly you're definitely a drawer, not a designer [editline]3rd March 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Detlef;28399125]background study [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/fVH0c.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] an amazing drawer at that [editline]4th March 2011[/editline] you didn't even give me a chance to facebook stalk you, the second i saw you'd posted your name here and went to fb you'D SENT ME A FRIEND REQUEST SLEUTHING RUINED

[QUOTE=Detlef;28399125]background study [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/fVH0c.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] That awesome! I wish it could paint in photoshop, My landscapes are so limited in flash, and I normally get bored before I get started on the interesting animation. Just some CC, nothing important but the water reflection to the right of the 'No Stopping' sign is reflecting objects that don't seem to actually be there.

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28399231]i don't like the style and i think it's arranged poorly you're definitely a drawer, not a designer [editline]3rd March 2011[/editline] an amazing drawer at that [editline]4th March 2011[/editline] you didn't even give me a chance to facebook stalk you, the second i saw you'd posted your name here and went to fb you'D SENT ME A FRIEND REQUEST SLEUTHING RUINED[/QUOTE] I super ninjaed you. Anyway I know the design is pretty poorly placed, but I'll try to make it better on the actual site. Also thanks for kind words <3

Scrub that CC I think I get it now. When have time I'm explain.

[QUOTE=Greeneyes;28399327]That awesome! I wish it could paint in photoshop, My landscapes are so limited in flash, and I normally get bored before I get started on the interesting animation. Just some CC, nothing important but the water reflection to the right of the 'No Stopping' sign is reflecting objects that don't seem to actually be there.[/QUOTE] hah, it isn't water [url]http://i.imgur.com/faE4C.jpg[/url] Everyone thinks so....

ps detlef why didnt u tell me u were so hot [editline]4th March 2011[/editline] i feel like thats important information you withheld

Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread V7 <Rusty gets on Detlef Edition>

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Nothing new.

god damn you're posting like the roman empire here.

what does that mean

[QUOTE=Detlef;28398826]Makin a portfolio webdesign for a school project Yeah I know I'm not a concept artist, but the site won't be launched and my teachers won't care [img_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/ytQhi.png[/img_thumb] C&C Please[/QUOTE] A footer in darker brown or even black could work. About the same thickness as your horizontal banner thingy on top. I think the dividers around your bio could also be removed.

[QUOTE=PLing;28400116]A footer in darker brown or even black could work. About the same thickness as your horizontal banner thingy on top. I think the dividers around your bio could also be removed.[/QUOTE] Yeah those where not supposed to be there. ty

also i can see what u were going for with the uneven border lines around the navigation but it looks really sloppy what about something like this quick mockup: [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/detlefwebsite.png[/img]

The repetition of portfolio, contact and webcoming is pretty lame

i loved the bio across and forgot to align the heading with it shit [editline]4th March 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Derkaderk;28400493]The repetition of portfolio, contact and webcoming is pretty lame[/QUOTE] yes, they should definitely only be there once

[QUOTE=Rusty100;28400401]also i can see what u were going for with the uneven border lines around the navigation but it looks really sloppy what about something like this quick mockup: [img_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1482927/detlefwebsite.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] Hey thanks it looks better already. [QUOTE=Derkaderk;28400493]The repetition of portfolio, contact and webcoming is pretty lame[/QUOTE] Yeah the text is a mockup. Gonna rewrite. [editline] dfghjkl[/editline] Oh you mean on the pictures, it's gonna be a hover text or something we'll see

[img]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/062/a/7/the_shang_highs_by_chestymcgee-d3atbmx.jpg[/img] I'm done. Ashamed to have done orange/teal like Michael Bay... but I wanted to be true to the lighting of the room as it was when I was stood in it watching the band.

damnn Rusty you know this [editline]3rd March 2011[/editline] Ninja

You guys are really obsessing over auto-merge today.

what i know

Graphic design stuff

im so good man heres the tip blending effects rape but then turn the opacity sliders down low so people think its 'subtle' [editline]4th March 2011[/editline] oh and futura congratulations ur now a designer